Reviews For Raising Alex
Title: Chapter 9

Well now. I find myself quite unsympathetic to the feelings of Paola. Depending how this is handled, this reunion might be all about Paola. And it's not. Yes, Roberto wants to take away the pain of his wife, but sorry, this ain't about Paola and her pain. It's about Jamie. Who was there to "build her up"? Who was there to make her feel better about herself? Sure as hell wasn't Paola. So, if this becomes about Paola and how she suffered, I'll know the selfish streak is still in effect. I could give a blue dilly f*ck about the sufferings of Paola. You feel guilty? That's the least you could feel.

I enjoy this story and I'm so glad you updated.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2013 11:07 am

Title: Chapter 9

Did i miss something? I don't remember Jamie mentioning that she was adopted well i guess that need to reread some chapters.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 9

Uh ohhhh! This is going to be one big ass bomb targeting Jamie. I hope for the best but honestly I don't know what this could do. How can a woman blame and dump a beautiful little girl in a world without her mama to guide her. I could sleep a wink knowing my baby was without me. SMH, Paola has SOO much to make up for, I only hope Jamie can get through it. Damn, just when the two love birds were breaking ground.

 

Please post soon :D

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wowwww I wasn't expecting that.  For some reason I hope that Jamie can find it somewhere in her heart to forgive her mother. I hope they can build a relationship.  I can't wait for the reunion between those two!! 

Awesome update!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 03 2013 01:01 am

Title: Chapter 9

i can't wait to find out how jamie is going to feel about her mother having another family and not coming for her when she could 

Reviewer: sandradee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 09:33 pm

Title: Chapter 9

I wasn't expecting the story to take that direction. 

Since Jamie is attending med school and raising Alex do you plan on increasing the timeline of the story. 

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 09:02 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Sorry I can't personally forgive the mother.

She didn't even leave her with someone who just walks away like that. Tears don't make up for something like that.

Anything could have happened to her.

If she found a way to Brazil she could have found the same way for her child or made arrangements to come back for her, not leave her by herself she's lucky her child is still alive. 

She can never return to the story and it would be fine better for me.

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 02 2013 08:24 pm



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