Love this story!!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed
[Report This]Date: December 20 2013 06:01 am
This is one of the best stories I ever read. Honey... That sex scene gave me chills. Seriously I have officially replaced Christiano Ronaldo in my fantasies with Henry Walker. He's a mother f-ing sex god. You have made me fall in love with him. Now ya girl Val makes me wanna smack he sometimes, she needs to realize that she deserves this...that she deserves him. I'm so happy for the both of them, finding someone that stimulates your mind and you sexually is rare. I hope it's all roses for them here on out. Awesome story and I will definitely be looking out for this completed chapter...amazing.
Reviewer: RAPTUSMIND Signed [Report This]Date: December 16 2013 11:29 am
Yes you should publish this story it's really good. At first I really wasn't sure which way the story was going but after this chapter I can see it. All I can say is please don't rush the ending.
Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]Date: December 14 2013 04:36 pm
This is a fabulous story. If you want to publish this, you definitely have a customer in me. Please do. These characters deserve an ending.
Reviewer: bella200183 Signed [Report This]Date: December 13 2013 01:01 am
I got so excited you updated...This is beautiful and if you published it I'd pay to own it for good. You're a very talented writer and you've developed each and every character (and side character) so wonderfully. I'm looking forward to what you decide to do.
Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 09:20 am
I would buy this wonderful story. I just know his friend on the phone is going to be rude to is girl bc she is not his usal type. Hopefully, she will stand up and eavedropping on the phone call gave her the ammunition to do a more than decent comeback. Henry is in love and sprung.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 09:00 am
I am truly loving this story. Beautifully written with such depth of characters in Henry and Valerie. I'll definitely buy this if you publish!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: December 12 2013 07:00 am
I love how your previews are longer than two of my chapters combined. I say publish away. Hell, I'd buy it.
Reviewer: WrittenC Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 11:17 pm
This has got to be one of my favorite stories on this site. Please update quickly!
Reviewer: xbelivex Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 09:39 pm
Girl, publish it! Seriously. This story is amazing.
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 09:03 pm
I would totally buy your book! It's super good! Don't sell your self short either! I think this is honestly one of the most well written work on the website. Well thought out, characters are relatable, just the right mix of fluff and drama, in no way over the top. I can't wait for the next part!
Reviewer: Justkillingtime21691 Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 07:13 pm
You should definitely publish this story.This is one of my favorite story on the Chamber. You are truly blessed with the gift to write....This preview has left me wanting to read more of this chapter.Plzzz update soon.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 06:45 pm
I love this story and definitely think you should publish it. The Chamber has so many talented writers. I envy everybody's talent. This story is really good. Trust me I've been watching for an update!! I hope he treats her right. She deserves love and so does he. He's made poor choices in the past with models and married women. Valerie is a real woman...someone who would love him regardless and have his back. he needs to realize this and help her understand how special she is. oh and her daddy is an ass!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 06:28 pm
Definitely publish! This story is amazing and way better than some of the ones I buy from Barnes and Noble. I can't wait to read the rest of this add! I love that Henry is so taken with her. They're so cute I love it! Valerie is even being reasonable and trusting her heart. George is something that she needs to overcome. I think she needs closure but I don't know about her standing up to him and telling him how she feels. It might make her feel worse.
Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 05:16 pm
Without question. There is no doubt in my mind that you need to publish this.
Reviewer: AP Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 03:52 pm
Yes! Most definitely publishable material! 👍a86;a039;
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 02:51 pm
How dare you not deliver a full chapter! Do you know how in love I am with this story to the point that I reread this to no end. I have so much I want to say but I have to go back to work. The overall complexities of the characters and their humanity is just amazing I love your work.
Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 02:36 pm
This story is very publishable xso please do it. I would buy this book! Val needs to get out of her head and away from her so called family. Enuff said...,
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 02:07 pm
Don't publish until this is finished pleeeeeeease! I've waited so long for this story to be completed and it's only right that you finish it for those who've stuck by you the entire time.
Reviewer: MiAmourrr Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 12:45 pm
I love this story. It's different and real. Of course you should publish! I am praying that I'll be able to help a lot of talent here on the Chamber get published. There are some awesome stories being written here! Keep up the good work!
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 10:13 am
I just want to say YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!
Been waiting on the next update and now I'm like a kid waiting for Santa....
WHOOHOO!!
Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 07:50 am
I THOUGHT YOU WOULD NEVER UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY AGAIN! its awesome that you are thinking of pubishing it, but does that mean you wont finish it here?
Reviewer: whatisloveee Signed [Report This]Date: December 11 2013 07:35 am