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Title: Chapter 9

I really love this story. How is Antonio going to respond? I'm glad Aubrey finally told her dad that her mom was dead. What does Antonio look like?

 Reviewer: WOW Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 04:02 am
Title: Chapter 9

Tears of pain can be felt through this chapter.  Thank you, for sharing

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 03:47 am
Title: Chapter 9

Yeeeeessss Ma'am. This story is life!!!! I'm just waiting for Natalia to get her booty handed to her figuratively and literally. 

 Reviewer: SaraiDanielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 09 2013 03:22 am
Title: Chapter 8

I love this story. I get that Aubrey's attitude and behavior may be annoying some people but it's very realistic. Please don't change the realism of this story to cater to some. I appreciate the pace that you have chosen to write this story for its not cheesy, corny, or honky dory which will make the outcome so much sweeter. The honesty and emotions of the characters just seem so true and I just hope you keep it that way instead of rushing the process along because some can't be patient enough to allow your character(s) to reach their final destination and the story to build.

 Reviewer: Patpricka Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 8

I know Aubrey is still a kid and reeling from the death of her mother, but she is straining my patience. I'm trying to remember her circumstances, but to continue to perpretrate the illusion that her mother is still alive to Antonio makes me a bit angry with her. True, she doesn't have any idea that he might still harbour feelings for Sandra and might be devestated that she's dead, but still.

And of course,  her introduction to the family would be anything but calm. This family is a trip. Aubrey included.

Update soon. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 04:32 am
Title: Chapter 1

I look forward to reading your updates.  I feel for Aubrey and I'm glad she's strong, but mentally she is starting to break and needs Antonio. 

Who is Lillian?  Please don't let Antonio be into such a calleous and cold-hearted person.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 06:36 am
Title: Chapter 6

I love your story

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 05:54 am
Title: Chapter 7

Wonderful update

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 05:50 am
Title: Chapter 7

This was a good update. But Aubrey working my nerves. i hope she let her guard down sooner or later. And try to build a relationship with her father

 Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 04:27 am
Title: Chapter 6

great story so far! I'm mad that aubrey gave all the money away, and then spent what she had left so frivolously!

 Reviewer: chels Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 23 2013 06:43 am
Title: Chapter 6

I loved reading this story.
Can't wait for the chaos that I know is coming...

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: June 23 2013 12:49 am
Title: Chapter 6

I hooked, so please give me more!!! greedy i know. I like the story, Antonio has the makings of a good father, his family though...Thanks for sharing i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 12:15 pm
Title: Chapter 6

I'm just crying and crying and crying for them both... and still want Aubrey to punch her Aunt Natalia a good one lol

 Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 10:01 am
Title: Chapter 6

Oh damn, you got me tearing up. Finally, he knows!!! This is wonderful. This turned out to be the perfect way for them to meet. I just love this. This is a wonderful love story between a father and his new found daughter. *sniff*

btw, Natalia is crazy as hell. I can't wait for her to know she has a niece. I just can't.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 07:35 am
Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful chapter. Update more frequently pls

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 22 2013 04:38 am
Title: Chapter 5

Love, love, love! Do i need to say more? Yes, yes i do. Please update and make the chaprers a little longer. Pretty please.

 Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 18 2013 10:09 am
Title: Chapter 5

I like that this story is moving at a fast pace and I love that Nat met her match in a teen.  Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 06:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

Oh my gosh, you can't stop there. I'm on pins and needles anticipating this face-to-face encounter. I have to say that I can't blame Aubrey; I would have probably flown off the handle as well. I hope that Tony recognizes his old love in this stranger or even if he doesn't, that she speaks up.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 17 2013 02:49 am
Title: Chapter 5

Oh my dear, if you can't stop your brain, just let it run, I'll be more than pleased to avidly read the result ! (creepy selfish smile lol). More seriously, I love how their encounter occured, so unconventionaly interesting ! Aubrey and Natalia are so feisty, hot blooded women is sure a family's character ! Her tears called mine... Definitely eager to read more, so don't stop the epicurean in you and let your brain run wild... just saying...

 Reviewer: Peanut Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 07:44 pm
Title: Chapter 5

You know what, Aubrey has that Russo temperament. Even though Natalia was spewing all kinds of racist crap, I can see her and Aubrey having an interesting relationship. Natalia knows how to throw down, I must say. She's the oldest? Could've fooled me.

As for Tony, I hope he sees Sandra in Aubrey. Gurl, let your mind run free. We, the readers, benefit in all these wonderfuls updates. More, please.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 07:19 pm
Title: Chapter 4

That brief encounter between Aubrey and Mary was surprising in that it made me glimpse the possibililty that Mary might be OK with Aubrey being her granddaughter. I have hope.

I can't wait for Aubrey to meet her father and offically meet her grandmother.  Even though Aubrey has not had the best experiences so far, this story puts a smile on my face for the expectation that her life will get better once she meets her other half.



Author's Response:

After I read your last sentence I cracked a smile

 

just wait for this update I've got coming....

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 05:20 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Bree has a good heart and will probably be Mary's savior.  I am glad you made her tough bc she is going to need to be this way where this family is concerned. 

I think Tony will be heart broken at Sandra's death and welcome Bree.  Now we need love interests for Bree, Tony, & Mary.  So glad I didn't skip this story.  Thanks!

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 07:16 am
Title: Chapter 3

What a family Aubrey will be meeting.  And what happened to Antonio picture?  His is the only photo that did not appear.  Can you try pasting it in again?  Looking forward to meeting between father and daughter. 

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 06:28 am
Title: Chapter 4

Mary redeemed herself this chapter. She may be Bee's greatest ally after Tony. Btw, will you repost his pic b/c it's not showing up.

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 06:02 am
Title: Chapter 3

What's the name of the man who is supposed to be Antonio?

Author's Response:

That would be Mr. David Beckham

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 16 2013 05:42 am


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