I am so confuse now. Do I root for Alfred and Selena or Thomas and Selena?
As for Anne, It would be nice if we could drop he in a vat of acid. It seems all she does is go after other women men. Maybe that's why she still single.
Author's Response:
Don't be confused. LOL Thomas is well aware of the prime directive and he's attracted to Selena. He's setting himself up to be hurt, but right now he feels that he's got things under control. Alfred knows that Selena needs to date in order to keep the creators at bay but he can see that selena likes Thomas too which is why he's worried a bit. More is coming!
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 12:53 pm
I don't know what to think off janet. She knows that afred has feelings for selena and what would happen to him if selena gets involved with thomas. She is all happy about her son dating selena without even taking alfred in to concidertion. She comes across as a little selfish. Also i know that they are trying to help, but what how alfred feel with this arrangement? I feel like he is the only one hurt in all of this. Also I know that selena is a late bloomer but she can't be that naive to not realize that thomas is interested in her. She should be honest with him so that he doesn't get any ideas.
Reviewer: ssandra Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 05:09 am
Dang !!! Poor Alfred. It has to be tough for him to see Selena date other men. Great update. I'm still Team Alfred but I do like the addition of Thomas. :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 04:43 am
wow! go alfred!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 04:21 am
oooooooh me likey!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 03:50 am
Poor Alfred, too bad he has to be concerned with things out of his control in order to be kept online.
Thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: Annie Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 03:46 am
Ohh poor Alfred. I don't know who to root for. I'm still team Alfred for now.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: October 01 2013 03:20 am
Poor Alfred :(
Reviewer: bhvana Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 02:02 am
Does Alfred have superhuman abilities other than networking with other androids? He would have had to run very fast to beat Selena's car home from the restaurant. I knew he had to watch his strength when they first had sex, but that would be true for any strong, healthy young man of Alfred's stature.
I think it'd be cool for him to show off some of his special android abilities - other than handsomeness and sexual expertise. Alfred just makes me so sad. He has no world outside of Selena. Even if he wanted to - which I doubt - his programming wouldn't allow him to leave her an pursue his own goals and desires as a conscious being. It's really depressing. I hope they figure this out. Something tells me you're going to solve all these problems and more.
Author's Response:
Yes, Alfred can run fast though it is draining to his systems. This is also why Selena couldn't actually catch him in the act when he was watching her. It is something that he doesn't do often. He's not going to follow Selena and Thomas because he doesn't want to strain his systems again.
More is coming. Selena is senstive to Alfred's feelings and more of that is coming in the next chapter.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 01:21 am
Before I even read this chapter I just want to say thank you, Brenda. NO ONE churns out material this good as fast as you do.
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 12:20 am
I feel for alfred. It seems that the only one hurting in all of this is him. I know that he is not human. But he still has feelings and it seems that no one is taking that in to considiration. This fake dating between Thomas and Selena is unnecesery. They only say in words that they are dating, letting everyone think that they are dating without actualy going on a date. I know that age is nothing but a number. But him being only 22 and her 30 or 31 is a little too much. She may not be old. But she is too old for a 22 year old boy. But that is my opinion. If thomas was at least 25 or 26 then okay. But 22 for a grown woman with life expirience that is too young.
Author's Response:
Selena isn't serious about Thomas AT ALL. She figures that this will keep the creators at bay while she can still have Alfred.
Alfred is jealous and a bit insecure because he knew that she didn't like Walter's attentions but she seems a little giddy about Thomas.
Also even though Selena is 31, she'd never even been on a date before Alfred because she was taking care of her own parents. She's a late bloomer.
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lissa Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 11:52 pm
Oh, no! D: Alfred can't be tossed aside! Team Alfie :-)
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 11:48 pm
Alfred is getting more possessive by the day. Oh boy, he knows what's at risk if the creators sees that he's become too attached. I love him and Selena together. I don't have a good feeling about Thomas working at Antex. He's young, yes, does he have much experience dealing with conniving backstabbers, I guess that will remain to be seen. And the little bit of sparks and chemistry that happened between him and Selena definitely has me intrigued if there will be something between them. I'm sure Alfred would be extremely displeased. Loved the update!
Reviewer: Lapis Love Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 02:31 pm
Both Anne and Walter are evil and should die horrible deaths! I am not feeling good about Thomas working at Antex because that bitch Anne is coo coo for Coca puffs! More please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 04:54 am
Uh oh I smell a love triangle. Thing are about to get very interesting.
Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 04:01 am
Ill. Anne and Mr. McCreepy make my skin crawl.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 02:51 am
This is such a gripping turn of events! Man, I feel a little guilty for wanting Thomas and Selena to get together. Poor Alfred! I bet that was him stalking Selena at the restaurant!
Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 02:36 am
Ohhh Lord Selena!! Trouble is coming your way!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 02:28 am
Damn Good update. Selena has men comming out of everywhere. (I'm Jealous) I hope Selena keeps an eye on Walter and Anne, they are No Good at all. Can't wait to read the next update. Great job !!! :-)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 01:46 am
So Thomas is now in the game is he??? :D I like him, but I'm still rooting for my boy Alfie. Team Alfred!
Reviewer: writinglass Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 01:46 am
Looks like Alfred unintentionally brought his own competition into the mix.
Reviewer: Fantasque Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 01:20 am
uh oh Selena has not idea what shes gotten herself into lol! :)
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 10:24 pm
Oh yes I enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 10:17 pm
Fabulous, fabulous, fabulous! I'm really enjoying this. I'm not a heavy sci-fi girl, but I love sci-fi done this way. It's great. Keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: GeorgiaP Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 09:19 pm
This story just gets jucier and jucier! Dr. Anne needs a beatdown!
Great update!
Reviewer: Night57byrd Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 26 2013 04:51 am