I am eager to see how the rest of the story unfolds now the Elise and Lukas are officially a couple. I am also dreading that conversation that Lukas has to have with his daughter regarding her mother. Many thanks for the update.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed
[Report This]Date: August 31 2016 03:06 am
OMG....thx for bringing this to my attention. My computer froze on me this morning... I just fixed the chapter.
Reviewer: kwajeraspen Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2016 09:51 pm
What happened , this chapter was reposted several times, other than that this chapter was excellent. Lukas staked his claim to Elise's heart.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 30 2016 05:19 pm
10!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2016 04:26 am
Here comes the ex!!! Love this story!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 03:58 am
This is going to be good!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2016 02:51 am
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2016 09:36 am
Wonderful update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2016 05:01 am
Alright Lukas went and got his woman! I love this story and I really think it is wise to have them take this new path slower. Also glad that they will return as a united front; will need it for what you probably have awaiting them.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2016 02:20 am
I actually like Elise now, she has grown as person. I love Lukas he is so fine, but hooked me as soon as I saw that it was one of fine Hemsworth brothers.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: June 27 2016 01:48 am
Aw Lukas and Elise!!! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2016 10:29 pm
Thank you for the update. I am so happy that Elise and Lucas are now on the same page. This series is my favorite.
Reviewer: Aiwen Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2016 10:19 pm
Good story...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2016 08:40 pm
THANX FOR UPDATING I COULD NOT WAIT
SUCH A SWEET TURN OF FATE
Reviewer: Benedicte Signed [Report This]Date: June 26 2016 08:24 pm
Fantastic update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 06:08 pm
Firstly can I say am really sad to hear about the tragic loss of your nephew. I can't imagine what your family are going through at this difficult time.
Secondly thank you for updating , I love this story it's one of my favourites on this site. It's understandable that your writing well help you channel the various different emotions that you are experiencing. I truly wish you and your family peace.
Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 03:02 pm
Deepest sympathies for the loss of your nephew.
Please don't let this be the end of this wonderful story.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 03:25 am
I'm really sorry for your loss. Thank you for continuing to share your talent with the world.
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: April 04 2016 01:50 am
Wonder what his daughter and his Dad are up to.
I read this so fast the first time because I was scared he wouldn't get there in this chapter. But he did and they connected. This Chapter was wonderful. You did a really good job, Chica.
So sorry about your loved one. I pray you that you have support needed to weather this hurt in your life.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review and the prayer...my family and I are getting through this one day at a time. I realized after some time had passed I needed a place to channel these emotions and writing had always provided me that.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 11:20 pm
Good turn of events...both Elise and Lukas are changing...growing...but trouble waits in the wings in the form of Oliver...looking forward for what's to come...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 09:31 pm
Elise is changing for the better...I like her as I watch her growth...she's definitely more mature and grounded...good character development...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 08:47 pm
Such an immature girl...her father's company is being sabotaged and she is still worrying about getting some man to want her...at least she did forget for a minute...not liking Elise at all...
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 07:40 pm
Sorry for your loss
Reviewer: gigi Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 07:10 pm
Lukas opened up and told Elise about his life, Riley and his family had no legal rights to Milla as he is her biological father. At least we hope so,, did do a DNA test? Hana was a ho, Lukas couldn't have been sure.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2016 06:05 pm