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Title: Chapter 3

Interesting start! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 11:29 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Can you say D-Y-S-F-U-N-C-T-I-O-N-A-L?  The Russo's are it for sure. I wonder what the issue is between Tony and Natalie? I can see anyone or even all of them being involved in causing the rift between Tony and Sandera. 

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 12:31 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Poor child, so young. She needs to be a little more stingy with the outlay of money.

I hope she meets her father soon, although, to be brought into that viper's nest of Russos might not be the best thing for her. I can see Lillian being a good ally for her. The other Russos are another story. Stefan scares me more than the others. I can see why Sandra would not be welcomed in that  dysfunctional family. I can't wait for Tony to find out about Sandra. This is going to knock him for a loop. Especially, since it seems, he's never had a serious relationship.

I'm truly enjoying this.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 09:17 am
Title: Chapter 3

More

 Reviewer: Apple Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 3

nice update, please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2013 01:49 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving the fact that everyonw looks out for Bre, especially during this time. I'm anxious for the upcoming reunion because I have no doubt that her father will welcome her. Others I have doubts about...there had to be some interference to break the parents up. 

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 08:46 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Great update...

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 07:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start update soon...

 Reviewer: alex Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 04:17 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Great start can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 02:50 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Oh yeah, this one is on my list of ones to wait excitedly for an update. Good job, Chica.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 09:58 am
Title: Chapter 1

what a wonderful start...please update soon

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 08:01 am
Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing and imaginative start! It will be interesting to find out what happened between Sandra & Tony and whether he knew about Aubrey or not. Somehow I'm feeling he didn't. I am highly anticipating your next chapter so Well Done!

 Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 05:41 am


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