I love your writing. Their story is one you feel, while you're reading it. There's so  much passion between the characters and you do a great job of having your readers feel the characters emotions. 

Thanks for sharing and I'm REALLY looking forward to more chapters. 

Take Care

I love this story. I feel bad that she has so many body issues but that's real life. Not everybody is running around flawless. Henry is so sweet and the perfect mix of fun and sexy. Great update,

I've stopped reading a couple of chapter in 'cause I was getting majorly annoyed by Valerie: it is one thing ot have a character with insecurities and all, it is another to have her whalowing in self pity over and over and over. Also, the way she behaved at work with her father was so unprofesionnal, childish and immature, it was infuriating. Then I decided to give it another go when I saw the update, and I am glad 'cause I liked how Valerie evolved. She may be finally growing up. I liked the moment she shared with Henry when they discussed their past, loved their intimate moments. About the one month hiatus, I think Val may have overlokked Henry's own insecurities, and how he felt. She was rightfully pissed he did not called her, but I am glad it did not just end up with them yelling and then nothing. She should voice what she feels. Also, did she finally find another job?

Henry better treat val right.  She deserves so much more than he's been giving her lately.  He's so hot and cold and he knows she's insecure and naive about romance, etc.  Hopefully he'll fall hard for her and they'll be happy.  He needs to prove he isn't a player though.  Please let valerie get stronger and more self-confident.  I understand her feelings and she deserves so much love.  great story, update soon please1

Oh my,  I laughed, sighed and cringed while reading this chapter.  I'm glad that you're writing Valerie stronger in this chapter.

Great update!  I think Val is healing from George's treatment of her and will be on her guard, rightfully so, with Henry.  If he starts to ignore her, she will survive.  Even with the needed editing, I think your writing is superb.