I am a little worried yet intirgued by Ophelia's sceme. Worried only because she wants to have a baby and use it to make Raymond pay. But I do love the fact that even though she is phyiscaly attracted to Raymond and loves him. She knows he is no good for her and she wants to make him pay dispite her feelings. That fool needs to pay his so smuge and full of himself and thinks he can still control things. Raymonds down fall is going to be thinking Ophelia is still a naive little child. Look forward to reading about Keshia and Bennies movie date, the way he was checking her out me thinks he is attracted to her. As usual awesome chapter I just love reading story's that are out side the box.
Author's Response:
Raymond cannot be redeemed and when you dance with the devil, he changes you. You can't change him. Ophelia needs to remember that.
Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed
[Report This]Date: May 30 2013 01:04 am
OK Brenda, I know you say there is a method to your madness, but honestly, right now all I see is madness. I can kind of understand what Ophelia was saying about all the time they lost and new beginnings, but I just don't see it working. I'm going to stick with this story because I have to see how this plays out.
Thank you for the great update. Please update again soon.
Author's Response:
We have madness here. The truth is that madness begets more madness. Ophelia thinks that she can make Raymond pay. Can she? Will she be snared in her own sheme? Stay tuned. Yep. There's a lesson here.
Reviewer: SuperStar2577 Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 12:49 am
I believe in you O! Kill two birds with one stone. I believe that she wants revenge but not the kind that immediately puts her business out. No body wants to be a victim or be pitied. Let her work it out and deal out her brand of justice. Love the chapter.
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 12:20 am
Uh......I'm not liking one bit of Ophelia's plan, especially since it includes her version of a Baby Trap. I don't care if Ben had to knock her out cold and drag her to a clinic - she needs intense therapy!
Author's Response:
I agree. Ophelia is playing with fire! Stay tuned.
Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]Date: May 30 2013 12:01 am
Your Ophelia character is crazy, like in a for real crazy way.
Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 11:59 pm
Oh.My.Gawd! Qu'ai j'ai lu?! (What did I read?!)Ophelia is not thinking straight, it seems like she's suffering from Stockholm Syndrome. Hope at the end, she sees a therapist. C'est une excellente mise à jour!(This is an excellent update)!! I hope she goes with Teddy's plan, it seems more diabolitical
Author's Response:
Ophelia is determined to make Raymond pay. Will it happen? Stay tuned!
Reviewer: Aries-Care Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 11:27 pm
This is totally going to backfire. Ophelia needs help and fast.
Author's Response:
You so right. Raymond is not someone to be trifled with.
Reviewer: Nubianprincess Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 11:15 pm
My God! How could Ophelia be so stupid!
Raymond will outwit her!
Lord help her, PLEASE!
Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 11:02 pm
Ophelia is worrying me, she keeos saying that she isn't stupid but her behavior says the opposite! It Her logic makes no sense to create another as a part of a revenge plot is asinine. Ophelia is really pissing me off. Bennie is right she does need therapy and fast! There is no method to stupidity it's just stupid! Reminds me of a refrain from a Teddy Riley song, dumb, dumb, ditty!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 10:58 pm
i still don't know what ophelia is getting herself into....
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 10:47 pm
Wow! this story is getting more interesting at every update...Great Job
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 10:45 pm
Great chapter!!!! But I'm going to say it again....Raymond is a horrid piece of work! Gah, I can't believe he's like that. He needs to get what he deserves and I hope he does lol! Keep the chapters coming lady & thank you 😊
Reviewer: Loop Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 10:21 pm
Brenda; you've done it again...yet another interesting tale!
Raymond is really a piece of scum...I wonder what will come of his union with Ophelia...hopefully he doesn't get pregnant...
David needs to go...he is a real piece of work and seems to think Ophelia is his possession...I really hope she gets rid of him!
Can't wait to find out what Ophelia has up her sleeve...I know Benji is gonna ht the roof if he finds out that Ophelia slept with Raymond!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 08:17 pm
Well she better say no because that dry tone was not looking good for him... Plus that hick uh slow your roll man get his son back over there ASAP cause she is relapsing with his trifling butt!!! She loves him yes but is she in love with him I don't think so... I think that when she saw her baby it caused some feelings to surfac and she i getting stuck.
he must be a good lay cause she ain't stopping him..l up what can I say she needed the lay. But now she needs to kick him out the house.
Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 05:13 pm
You have me questioning my sanity...I can't believe that after everything he put her through I'm actually rooting for this couple...Like, seriously...why would I want Raymond and Ophelia to end up together? But as hard as it is for me to comprehend...I really like them together...Uhh...mixed feelings all over the place! Great job though! I love it when a writer can evoke such strong and uncomfortable feelings from the reader!
Reviewer: Lilianne Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 04:51 pm
Not sure how I feel about this story. Truthfully were it my child I'd be in prison for premeditated murder. He would have suffered a slow agonizing torturous death.
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 12:59 pm
Thanks for a great update. I really hope that Raymond is sincere.
Reviewer: mjfan Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 12:50 pm
I know that everyone is having a fit after this but I think Raymond really does have feelings for her but he's a manipulator a good one and hes using the love she has for him to ensure he remains free of charges. I think that if he could have waited he would have and then they would have still been together. Heck he never married and he stayed in her life after all those years behind the scenes. It has to mean something right? Poor Teddy he's gonna have a heart attack
Author's Response:
RedMoon: You are on point in your assessment of Raymond. However don't think that Ophelia has fell for the banana in the tailpipe. She has a score to settle. More is coming soon!
Reviewer: RedMoon Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 10:06 am
The devil is a liar!!! Raymond will not control Ophelia. She will see through his controlling ass send him on his way. Raymond is a mess... Bennie will have a fit when he finds out what happened between Ophelia and Raymond.
Awesome update.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed
[Report This]Date: May 29 2013 08:20 am
What the Hello Kitty was that?! I feel like she just got raped again. Please be a dream sequence...please, please, please.
Author's Response:
Sorry, but it's no dream. Don't give up on Ophelia yet. She has a plan....
Reviewer: peachmartini Signed [Report This]
Date: May 29 2013 07:10 am
Despite the pedophile thing I was suspicious he might actually have feelings for Ophelia. It's fitting she's named that; hopefully no tragic end for her. I actually thought that maybe they had feelings for each other. At first I thought Ophelia was in love with him because of her comments about Benjamin/Teddy not being a mistake. I actually felt bad that I was rooting for Ophelia and Raymond to make amends despite what happened 23 years ago. Then, I thought maybe she has a sort of dependency on him. But then the way she spoke about him in this chapter I don't think that she hates him. I wonder if she needs psychiatric help. This incident where he is able to sleep with her and most likely get her pregnant makes me wonder. In the last few chapters I kept wondering if the romance aspect was between Benji and someone else. Now I am wondering if the romance is actually between Ophelia and Raymond. I also will say that if Raymond truly loves Ophelia...I say go for it. I wonder if Opelia was 19 when he met her if he would have married her. I get the feeling he would never have married and kept her on the side but would have married her much later. I like where the story is going despite being a bit confused if the romance is going to be between Benji and someone else or between Ophelia and Raymond or both. And if Raymond I say that's okay...I just see a lot of burnt bridges in massive need of repair.
Author's Response:
No redemption for Raymond. Opheilia will NEVER truly get over him taking Teddy from her. She has a plan... stay tuned.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 06:43 am
eww ewww no please that fucking RAPIST. it doesnt matter how she felt or how he felt. he is gross i couldn't even get through that sex scene without picturing an 11 year old baby being raped. ughh
and the fact that he doesnt ADMIT to how sick he is and that it WAS rape? i cannot.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was rape, but Raymond sees it as seduction. Raymond thinks he has Ophelia figured out, but he's in for a surprise. Stay tuned.
Reviewer: leah Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 06:27 am
What the hell! I'm speechless...
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 06:25 am
For the love of God, please do not let that deeply hurt woman get with her rapist. I have faith she won't, but if that's what's happening here, I will never read your stories again. Also, rapist cannot be reformed. I hope he rots in jail. Ophelia needs a serious amount of therapy. Poor woman.
Author's Response:
No redemption for Raymond. I guarantee that. Stay tuned because the *h*t is about to hit the fan.
Reviewer: Dances_With_Pen Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 06:18 am
WHAT?!?!?!!? im speechless!!!!! i dont know how i feel about this. more please!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]Date: May 29 2013 05:38 am