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Title: Chapter 3

These gifs at the end are too much! He just keeps getting more adorable.



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The gifs do help. :D 

I love the adorable innocent Adonis. I want my own personal Adonis now! *_*

 Reviewer: Bajerie Signed [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 02:29 am
Title: Chapter 3

Love it, I want more lol!! 

 Reviewer: Ding ding Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 02 2013 12:06 am
Title: Chapter 3

I like this :) keep updating

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Oh good lawd!!!! I can't... It's just to much. Aww!!! More updates like stat! :D 

P.S. - GIFs are very apprecited! Tehe.

 Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 09:29 am
Title: Chapter 3

I wouldn't have screamed either but Jayne seems to be really repressed.  That man is hella fine!!!  He could touch me whereever he choose.  Why didn't Jayne read the instructions?  It seems as though that Adonis is attracted Jayne but he won't be getting any anytime soon.  Jayne is scared of real man and sex, my only hope that she grows in her womanhood from this experience and never forgets that Adonis is not a real man!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 07:59 am
Title: Chapter 3

He is to cute!!! Now I want one!! Loving this!!

Keep them coming!!  

 Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2013 07:37 am


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