Master Liam is a douche who takes advantage of little girls with big problems. Now he wants to have supper with her like they went on date 12 days ago. What nerve, such audacity, that dude has some big cohonnas! That child needs, therapy is what is required. How big is the age difference between Liam and Elyshia?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 27 2013 04:05 pm
This is a good story. I'd happily be an editor if you have not already found one. :]
Author's Response:
Hi, thanks for reviewing and yes I will be happy if you become my eidtor, I tried to sent you a private message but perhaps it did go through. Well this is my email- fallobabe@hotmail.com, if you are still interesting, please please say you still are *on my knees begging* please with a cherry on top *sad puppy face* I promise to make it worth you while *please don't ask me what I mean, please don't ask me what I mean, looking up and down and sideways and everywhere but the computer*
Reviewer: WrittenC Signed [Report This]Date: October 03 2013 12:09 am
Poor Ely she has been trumatized and still haven't gotten over the first encounter now only to have at least some hope to be only stanched back into the lions den.
I hope he is much kinder and gentler this time but we can only wait and see.
Thank you for the update and sharing more please.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I am so happy you are liking, and I hope you still wil down the road.
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: October 02 2013 04:03 am
Interesting update! Loving the mystery! Can't wait to see what happens next!!
Author's Response: thanks for the review, and keep at it LOL
[Report This]Date: October 01 2013 09:49 pm
Wow. This man took advantage of her and now he wants dinner? Interesting.
Even though she laid down willingly, he used her love for her brother to get what he wanted. He bought her virginity. Now what does he want to buy?
Can't wait to see where this goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, and yes you will have to wait;D Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 05:33 pm
The poor child has allowed herself to be used as human sex toy! What type of man using the love that the child has for her brother to get sex which is morally bankrupt. I am disgusted by him and I hope that redeems himself.
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing woow you really don't like him, you will be meeting him again soon and I promise your opinion will undoubtably not get better ;) Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
[Report This]Date: October 01 2013 04:22 pm
I was so happy when I saw this update!
Great update!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 09:57 am