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Title: Chapter 4

i love ur story but i wished the chapters were longer. Is that too much to ask lol?

Author's Response:

I will post a longer chapter on Friday. 

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 08:28 am
Title: Chapter 4

Beautiful chapter

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 07:23 am
Title: Chapter 3

I love it

 

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2013 07:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

The mystery about Nikoli and his family is killing me!!!! Love this story.MORE!!!!!!

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 02:16 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Great story can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: cdy1216 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 02:00 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Love the fact you showed how they originally meet,  can't wait to find out more.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 10:19 am
Title: Chapter 3

What the hell is going on !!! Why was he disowned what are they why was she promised to him ???!! I love this story 

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 08:18 am
Title: Chapter 3

I'm addicted and I stop everything to get a Nikoli hit. thank you, more please...

 Reviewer: Lindy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 08:05 am
Title: Chapter 3

Intriguing

 Reviewer: Drbw Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 05:32 am
Title: Chapter 1

It's funny how everyone is mad at her and yelling when they didn't explain anything to her.  How do you expect her to do the appropriate action or believe you when you all look like liars to her now.  

Anyway, very interesting read and it has captured my attention to want to read more.  I would add a quick review before posting to make sure some words are how you would like it to appear/read.  I know if you type on these darn iPads and things that word correction stuff will drive you cray cray.

 

 Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 04:56 am
Title: Chapter 3

Ok so what are they??/ Please continue.

 Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 04:34 am
Title: Chapter 1

I like and want to continue reading but I'm confused. Can you maybe flesh it out a bit more.

 Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 04:10 am
Title: Chapter 3

Centuries ago?  Are Alastor's vampires?  I am totally confused now, I thought that was a russian mafia story and now it's mafia story with vampire twist.  Thanks for two updates in one day!!  More please!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 06 2013 03:29 am
Title: Chapter 2

I like it but confused,  great start though.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 11:17 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Hmm, intriguing. It was a pretty good chapter, although you may want to descibe things with a little more detail. Example, Caroline gasps when she see's the library and asks who designed. What does the library look like, and what was it about the library that blew her away? We, the reader, know that there's a large collection of books in the library, but that's not enough information.

You might also work on using the correct words for the things you describe i.e. full length mirror, not full body mirror. If you're not sure what something called look it up. I do that often. You want your prose to be as smooth as possible. 

This story is interesting. You just have a few quirks to work out. 

 

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 10:39 pm
Title: Chapter 2

more more pls ....

 Reviewer: africanblossom Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 08:28 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I love it 

 Reviewer: RedMoon Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 07:56 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Damn this good!! I am disgusted that her parents are selling their child to the highest bidder. For what purpose? Is it too advance his career? Although it doesn't matter its wrong no matter what the circumstance! Excellent!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:07 pm
Title: The Cast

Love the cast!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:03 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Love this update.I am really curious to know about Nikol.Eagerly waiting for the next chapter.More!!!! please

 Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 02:53 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I am on the edge of my seat...Please continue

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 06:35 am
Title: The Cast

I love the pics.

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 06:25 am
Title: Chapter 2

This is getting good. I really can't wait to read more. I wonder why Nikoli has such a fascination with Caroline. Please update asap

 Reviewer: Primegirl04 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:41 am
Title: Chapter 1

hell yes !!!! MORE!!!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 05 2013 05:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

YES!!!! continue, I want to know how they met, how she came to love him how old is he and what is he????Lol, thanks for sharing.

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 11:20 pm


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