You have to do something with Aubrey, she is working my damn nerves. Between her and Natalia I don't know whose getting on my nerves worse.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 23 2014 01:41 pm
Looking forward to an update, I hope sometimes
soon...PLEASE!!!! :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 12:12 am
She needs to tell Antonio what happened. Brilliant update!!!
Reviewer: bookworm Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 16 2013 06:43 pm
can't wait for Aubrey to tell Nat to stop being a perv. I wish Sandra wasn't really dead--just faking it to protect Maurice and Aubrey. I can't picture Antonio with anyone--it's like he's half a character w/o Sandra.
I think Nat would beat Aubrey in a fight, so that is where Sandra could come in and say she knew Nat was behind her near rape and commence to spanking that azz.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 10 2013 06:28 am
I look forward to reading your updates. I feel for Aubrey and I'm glad she's strong, but mentally she is starting to break and needs Antonio.
Who is Lillian? Please don't let Antonio be into such a calleous and cold-hearted person.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: July 07 2013 06:36 am
Beautiful chapter. Update more frequently pls
Reviewer: Apple Signed [Report This]Date: June 22 2013 04:38 am
Bree has a good heart and will probably be Mary's savior. I am glad you made her tough bc she is going to need to be this way where this family is concerned.
I think Tony will be heart broken at Sandra's death and welcome Bree. Now we need love interests for Bree, Tony, & Mary. So glad I didn't skip this story. Thanks!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 16 2013 07:16 am
Great start update soon...
Reviewer: alex Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2013 04:17 pm
Great start can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2013 02:50 pm
Oh yeah, this one is on my list of ones to wait excitedly for an update. Good job, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2013 09:58 am
what a wonderful start...please update soon
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 14 2013 08:01 am
Intriguing and imaginative start! It will be interesting to find out what happened between Sandra & Tony and whether he knew about Aubrey or not. Somehow I'm feeling he didn't. I am highly anticipating your next chapter so Well Done!
Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 14 2013 05:41 am