Omg Omg quick thinking with Lukas because she would been dead. Elsie like to play games but she has to stop and just tell the guy that she likes him period. How cute is Jason taking care of his baby? I love the story can't wait to see what happen next. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: April 05 2014 11:24 pm
Thank you so much for this update.
Am loving this story.
Every time I see that you have updated I get 'happy'..lol.
Reviewer: Casmia Signed
[Report This]Date: April 05 2014 05:54 pm
Lukas told her about herself and it was well deserved. Have they rportred any od the incidences to the police? Someone just tried to kill Elise's dumb ass. As you can teall i am not fan of her since she is playing games with Lukas. Grow up Elise! What is going on with Kori? Thank you for updsating!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2014 05:24 pm
fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2014 04:45 pm
You have the shortest chapters ever. If it's going to take you so long to update, please make the chapters longer. Great story though:)
Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2014 04:21 pm
That was good and I can't wait to see what happens. I hope this will bring this closer.
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2014 03:02 pm
Need more....awesome so far wondering if your gonna start a story on kori next
Author's Response:
Yes....this is a three part series, Kori story is next.
Reviewer: amethyst84 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 28 2014 08:40 pm
"You catch more flies with honey than you do with sour milk." In THIS case, that's interpretation for "Roll over and do what the man tells you to do." Weeak. Still like the story though!
Reviewer: lonieg Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2014 01:47 am
Thanks for another amazing Chapter. The story keeps on getting better and better.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2014 02:56 pm
What's Lukas doing? Hmmm, excellent chapter!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: March 06 2014 04:10 am
Man I just have this feeling that paul behind this some how. Question is why is he doing this if he is behind it???. Luke all I can say he better not scratch that itch other wise it will cost you something you don't wanted to lose. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 10:32 pm
I hate desperate women
Reviewer: anoni5 Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 10:11 pm
I like the pace you set for this story. Elise and Lukas are moving a painfully slow pace filled with sexual tension. I'm having a praise moment that Elise is embracing work ethic and all that comes along with it. I still want her to get rid of the kitten heels but Rome wasn't built in a day. Update when you can
Reviewer: Nita Roberts Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 04:50 pm
Great update! Looking forward to the next one.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 02:24 pm
He is about to quit? It would serve both Edward and Elise if he did. Edward didn't give him full disclosure about the job situation. Elise because she is playing game because Lukas didn't sex her up. I have a bad feeling, I just hope that Lukas doesn't get hurt or killed. Good stuff!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 01:00 pm
Lukas needs some legal advice, coz from what I know and imagine I know about family law is that if he had a WIFE, then his 'in-laws' wouldn't have a chance to take Mila away.
Love the set up with the mystery plot... More updates!
Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2014 11:37 am
Loving this story, sooooo much! Check the site regularly for updates.
Thank you for posting.
Reviewer: Casmia Signed
[Report This]Date: February 19 2014 11:38 pm
I like that this is uncharted territory for Elise and she doesn't know how to proceed herself. They keep each other off balance. I can't wait til his daughter shows up because I think then she will begin to see him as more than a conquest especially as she is a daddy's girl. I hope she isn't in any danger though. May need to hire security for overnight or push the crew to work longer shifts or something to complete this project.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 18 2014 01:33 am
i wonder how long lukes is going to hold out.
Reviewer: lucky Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 11:54 pm
Well done--I look forward to your updates. I am starting to like Elise. Poor Ben, uselessly fighting against the chemistry that is between them. Can't wait to meet the daughter and will she have a nanny (Elise competition)?
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 10:33 pm
Thanks for the update!!!
Reviewer: Annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 09:33 pm
I love your story for Elise and cant wait to see her blossom into the woman that she has the potential of becoming.
Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 07:50 pm
Elise needs to grow up this is her father's company and its in trouble. She wants to play gamescwith this man. She doesn't deserve LUKAS HE IS TOO GOOD FOR HER.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 05:21 pm
Something night right. I think someone in that company or crew is trying to hurt he father's business big time. I hope they get to the bottom of this soon before anything else happens. Lukas I love man good with his hands oh yes. Elise what you feeling girl is you like him alot a whole lot. I love the story keep it coming and thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: February 17 2014 02:45 pm