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Title: Chapter 12

Poor Val she doesnt even have one supportive parent....when people say negative things its hurts but coming from a parent it can annihilate you....So props to Henry for holding back the demons

 Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 21 2014 07:07 am
Title: Chapter 12

So good, and girl he had betta been hit by Rosa Parks' bus and been in a coma for a month not to talk to her!

 Reviewer: chocachocacandyland Signed [Report This]
Date: September 25 2013 06:05 am
Title: Chapter 12

I am in love with this story. Write more please!

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Date: September 24 2013 08:20 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Sometimes in your life you want to divorce from your parents. 

 

Great chapter. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 10:24 am
Title: Chapter 12

I find my self so in love with your writing and so very frustrated with Val as a character. Much of her unhappiness is self-induced and it just really gets my goat. But I also like that I care enough about these characters to be annoyed by her inability to see her own greatness.

 Reviewer: PeppermintChocoSwirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 05:55 am
Title: Chapter 12

I really just love this story! The characters are all so different and have personality. I really just want Valerie to be happy. Her mom's not shit in my book and neither is her dad. How could you tell your child that she should of been happy that her ex who obviously didn't really care about her was the best she could do with how she was at the time...Her dad's not shit because he didn't even remember her birthday. That's not ok.I'm glad Josephine was there to be in the middle when Ella jumped in on Valerie. They really need to let her live her life judgement free. They know how much their negative words mess with her. It's not right for them to just talk to her any kind of way. I'm glad Henry called. He always seems to be there when she needs him. I wonder why they haven't talked in a month...I'm anxious lol. Love love love your writing!

 Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 04:33 am
Title: Chapter 12

Val's momma is a bitch!  She would benefit from alienating her parents as thet really don-t swems to love or care about her anyway.  They care moee about appearances than her as their daughter and human being. I don't know if I trust that Joesphine chick, that openly flirting with Henry irked me.  Ella is right Val can't handle a friends with benefits deal with Henry.  She already has deep feelings for Henry but she's in deep denial and combined with her lack of self-esteemel she is going to fall apart.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 03:48 am
Title: Chapter 12

Sometimes in your life you want to divorce from your parents. 

 

Great chapter. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 24 2013 02:05 am
Title: Chapter 12

Thank you for the update. One month hiatus on Henry and Val huh? I cannot wait to read what is up with that.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 08:24 pm
Title: Chapter 12

Damn that was a great update. Im upset they didnt talk it out and let the akwardness hang over their heads but that isnt Val's style so Im gald shes growing . F*** her moms man!!!!!! I know the feeling I want her to be happy . Im mad Henry just left her hanging . But maybe he needed to distance himself so he can reflect.. I hope so

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 06:04 pm
Title: Chapter 12

You have a way with words that is just amazing! Thank you for sharing your gift with us. I'm loving this story! I especially love the fact that he is not trying to save her or heal her. He just tries to love her. Awesome stuff!! 

 Reviewer: A_Girl_Called_T Signed [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 05:04 pm
Title: Chapter 12

I like his personality he is a charmer however she has heartache ahead :-(  On a positive note maybe not seeing him will allow her to feel better about losing weight etc. great update thanks!

 

 

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 03:09 pm
Title: Chapter 12

a month?! She may want to google his brother's website--and find herself another friend w/benefits.  a month?! 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 23 2013 04:48 am


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