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Title: Sixteen

Great update!!! Noah beating Amora still burns me up every time I think about it. I know, Amora forgiving Noah for his behavior is what she will ultimately do, but pregnant or not, I would not be able to stand the sight of him. I mean is Noah a walking dick wrapped in gold? I know that this was Amora's first time being with a man, (and probably her last, if Noah as any say), but if Amora wants to leave in the future will he beat her again, have someone else do it? Noah is an ass and Amora has been bent beyond belief by Noah. Oh, does he want a star because he makes Amora's toes curl? I hope Noah does not think he is irreplaceable. And at this point if I was Amora I would not care about being replaced. She knows he will always give his full support to their child. They do not have to be together to do that. 

But I do understand that Amora wants a good pregnancy. She should not be stressed or angry. WOW, Noah really played this one right. He thought of a way to calm Amora down and keep her tied to him. I swear I would hate him. I hope Amora is using his ass. As for love, that happening right away would be a joke. How can someone go from getting their ass beat to having feelings? Noah has not groveled nearly enough. Anyway, I do love this story, even if all I feel like doing is beating up or denying Noah at every turn, lol!

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2015 12:25 am
Title: Sixteen

Damn! Loving this sweet side of Noah

 Reviewer: Karen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2015 05:53 am
Title: One

Dude!!! I loved the chapter 16 update!! I was struggling with Noah as a "good guy" after kidnapping Gand beating Amora! This twist is extremely helpful. More !!

 Reviewer: Aleta Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 04:47 am
Title: Sixteen

He saw an abused girl and wanted to make her his so he could continue to abuse? Cause that's sure as hell what I'm seeing. Like whoa! 😧😕😐

 

 Reviewer: Karyn Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 12 2015 03:35 am
Title: Sixteen

 

Not a bad chapter, but I hope it's not going to stop there?  Now that he's opened up a little will she be able to leave the house? Will he continue the gangster life or try and become legit? Will they get married? Is her father's debt now cancelled?

 Reviewer: caribbeanisland Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 11:24 pm
Title: Fifteen

This was sweet😊

 Reviewer: M3l4n1_C4rt3r Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 11:21 pm
Title: Sixteen

He apologized for beating her. Well, well well.

Thanks for the update. What's next with these two? Is NOAH going to continue to fall head ver heels for Amora?

Can't wait to see how he is going to treat her during and after thr pregnancy.

Thanks for the update. Anxious for more.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 09:13 pm
Title: Sixteen

I now like him :-)
Great update...

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 06:25 pm
Title: Sixteen

Wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 Reviewer: Maria Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 03:20 pm
Title: Sixteen

Too short.

 Reviewer: Khamalani Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 02:56 pm
Title: Eleven

I really like this story but i have to say that whole sex scene was ruined for me the moment you made her say my plump ass no one actually describes their own ass as plump that is one thing that really irritates me because it takes me out of the story and makes me realize hey this character is so not real i love this story i just wanted to point out that one detail

 Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 02:39 pm
Title: Sixteen

A very romantic chapter, still, isn't it a bit early to be able to feel the baby kick and hear his/her heartbeat? 

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 01:27 pm
Title: Sixteen

this is just too good, I love this story!

 Reviewer: crayola10 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 01:02 pm
Title: Sixteen

What the story about Noah's brother. I feel their might be alot of pain from noah brother. It can't be easy knowing your mom die giving birth to you. Something just tell me Noah made his brother as cold and distance as him. I really would really like to know more about Noah's brother. What are his thoughts and how he was raise. Please and thank yo    

 Reviewer: twilight18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 09:47 am
Title: One

What the story about Noah's brother. I feel their might be alot of pain from noah brother. It can't be easy knowing your mom die giving birth to you. Something just tell me Noah made his brother as cold and distance as him. I really would like to know more about Noah's brother. Please and thank you

 Reviewer: twilight18 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 09:44 am
Title: Sixteen

Love this update!!

Let's give NOAH a hand👏👏 He is talking to Amora, sharing his past, his hurts, showing passion and his love. 

Thanks for the update. Keep them coming.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 07:32 am
Title: Sixteen

Well thats better. And now I understand Noah a little more.

 Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 06:42 am
Title: Sixteen

hanks for the update.   I m glad Noah shared with her.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 05:57 am
Title: One

I'm glad they're moving getting closer letting they're gaurd down & giving into the attraction they have for one another. It's also good to see her allow him to experience the joy of this pregnancy with her & see that he genuinely this child.

 Reviewer: Kvgurl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 05:08 am
Title: Sixteen

Yay, Noah opened up to Amora! Yay, Amora wahrs some pregnancy  nookie and Noah obliged!  So good!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2015 04:14 am
Title: Fifteen

Next chapter please!

 

I hope Noah lightens up a lot and explains himself to Amora. She deserves that.

 Reviewer: caribbeanisland Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 09 2015 08:55 pm
Title: Fifteen

Okay Noah, you are going to be a father. This is what you have always wanted, but never could find the right woman!! This is one reason you had so many woman.

Noah needs to recognize he has the right woman, how are you going to treat He now needs to make an effort to communicate with her. Help her see she is more than someone to be used for someone's else benefit. Let her know she has worth because she has beauty inside as well as outside. Let her know she is worthy of true love. He needs to recognize she is the one to show and give him the love he needs.

 

Please update soon. Don't stay away too long!!!

 Reviewer: Nina Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 07 2015 12:57 pm
Title: Fifteen

Though I did like this update, short chapters are a pain. 

 Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]
Date: February 05 2015 06:22 am
Title: Fifteen

Now that she is pregnant, why is he turnig his back to Amora? Before he did not care if she was mad, he still wanted sex. Now what?

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 04 2015 02:47 am
Title: Fifteen

Favorite story on the site! Continue please

 Reviewer: guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 03 2015 06:50 pm


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