That is truly a damsel in distress. I can clearly picture her going down. This is intriguing so they a past to the hero and the damsel. I am liking this more and more. Great Job.
Reviewer: Cherry Signed
[Report This]Date: August 05 2013 03:18 am
I'm so glad you decided to add more to this! I laughed a little when she fainted! That's such a damsel thing to do. Can't wait to see where you take this!
Author's Response:
Yes, fainting seems to be a damsel thing. I wonder what it was that made her faint, hmmm??? Glad you are enjoying the story!!
Reviewer: FrancetteP Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 11:30 pm
Wow! Please give us more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading more to come in chapter 3.
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 06:56 pm
Very intriguing! I like this chapter, reading it was just like watching it on tv, especially with the flashback. Now what did he have in his hand that caused her to faint? And why was she so surprised to see him again? Was he supposed to be dead? Had he moved and was never to come back?
And how did I know you would write a guy with blue eyes? hehe
By the way, you wrong for that comment in your A/N LOL
Author's Response:
You hate it when I am in your brain, so now you are in mine. Hmmm, what will happen next?? If the muse only knew how to stay focused. Lol I'm thinking you might get some of your questions answered. Stay tune!!!
Reviewer: katherinemadison Signed [Report This]Date: July 31 2013 05:14 am