2 chapters in 3yrs, why even brother?
Author's Response:
Because I enjoy writing and sharing what I write with others. I got inspiration so I posted the results of it. There are no rules or deadlines for when I have to post. Don't like it don't read and save yourself the headache of leaving unnecessary comments such as this one. Just saying.
Reviewer: Eman Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2016 02:21 am
Ummm...I would have said f'em and kept it moving. No reaction is best I believe. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: June 05 2016 09:03 pm
Yes, please provide Jerrik's POV. It would help. I want to believe he said all that because he's jealous and upset. Good start, can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Presh Signed [Report This]Date: May 24 2016 08:10 am
I adorev this! Can't wait for more. The tension is FRIGHTENING!!!
~EJ~
Reviewer: ErisJade Signed [Report This]Date: May 23 2016 08:23 pm
I like it. If you can, you should also have Jerrik's POV. It's nice seeing a story from both main characters' perspective. I think it makes the story more complete.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: May 23 2016 05:09 am
Good start. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 03:17 pm
Intriguing start.The end was quite unexpected.
Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 12:16 pm
Interesting start!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 07:41 am
Despite your warning and not being a fan of erotica or BDSM, I gave in to curiosity and read your story. I'm so glad I did. The scene was amazing and so tastefully done--something I find to be a rarity. You drew me in immediately and kept me interested with vivid, creative descriptions rather than repulsing me with unnecessary vulgarity and off-putting sexual mechanics. I'm not yet a BDSM convert. But I enjoyed your protrayal of it and will most definitely be following this story. Can't wait to see how it all unfolds. Fantastic job!
Reviewer: MiMi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 04:56 am
Ooooooooooo!! I like this!!! More please!!!
Reviewer: Treale Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 04:25 am
hmmmm, very interesting. please update soon!
Reviewer: Aleta Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 04:19 am
Ohhh..sookie sookie. I didn't see that ending coming.
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 03:59 am