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Title: Chapter 19

So first let me say YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!

 

Seeing an update to this story made me drop my delicious peach milkshake...but it's ok...

 

Now.. WOW...was SO not expecting Henry to declare his feelings for Valerie like that...and I am SOOO mad that I felt sympathetic for Henry when he deserved a foot up his ass at the same time.

 

I teared up for both of them, because I know what it's like to fall for someone only to have them drop off the face of the earth for periods of time...it sucks!

 

I totally get Valerie's visceral reaction, and "sort of" get why Henry feels the need to cut people off at random times, BUT it does not excuse his behavior or the fact that he essentially is messing with a woman's emotions.  Henry is going to have to man up, and if he loves Valerie as he says he does, he is going to need to learn to let her in and maybe they can both grow together...

 

Amazing chapter, full of emotions and desires to kick Henry's ass.  Worth the wait!

Reviewer: babygirl2cute4u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 06:06 am

Title: Chapter 19

Loved it. Some of your names are mixed up. But this was worth the wait. Please don't take so long to update :)



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thank you. i made the editions thanks to your review.

Reviewer: mrmalone Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 19

Holy cannoli, wow, what a great chapter.  Back with a bang.  God, Henry is so broken that the sad part is Valerie is more together than him.  Never thought I would type that. He laid his feelings bare during this.  Chase had him coming out of his clothes like the Hulk ready to whoop that ass for touching Val.  Ahh Henry you need counseling too.  Maybe Val can give you her counselor so number.  How they are going to make it, I have no idea but can't wait to get back on this rollercoaster.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 05:16 am

Title: Chapter 19

Woah. Talk about damaged goods. How can they possibly be good for each other with this many issues?

Reviewer: Noelle Vonham Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 04:45 am

Title: Chapter 19

U got to update soon please!!!!

Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 04:32 am

Title: Chapter 19

Wow!!! So wasn't expecting Mr Walker to say that he loves Val & the big fight/confrontation that was good. And Henery has issues too, now I understand h a little better :-) Not too sure if Val going after him was good lol but I'm hoping it works out for them both x

Reviewer: Loop Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 03:23 am

Title: Chapter 19

This chapter made me want to cry.  I hope they can both get their stuff together.  She needs to work on her confidence and he needs to work on himself. Man this was a good chapter.

Reviewer: theonlinestalker Signed [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 19

Henry, had the nerve to be jealous when he was the who left her and responded to her text message. So happy to read this new chapter.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 01:53 am

Title: Chapter 19

I feel bad for Henry, I do, BUT he needs to grow the hell up and stop playing so many games. I know he does this to guard himself, but he's going too far. Val should know she cannot play toe-to-toe with Henry. While, I liked her initial thought to be strong and approach Henry like she was okay, she failed. Honestly, I am sick of Val and Henry, BUT Henry wins. I can understand where Val is coming from and Henry too a little, but he is steadily proving that like Val said, he isn't sh*t. When things start not going how he think they should he LEAVES?? Wow, that little sermon he gave before leaving the house was spot on. HE needs to stay single, because HE is the one that does ALL the LEAVING, and then tries to explain. Val went after her other half? Really? Henry is no one's other half. Yes, she is right she was stupid for following his butt. But the heart wants what the heart wants and for VAL's sake I hope they can work things out, because Henry is too damaged. Val is too with her past, but Val wants to get better. Henry wanted to really talk to Val at the party and my heart hurt a little for him, but then I thought, if he had not seen her at the party how long would it have took for him to acknowledge she was still alive. Another day, week, month, year, years? My softness left for Henry. Only when they happened to be in the same location did he finally want to explain, and hey, I think he did, but really? It took a chance meeting for him to stop being a coward and grow some balls? It looks like Val is about to either get fed yet another line if Henry is still in his pretending mode. These two. I love it though!!!

Reviewer: Anaya Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 01:08 am

Title: Chapter 19

great update

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 15 2014 12:07 am



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