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Title: Characters

SMDH at Lance this whole secrets thin aint gonna work

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 26 2014 05:27 pm
Title: Photos

Frank is a perv and I don't think he realizes that Lance won't lose another loved one again.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 19 2014 11:28 pm
Title: Photos

I bet Frank is waiting at Nina's house or has someone on her house waiting to hurt her.  Lance needs to tell her what is going on. Update soon.

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 19 2014 12:58 am
Title: Photos

Frank is a sick perv that needs to disappear.

 Reviewer: liberty lady Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 02:27 pm
Title: Photos

Uh-oh! Lance don't do anything stupid. And Frank, ugh. Die just die

 Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2014 04:50 am
Title: Photos

Frank is about to get his ass kicked!!

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 04:17 pm
Title: Photos

Frank is crazy, when is Lance going to hive the information that he has on Frank to the police?   Why is holding on to it? Frank should die but I don't want Lance to do it because I don't want him going to jail.  Please update soon Joelle!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2014 01:53 pm
Title: Characters

Girl you need to update with a quickness. I'm feein' like nobody's  business for information about Lance and all of his fineness and his plans for that douchebag Frank.

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 09:25 pm
Title: E-mails

Please, please update!!!!! I need to know what Lance has planned and if he is either going to either make or break Nina's trust with telling her about Frank. I also need to what Lance's plan is regarding dealing with Frank. Maybe they'll use Nina a part of the plan. Just a thought. I know she wouldn't like it, but would do it for Lance. Update, update, update (yes, i am slow chanting in my mind) :)

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 05 2014 09:22 pm
Title: E-mails

I'm confused didn't they both promise no secrets? Or something like that.

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2014 07:51 pm
Title: E-mails

Lance needs to hurry up with his plan cause Frank already has his planned out. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2014 09:06 am
Title: E-mails

Why can't Lance go to FBI and show them whatever evidence and have them watching over him and Nina.

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 14 2014 11:53 am
Title: E-mails

Lance needs to tell Nina about Frank.

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 10:32 am
Title: E-mails

Lance needs not to lie to Nina...again. He needs to be transparent and get her some mace while he's at. 

GREAT CHAPTER!

 Reviewer: Kay Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 05:15 am
Title: E-mails

Frank is evil and i want him dead and buried!!  Lance is a definte keeper!!  He needs to go to police and set Frank's crazy ass up in a sting. So good!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 12 2014 05:13 am
Title: In Ten

I'm so happy for them!!! Frank is going to try and bust up their love connection or possibly even hurting Nina to get back at Lance for his daughter dying. If something does happen to Nina, all hell is going to break loose and Lance will put a hurting (financially, physically, etc) on Frank. I am eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Update soon so I can get my Lance and Nina fix.

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 02:27 pm
Title: In Ten

I soo happy they finally got together. Cute. But his father in law is about to cause trouble. I hope Nina' s strong enough to handle it. 

 Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 06 2014 05:04 am
Title: Unexpected Meetings

i thought Lance had green eyes. euther way he's back and ready to claim his woman. nina is scared and confused. she beter make him work for everything they had andwill have

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:21 am
Title: Give Me Time

GO AHEAD LANCE!!! Staking his claim. He's got Nina all kinds of confused. I love that he's playing for keeps. I can't wait until her gets her for good

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:16 am
Title: Downtown Lunch

I hope Lance keeps in contact with his old boss and Dave if he leaves or if he gets a job in the corporate world. They may be good connections to have. Frank seems like a two-bit sleazer and seems like he's up to no good.

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 05:11 am
Title: Long Walk

Lance needs to cool his jets. Nina has been worried about him. 

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 04:45 am
Title: Routine

I wonder how much money Nina has spent on food for Lance buying him breakfast and dinner everyday. It would've been cool and very personal if Nina made him breakfast & lunch and purchased his dinner.  Only to find out over the years of what he likes and doesn't like. Knowing someone's food preferences is very personal, but I guess their not on that personal level yet. Just a thought. I absolutely adore this story. KEep up the great work



Author's Response:

Lol I never thought about how much money she was spending on food. 

 Reviewer: jonesy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 04:43 am
Title: In Ten

So good. I'm glad they are finally happy.

 Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 01:50 am
Title: In Ten

Ayyyyyye get it ! Lol

 Reviewer: Heleana503 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 01 2014 12:01 am
Title: In Ten

Great update, thanks

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Date: August 31 2014 10:20 pm


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