Oh BTW, I just saw a picture of Valerie on your Tumblr...she is absolutely STUNNING!
Reviewer: Leogina Signed
[Report This]Date: January 03 2014 06:44 am
Where do I begin.....
First...I want to say that I am in looooovvvveeee with this story...Henry and Valerie are real people...I feel like I met them somewhere and connected with them on some level. I love that he doesnt bullshit her.
Second...My husband thinks something is wrong with me because I cant tell you how many times I talk about Valerie...I cry for her, I understand her, I love her but most importantly, I know her. Her insecurities remind me of myself. My weight issues were the opposite. I was always thin my whole life and felt ugly because of it. Never looking in the mirror of taking my clothes off. My husband was the Henry that saved me.
Third...Girl, I need another fix...Please update soon
xoxoxoxoxoxo
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: January 03 2014 06:39 am
Really nice. Great update.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: January 02 2014 12:31 am
ugh, her negativity is starting to make her look mentally unstable.
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 07:37 pm
She is solely allowing him to tear down the walls she has built up over her heart.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: January 01 2014 12:51 pm
2 in one week!! Whoooo hooooo! This just made my week!!
I LOVE Henry! Can he be cloned into a real, living, breathing man? Pretty please??
With that said...why do I get the feeling a bomb is about to drop that is going to obliterate my love of Henry? Like something that is absolutely going to crush Valerie's heart (and mine!).
Keep em coming though! I absolutely LOVE this story; excellent writing!!
Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 05:50 am
I love Henry but I worried about his nomadic ways.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 04:30 am
Very good! Henry is hiding a secret and I bet that is why he wanders--it is not just the job. I think Henry is starting to care, but something happen to him or someone he loved and that is why he can be friendly, loving, and warm, but can not comitt. He is bringing her out, but he is hdiing something.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 04:29 am
Awesome chapter!! 💖😊😍💖😊. 100 stars!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: December 31 2013 01:59 am
Henry is so good for Val!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 11:53 pm
This chapter was so touching. I want more!
Reviewer: xbelivex Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 10:40 pm
Well, these last two chapters have been amazing. Your writing is all encompasing. I've never been so inside the head of a character as Valerie. It does take some getting used to, but at this point she feels so familiar to me. I recognize this person, and so it's easier for me to go on this journey with her.
Henry is, dare I say it: almost perfect. I fear you have some other part of him locked up, waiting to spring on us that won't be so swoon worthy. You write him perfectly, and I almost wish we could get a chapter from his POV, so that I could know fully what he's thinking.
Anyway, all that to say I am fully invested in these characters, and cannot wait to see what you will put them through next. Apart of me wants this to continue to be blissful for Valerie, because she obviously deserves it. You made me give a damn, and when a writer does that, they have done thier job well.
Reviewer: OddBlood Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 08:12 pm
This is one of the more exciting stories on the site. Also, Valerie really needs to see a therapist about her daddy issues and the thing with her ex boyfriend.
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: December 30 2013 08:08 pm