I am so happy you ended it like this. This was a hard story to read sometimes. I'm partial to fluff. I really learned to appreciate the growth of these characters. Great job!Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 08:40 pm
That is going to be one spoiled llittle girl, but Tess has finally gotten her HEA. Or should I say that I got my HEA and I am glad that those two fools didn't mess up!! Now Jay and Tess need to work on a little boy!!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 05:25 am
Though I still think Jay deserved to kick rocks, I appreciate you sticking with this story to the end. And Tess got her happy ending which is great. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. Looking forward to more stories from you and will definitely be giving you ideas.Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 03:07 am
BRAVO, what a wonderful roller coaster ride of a story from start to finish, and I LOVED the RIDE... Tess and Jay deserve so much HAPPINESS after all that they have been through together, and we get baby Chole out of it... it was also nice to see Jay and Malik make ammends and become best friends.
I do hope to see them again, but maybe as a supporting role for Jay's brothers story.
Again WELL DONE.Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 18 2014 02:39 am
I'm so happy for Tess and Jay, those two deserve so much HAPPINESS, and a baby on the way is a BONUS... but PLEASE no mire DRAMA for them, they have had all they can handle, just let them be a FAMILY.
One thing that made me smile was the fact that Jay finally talked to his father, although is reaction made me mad, it was still good that Jay got that all off his chest.
Oh and Kahlia is just too cute.
Looking forward to Tess and Jay's HEA.Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 17 2014 04:00 am
I will forever hold the image in my mind that Tess will do the Fuck Dat Bitch dance in front of all those other heffas lmao!!!! You made me laugh and cry and took me through a whole gamut of emotions. Truly a testament of your skill. Great job!!!Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 09:59 pm
You know what song comes to mind when I think of Tess and Toni? You have to look up all those "Fuck Dat Bitch" vines. there is one especially that is titled "when you walk past your exes house." that dance that the dude does.....i can so see Tess doing that while walking past Toni's desk!!!! The visual had me laughing my ass off!!! You are good lady!
I found that video and watched it...and died! Mainly because I saw a pregnant Tess doing it...lolReviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 07:53 pm
No stress, Tess puts the T in stress! The fact that she doesn't travel as much should help. Also the fact that Jay has seemed to unglued himself from dumb is also a plus. Tess doesn't seem to be as stupid either do they should be cooking with gas. Thank you so much for updating!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 05:03 pm
I am soo happy for them. This was a great story. Mho is that you should wrap it up on a high note.Its such a good story thst I want it to continue but think its best to leave us wanting more. Thats not to say I wont be reading if you decide to continue. Ill get off when the train ends. Greatjob!Reviewer: Acdromance Signed [Report This]
Date: January 16 2014 02:35 pm
I;m really enjoying this story! Luv it!Reviewer: AD Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2014 04:17 am
You have really taken your readers on the journey of a lifetime. In the beginning I wasn't trying to receive the message or the characters. I couldn't fathom anyone fictional or not making these choices in a marriage but then I thought this is real for someone out here. One thing you have accomplished that is hard to show over time is visible growth in your characters. In the beginning all I could think was how immature and bad communicators but all I can do is cheer them on. If nothing else I just wish for everyone to stay out of their marriage. I know this isn't te end of your journey with this story but I really wanted to say that.
Thank you!Reviewer: JacqueseGabrielle Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 06:22 pm
Tess took control and Jay loved it. Tess has grown she heard heard his truth and didn't spazz out she controlled herself. I am still waiting for Jay to have a conversation with his father. The chemistry has changed because now Jay knows all of her scecrets, she is no longer hiding herself. But I am waiting for her to admit some culpability in the troubled relationship. Jay allowed Honi to have excess to him but he didn't allow her into his heart. Tess kept apart of herself locked away and Jay didn't know to how to fight so he didn't even try until now. Good to see them both grow!Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 12:54 pm
Wow she put him through the ringer but he passed the test glad she has a relationship with his mom it's great he's going to therapy & discussing his progress with her. Her work load being lighter so she doesn't have to travel abroad as much & can do it from home was a much needed stress relief . Them falling back in love by the simple things is sweet hope they continue never stop. Glad Jay is being honest about everything & even honorable but got a surprise for his patients that rocked his & her world I'm sure she's probly preggers from this work out that was intense but the ? Is where do they go from here was this her way of saying he can come back as her hubby hope so. Update soonReviewer: kvgurl Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2014 11:58 am
Thank you for keeping the story going and thanks for giving this couple a break. If they stay strong, communicate, and have one another's back it will be near impossible to break them up. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 08:26 pm
Is side piece pregnant Great read
No ma'am I specifically mentioned a condom for that reason...lolReviewer: Avid Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 06:58 am
I was almost scared to take the chance and read before looking at the reviews, but I took a chance. Jay had better keep up the momentum. You are good; you take the best from the reviews and make it work.
Jay still got some work to do and it will take time but this couple can make their relationship work. This isn't the end is it? If it is, can we get an epilogue?
No this is not the end actually there is another roller coaster turn to come, but it has nothing to do with their relationship
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Date: January 13 2014 06:01 am
We'll see.Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 05:49 am
Great updates. I swear I love these two. Yes, Jay has messed up but I think he realizes what he wants and what he has to do. Tess also contributed but she's better now too. I think their marriage can be so much better because they've learned so much. Now will Jamie walk away quietly or try to shake things up? I hope they work and have babies and you keep writing about it all! So real...just great!Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2014 04:52 am