You are simply amazing!! I love this story already. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 07:23 pm
Damn he sure isn't taking the fact that he's half black to well. He shouldn't even be treating his biological mom so bad. She had to do the right thing.
Author's Response:
He's just confused right now trying to take all this in. More is coming!
Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed
[Report This]Date: May 15 2013 06:50 pm
oh. boy. very interesting. what next?
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 05:55 pm
The reaction to him finding out he was black threw for me a loop.
But, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: LolaWrites Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 05:25 pm
Love the start to this; I didn't expect his bio mom to be black, so I'll give him the benefit of the doubt for the moment regarding his reaction to the news.
Can't wait to read more; love your stories, Brenda!
Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 05:08 pm
Brenda, Brenda, Brenda... you never cease to amaze me. You continue to write awesome stories.
I can't wait to read more about Benny and his birth mother.
Author's Response:
Thanks. This challenge has me going.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 04:37 pm
Awesome! :) thank you!
Author's Response:
Thanks! More is coming
Reviewer: RubyD Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 04:10 pm
Update soon!!!!!
Author's Response:
I will update soon!
Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 04:04 pm
I knew as soon as he mentioned that his skin was tan that his mother or father was black or half black. So I wasn't too surprised when he met his mother. I'm not sure what to make of his reaction to finding out he's half black, but I'll let him live for the next couple of chapters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting him live. LOL He's young and he's been thrown a curve ball. Now he has to process the info and decide how to handle the news. More is coming!
Reviewer: Lesmere09 Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 03:56 pm
wow, he needs to come to the realization now, he is who he is and that is black. If I met my mom, although I know this is beyond big, I would have stayed and talked to her. Once I got all the answers I needed, then sit back and decide what to do.
Author's Response:
He's just stunned because of all the info. More is coming!
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 03:37 pm
I can't stand it when people say "I'm not racist or anything" when they start freaking out. That crap gets old rather quickly, such a shame he's having such a rough time accepting he's half black. Heck, I'm half black and I'm not tripping, granted I'm not adopted of course and I know my real parents. I think his reaction was over the top about her being part black...
so sad.
Author's Response:
I am sure once he settles down, he'll be better able to process all the information. Bennie didn't think that he was prejudiced, he just never even considered being anything other than what he was raised to be. Now he feels that he really doesn't know now who he is and he's still processing the fact that he's the product of rape. He's going to be doing more pondering so don't write him off just yet. LOL
Reviewer: Soledad Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15 2013 03:23 pm
Great story I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
More is coming!
Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 03:05 pm
Good start. Im not mad at him that is a biig pill to swallow. Cant wait for more.
Author's Response:
Yes, it was a bit much for Bennie. He doesn't know how to feel about all this. More is coming.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 03:02 pm
As always, you write intricate stories and this one promises to be one of your best.
Author's Response:
Bella, you're too kind! More is coming!
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 02:29 pm
Wow, he's the result of an rape and his bio momma us black that young man is traumatized. Although I don't know what affected him more the fact that he was the product of a rape or that his bio mom is black? Brenda I love how your brain works! I am so hooked and it's only the first chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks PM. My muse is very insistent. Mroe is coming!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 02:02 pm
Great start to this story i really excited to see how this story goes.
Benjamin/Teddy must have some questions i hope he goes back.
Author's Response:
Bennie has to process all this information before he moves forward. He's stunned that he's not who he thought he was. More is coming!
Reviewer: Chicken Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2013 01:52 pm