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henry pov

 Reviewer: minxie Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 23 2016 10:04 pm
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I think you could do a chapter in Henry's POV without disrupting the flow of the story. You could do like and interlude with his POV of events up to the most recent point. I'd especially be interested in knowing what he was thinking when he first vanished and then reappeared at the MMA, seeing Valerie with Phillip.

 Reviewer: Nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: July 09 2014 01:39 am
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I think a chapter from Henry's point of view at this point in the story would be inconsistent.  So far, you've done well revealing his past through conversations and the like.  Perhaps it would be difficult to do so again, but stylistically it would be preferable to changing the point of view this late in the game. 

Showing the reader what you want to reveal about Henry through another character's experience makes a more interesting read for the reader.  You have to come up with a plausible and dynamic situation in which Henry could reveal his past.  That makes for exiting, must-read scenes. 

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2014 06:27 am
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Please, please, please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Silveronyx73 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 31 2014 01:14 am
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ok...go ahead and give us Henry's pov--he better have a good reason for treating Val this way.  She could be deathly ill or pregnant---guess she would have to drop him a line on youtube then. 

 Reviewer: Penelope52 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 28 2014 06:41 am
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Oh my gosh!!! What can I say about this story...it's amazing!!! I was going to list all my favourite parts but there's too many lol!! But I do like how Henry uses a few London slang/phrases, like Fit (I use that word a lot lol) Bird, Init and a few others lol!! Also you've described him as a total babe 😊 I like Val she's a sweetheart, but I'd like to find out how her ex treated her. 

And yes I think you should have a chapter in Henry's pov.

😊

 Reviewer: Rainbows Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 27 2014 04:28 am
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Where are you? Patiently waiting for an update......................

 Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 03:56 pm
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Yes, it would ruin the flow if you wrote a chapter in Henry's POV. 

 Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]
Date: March 08 2014 06:56 am
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I would love to know what is going on in Henry's head.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2014 01:51 am
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I am so in love with this story hope you update soon !

 Reviewer: Cat Signed [Report This]
Date: March 07 2014 02:39 am
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I kind of think it would ruin the flow of the story. I think you can do a chapter where it's Henry explaining himself , but his POV in a chapter would throw it of a little. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2014 06:31 pm
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AHHHH Love this story so much!

I think it would be interesting to see what is going through Henry's mind because I'm sick of him leaving Valerie hanging.

Add soon.

 Reviewer: LolaDrea Signed [Report This]
Date: February 21 2014 06:46 pm
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I say no POV from Henry. I'm really enjoying this story. Think you are an amazing writer, and I love the way you are telling the story now. I like being in her head and getting her thoughts.

 Reviewer: dgreen1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 02 2014 08:13 pm
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I really think that writing a side story would be a great idea.  Much better than breaking the flow in the middle of the main characters exploratory dialogue.  This would also give your readers the option to break the flow of the story and once you complete the story you can determine whether or not it would be redundant to insert the other POV or if it really does carry on the flow of your story. 

 Reviewer: MK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 10:00 am
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Personally I think it's a great idea I don't think it would take anything away from the story but add to it so to see what's going on.

 Reviewer: kvgurl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 28 2014 08:26 am
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I would love to see Henry's pov it's actually quite hard reading complex characters in only one pov. I love val, but I do get tired of just her voice and I often leave the chapters wondering what Henry is thinking. It is yiur choice over all, but I think it's a great idea!

 Reviewer: JB Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 11:16 am
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I would love to see what is going on in that boy's head! But I think it will be very interesting if you don't do his POV because I would love to see how Val reasons through his b.s. when he finally comes clean about his issues. Either way... This is a wonderful story and I am looking forward to your update! 

 Reviewer: Daddyprincess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 27 2014 01:21 am
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I would love to see a chapter in Henry's POV,they have other authors in the chamber that alternate the main characters POV and I really enjoy that. I also think for Henry it would be very interesting since he is so guarded.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 10:10 pm
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I think it would be good to get into Henry's head.  Ultimately it seems that he has the same problem that she has, he just hides his insecurities in a different way.  I don't think that telling his side will hurt the story, but will give us a bit of clarifications.  Ultimately though, it's our story and you should write it the way your muse wants you to.

 

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 08:56 pm
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I would love to read Henry's POV because I really want to know how exactly he feels about Val......He definitely likes Val but then in last chapter after he went back, he ignored her calls and texts and that is not fair to Val after everything they have gone through.So I don't think one chapter in Henry's POV will affect the story but it will definitely give an insight into his character and the reason for the way he behaves with Val.But at the end it's your choice and opinion and I will love reading whatever you choose to go with.

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 02:29 pm
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I would love to see Henry's POV...................

 Reviewer: Silveronyx73 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 09:04 am
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I say keep it as a side story I feel that it would take way from Val in all about her and I'm not trying to hear Henry's pov at the moment,period I feel that he's a selfish he wants Val only when it's Convenient for him,I know he has love for her put dude his just laying with her feelings,I'd love to hear his side but not in unguarded .But like you said it's your story ill love it either way but please let Val burn his ass,every good story doesn't always have to have a happy ending :)

 Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 08:51 am
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i dont think it would ruin the story because it would be great to know why he does what he does. it would enrich the plot.

 Reviewer: vanessa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 08:33 am
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Nope I think that providing his POV. Would give us more insight into what he's thinking . Love this story ! 

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 06:45 am
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I would actually love a chapter in Henry's POV. I've always wondered how he felt about Valery. From his eyes not hers.

 Reviewer: PearlsofWisdom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 26 2014 06:33 am


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