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Title: Chapter 8

Greatb story!

Reviewer: aprilfool Signed [Report This]
Date: July 12 2013 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Good story.  Henry better not be an assassin to her.  I think he likes her though...she's different in a good way.  I didn't really think he was gonna be such a ho, but maybe he's ready for a change.  We'll see...I don't want her to get hurt anymore.  Her self confidence is already so low, he needs to fall for her.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 11 2013 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 8

Great story!  Hope you update soon....

Reviewer: Toya23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2013 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 8

I think Savannah is using her experience with Henry to shape him. I'm glad he's at least honest so if he says he's not ready for a relationship thats what he means. I think he genuinely likes Valerie and if he continues to treat her like he is she's going to fall hard I just hope he's there to catch her. As cliche and corny as that sounds lol it would destroy her if he breaks her heart. I can't wait to see what happens when he gets back to valerie. s/n his brother sounds just as cute!

Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 03:43 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Valarie still annoys me and she was doing so well. Why in the hell is she listening to Savannah?  That ho wants Henry back and I find her kindness to Val to be suspect. Why hasn't Henry started looking for Val?  He knows how Val is and that she shouldn't be left alone to think her negative thoughts or the thoughts of others. Henry needs to ride to rescue! Please have Val find a job soon as she needs to be away from her sperm donor as soon as possible. Fabulous!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 03:02 pm

Title: Chapter 8

This is not going to end well she is going to embarrass herself please make her stop drinking.  I like her but in almost every chapter she comes off pitiful.  I really hope Henry isn't a playrr...even if it is a nice player.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 03:00 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Great update!

Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 02:49 pm

Title: Chapter 8

I am so hooked to this story.I really hope Henry is somewhat serious about Val...don't want to see Val getting hurt.The are great together.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 09:16 am



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