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Title: Prologue

2 chapters in 3yrs, why even brother?



Author's Response:

Because I enjoy writing and sharing what I write with others. I got inspiration so I posted the results of it. There are no rules or deadlines for when I have to post. Don't like it don't read and save yourself the headache of leaving unnecessary comments such as this one. Just saying. 

Reviewer: Eman Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 03 2016 02:21 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ummm...I would have said f'em and kept it moving. No reaction is best I believe. Can't wait for the next update. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: June 05 2016 09:03 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Yes, please provide Jerrik's POV. It would help. I want to believe he said all that because he's jealous and upset. Good start, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 24 2016 08:10 am

Title: Chapter 1

I adorev this! Can't wait for more.  The tension is FRIGHTENING!!! 

~EJ~

Reviewer: ErisJade Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 08:23 pm

Title: Prologue

Me likey!!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 03:39 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I like it.  If you can, you should also have Jerrik's POV.  It's nice seeing a story from both main characters' perspective.  I think it makes the story more complete.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 23 2016 05:09 am

Title: Prologue

Good start. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 03:17 pm

Title: Prologue

Intriguing start.The end was quite unexpected.

Reviewer: zoe zoey Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 12:16 pm

Title: Prologue

Interesting start!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 07:41 am

Title: Prologue

Despite your warning and not being a fan of erotica or BDSM, I gave in to curiosity and read your story.  I'm so glad I did.  The scene was amazing and so tastefully done--something I find to be a rarity.  You drew me in immediately and kept me interested with vivid, creative descriptions rather than repulsing me with unnecessary vulgarity and off-putting sexual mechanics.  I'm not yet a BDSM convert.  But I enjoyed your protrayal of it and will most definitely be following this story.  Can't wait to see how it all unfolds.  Fantastic job!

 

Reviewer: MiMi Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 04:56 am

Title: Prologue

Ooooooooooo!! I like this!!! More please!!! 

Reviewer: Treale Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 04:25 am

Title: Prologue

hmmmm, very interesting.  please update soon!

Reviewer: Aleta Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 04:19 am

Title: Prologue

Ohhh..sookie sookie. I didn't see that ending coming. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: September 29 2013 03:59 am



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