Title: Bitter Cold...

more more and soon , pretty please

Reviewer: BABYBELL Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 07:42 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Is he crazy? Post it woman!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 07:34 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Toni needs to go.....but Jay is seeing the light..but he shoulnt have mentoned being in doghouze

Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 07:15 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Had me holding my breath on that last part. Jay is still being naive I'm at least happy Toni admitted to him. I just hope he now understands what Tess is talking about.

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 07:07 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Jason is stupid and Slutzilla needs to pay for her transgressions.  When is Tess going to slay the beast of slutopia?  I need more! ! Jay is frustrating me, you let a wman who is not your wife touch you, uncool1!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:54 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Alright, I'm ready to wash my hands of Jay. He can't seem to think beyond his needs. He's a hypocrite too. He told Toni all his business. He basically complained about his wife -- talked smack about her. Some women would think that was an invitation. He's playing both sides of the fence. He told Toni to be professional when he was anything but professional during that conversation. 

Honestly, Tess and Jay should probably go to a marriage counselor because they have poor conflict resolution. 

Jay knows that Toni bothers Tess. Why hasn't he dismissed her? He's foul. Between the two of them they could've had her hooked up with another position at a different accounting firm. He can get a temp from Robert Half or wherever to replace her. Seriously. The writing is on the wall; Toni wants him. 

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:50 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Jay, really? really? You just gave the trick more ammo as to how to come at you. And any personal conversations that you have with her is out.of.line. What part of that don't you understand? I can't believe this man's utter stupidity. And she's put him on notice and he still thinks it's OK for her to be his assistant? He should be figuring out a way to either let her go or get her transferred to someone else. If this crap was going on with Tess and her male assistant, you best believe homeboy would have a problem with it. I just don't understand Jay one bit.

Looking forward to the next installment. I'm OK with Tess taking a breather to devise the perfect plan. Tess is a planner and a reader of people. Hopefully, when she comes out, she comes out with enough fire power to leave nothing standing once she's done.

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:48 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

Okay, Jay is being a dumb butt.  Tess is testing his behind to see what he is going to do.  What has he been doing?  Has he done anything to warm up the frost he is getting.  Flowers delivered to work.  Going to her office for foot massages and talking.  Having dinner at home prepared with wine, please don't let him mess up.  Did you really think this girl was going to be honest about starting the rumor.  This is also your professional image being tarnished as well.  He needs to think about that and transfer chick somewhere else.  Can't wait for future updates.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:35 am

Title: Bitter Cold...

2 weeks since the promise of retribution, that's kinda long for Tess to plot and execute her revenge...just sayin.

Reviewer: Joellen Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:33 am

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Tess was not harsh but she is about handle her business because she try dum dum that Toni was after and other people try to tell that Toni was up to no good

 

Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 06:03 am

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Well that was fun. I actually had a belly laugh over these two. [For thr record, children we don't condone violence but for the purposes of fiction. ;D ]

Tess was harsh but and it's a big but Jay wouldn't listen. Think about it - Tress, Jasmine and his friend warned him. He wouldn't even let Tess finish. If I'm not mistaken he hung up in her and then tried to deflect Tess from what was happening by talking about having a baby. Wow Jay's been dumb de dumb dumb.

Hope they work this out but Tess is now going to have to handle her business 'cause Jay wasn't upto the job. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: December 02 2013 03:13 am

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Jay is pissing me off so bad. He was warned by Tess and Jasmine and even his Mama told him he was being a dumbass but he willfully ignored it. I'm wondering if he ignored Tess on purpose because he's still holding a grudge over what happened between her and Eric. As soon as Jasmine discovered them he should have told Tess but he had to be hard heard. He's getting on my nerves and while I don't agree that she should have slapped him because people should keep their hands to themselves, but HE needs to be the one to put Toni in her place. HE needs to be the one to set boundaries otherwise if he let's Tess handle things then he's not doing his job as a man and who's to say it won't happen again when the next floozy comes along. Jay sucks. But I love this story. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 11:12 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

I think jay needs to confront Toni for messing up his marriage. He was wrong for hanging up in Tess's face. He needs to stop being so damn naive.

Reviewer: SandyBrownEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 08:54 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Good story.  She shouldn't stay mad long, but she does need to handle Toni

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 07:36 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

See now, Jay, I tried to warn your simple ass, but, nooo, you wouldn't listen. I kinda feel sorry for both of them. Jay is causing this drama because of his stupidity. Tess needs to be a little smarter in the way that she handles this jump-off. She isn't a partner for nothing, so she needs to employ her considerable skills to handle this assistant.

I feel there are some issues in their marriage that have nothing to do with that chick. She's just the tool that is bringing some of this to the surface. The way Jay talks to Tess and the way Tess talks to Jay made me cringe a bit. They need to iron out the sliver of disrespect they've both exhibited towards each other. The trick is only a distraction.

I don't think Tess has really dealt with her insecurities. And Jay keeps saying how he's not like his father. He might not actively seek the attention of another woman, but he's willfully ignorant to what this other woman is about. The net effect will be the same if he doesn't get an f'in' clue and quick. And the fact that Tess had to school him as to who started the rumor says he's shouldn't be allowed out in public by himself.

I'm liking each update, even though, they're making me want to stab Jay, right now. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 07:33 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Whoa! Tess should not have slapped Jay. A verbal smack down would've been sufficient. 

That wasn't cool for Tess to disappear without saying anything to Jay. 

Jay should not have ignored everyone's warnings about Toni. He's still clueless about what's really happening.

Reviewer: JFJD Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 05:51 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Tess is entitled to her anger, Jay is married to her and ignored her concern over Honi.  The fool hung up on Tess because she expressing her concern about Honi.  Why did Jay refuse to see Honi's interest in him? Jay you are making my left eye twitch.  I am glad that Tess is smart to know that Honi spread that rumor. I want Tess to call Honi up to her office along with Melanie and Antonio for a coming to Jesus meeting.  She needs to given a choice she retracts the lie that she told andd keeps her job with the company or she his fired and blackballed from ever getting in that industry. Actually how does a massage therapists get a job in accounting even as a admin assistant?   Honi's going down!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 04:12 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Damn!! On point and I love Tess!! Put that bitch in her place!!! Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 04:11 pm

Title: Arsonist...

Toni needs to be fired and killed in a slutfully inspired manner!  Tess is jumping to conclus she should gone to talk to her husband! Jay you should have told your wife about Honi (which is awesome by the way) about the massage because she thinks that you sex with slutopia! Jay, Jay I am so disappointed in you!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 03:54 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Pretty please post about the confrontation today! I cannot waitto see how it blows up. I especially can't wait to see how Toni responds when she realizes shhe has just committed career suicide.

Reviewer: Please? Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:51 pm

Title: Brown Eyes of Green...

Tess has a right to be upset but she needs to learn to keep her hands to herself. What if Jay had slapped her back? The is bit the first time she slapped him, hopefully I tell he the last time.

Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:28 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

I agree with the first two posters and I feel like there should be more talking and less shutting your husband out of the bedroom so quick. Don't let your pride get u caught up b/c Toni's looking for any opportunity, whether she works there ir not.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:27 pm

Title: The Sting of Reality...

Nah Jay had his chance and got snowed so it's time for Tess to prove why she is the VP.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:23 pm

Title: Arsonist...

She checks facts and figures for a living she should have dug deeper. I know she is hurt by the lies but when she calms down hopefully she'll due her due diligence before making any rash decisions.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:18 pm

Title: Deja Vu and How Easy It Is to Lie...

Uh ohh please don't let Jay be this gullible. Toni is clearly no good. I completely understand Tess' concerns so much distance can cause a problem even on a great marriage.

Reviewer: Acdromance Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 01 2013 02:08 pm



Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.