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Title: Chapter 3

I hope he works her azz off.  If she is wearing heels, he should walk her all over that site--she would show up in safer and proper attire the next time.  I am hoping she is has more substance than the mother of his daughter had--gotta feeling she is going to love the daughter.He is going to be a hard nut to crack, bc right now she is acting just like his ex and his guard is up.

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 3

Loved reading this chapter.

Well, well Elise has got her daddy truly  wrap, tied and moulded round her  pinky fingers, she doesn't play..lol..When she wants something, she goes and gets it. Wish she would transfer that energy onto herself and into a passion that will give her focus on things apart from shopping and men. Have a feeling her journey process is going to be an interesting one. 

Thank you for the update!!

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 31 2014 12:10 am
Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for the shout out and the update for a birthday gift love it. Now Poor fine  sexy makes you wanted to spank him lukas  trying to do your job and find out hey the chick you almost slept with is your new boss lol.  I get  no one ever told her no  but something tells me lukas going to turn her out  before she can do it to him. I love the bond he has with is baby girl so sweet. Thanks for the update friend and will always supported you unless you voted republican lol

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 08:27 pm
Title: Chapter 3

I smm really not likimg Elise she needs ti grow up. I hope that she doesn't play with her father's business bwcause Lukas denied her the sex that she wanted. What is up with Kori? Right now I wouldn't care if Elise was diowned by het parents. 

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 01:28 pm
Title: Cast Pics

A quick tip about the German: when adults speak to kids, they use the 'Du' form, never 'Sie'. 'Sie' is for strangers or mere acquaintances. When kids talk, they mostly call everyone 'Du'. 

Plus, a little kid like Mia would call her Dad 'Papa' or 'Vati'...

since you took the time to translate it, I thought you might like to know...



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know. My co-worker is German and I asked her to translate this for me; I didn't tell her it was a parent to child conversation.....didn't know there was a difference LOL. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know. My co-worker is German and I asked her to translate this for me; I didn't tell her it was a parent to child conversation.....didn't know there was a difference LOL. 

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2014 12:45 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Interesting story so far. More please!

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 23 2014 05:22 am
Title: Chapter 1

I love that you have continue with this book

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 07:49 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Damn Girl, you done it again!!! Gonna make me fall head over heels for another one of your stories. 

P.S wouldn't have it any other way. 

 Reviewer: Casmia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 22 2014 01:41 am
Title: Chapter 2

I love it already! Update soon please.

 Reviewer: Wideyedreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 21 2014 01:07 pm
Title: Cast Pics

Meant to write: her pride is wounded BECAUSE he prolly didn't tell her why he rejected her. So she thinks it's her, when now it's him. When he gets to know her princess side, his rejection will prolly be because of her. anyways, he's already got a princess to look after. How cute is Mila?! 

Will he tell her Dad what went on? 

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 10:13 am
Title: Cast Pics

@pmgayle If Lukas is strong enough to stop 'in the act', then he's strong enough to resist her with clothes on! Unless love comes into it. So she's got a lot of growing to do.

 

it seems he's fighting his attraction to a certain type...

 

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 10:06 am
Title: Chapter 2

Ooh, Lordie. He's German! lOL, she's got her work cut out for her, coz Germans are generally frugal, practical and hard-working. Loving where you're going with this.

what's up with Kori?

 Reviewer: Bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 09:56 am
Title: Chapter 2

OH boy Lukas man oh man  you almost slept with the boss daughter and now she not to kind that your reject her like bad meat on summer day. I wonder what going to happen next? Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 04:23 am
Title: Chapter 1

Lukas been thru alot I see but  I love man who a great father to their child or children. It one amazing thing. Now Princess I like her for looking out for her best friend  but she still makes me wanted to punch her in the face lol.  Liking this story so far thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 04:17 am
Title: Chapter 2

Here I was thinking that Elise was making money on her own all this time.  I guess it was better late then never that her dad finally put down his foot. 

Elise is asking fo trouble by chasing after a man that is working for her father.  Not only that she will be a employee also.  Definitely asking for trouble.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 03:08 am
Title: Chapter 2

Wow. Reality check for Elise. I wonder how she'll handle it?

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 02:55 am
Title: Cast Pics

love the pictures

 Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 02:37 am
Title: Chapter 2

Elise don't be stupid, don't do anything that will cost Lukas his job because he rejected you.  He wasn't rejected you just the act of sex with you a stranger that he has just met.  Grow up Elise!! So glad that Devyn is going to go back an finish her degree.  But made her decide to go back?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 01:28 am
Title: Cast Pics

Love the cast Lukas is hot!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 2

She has a good heart, but oh, is she some kinda spoiled. This will be interesting to watch her growth.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 20 2014 01:04 am
Title: Chapter 2

Ohh this is gonna be good. 

 Reviewer: Lisastpaul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 10:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Thank you soooo much for posting being waiting on this story for the longest.  It's sweet to see Dev and Jason more in love with each other. What is Kori up too am intrigued to read her journey but am focusing on Elise. This is gonna be good,  am so excited. 

 Reviewer: Amaya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2014 09:31 pm
Title: Cast Pics

Nice cast photos

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2014 12:33 am
Title: Cast Pics

love the cast photos

 Reviewer: Sandra Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 09 2014 05:47 am
Title: Cast Pics

Great, can't wait to read it.

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Date: January 09 2014 02:30 am


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