Title: Chapter 9

Gurl...so much emotion is going on this last two chapters had me like...(in my best beyoncé voice) God Damn! okay but on the real, (deep breath then exale), Christopher...Christopher...Christopher, on the last chapter (8) i was about to write a rewiew about how chris's attuide did a 180° had me like...BISH WHET,BISH WHET! But then something told me wait until the next update and give him the benefit of the doubt. Gurl u save him from get cuss out yes you did lol. Now i see why he acted the way he did (do i think he should of handle it a better way? Hell yeah but i understand). Between the drug problem, the death of his mother (feeling like he help in her death from her stressing herself out worring about him...that hard to live with), and the abandonment of his father. He felt like a comeplete screw up and anything or anyone he knows or touches turns into crap. So the fact that kat was pure he didn't what to screw her life up because he believed he was a screw up. That was a being thoughtful but in a selfish way (if that make any sense lol). He can't just make choices for Kat or people period. Just because you feel like you are not good enough for someone doesn't mean you are in that person's eyes and heart (look at me getting deep dont get lost girl stay with me lol). Yeah he fuck up, but he can change that by meaning 100% with Kat. Not just put it all out on the table for her to know, they both are emotionally sensitive at the moment for that, but baby steps. He wouldn't have go though what he's going through alone if he gave a chance.

 

As for Kat, babygirl is a like bruise at the moment. It hard to trust people period. But trust someone with your body, heart, mind, and soul is on a whole other cosmic level. So the fact that that she just meant him and have this type of feeling is scary as hell but exciting. So that rejection is not just a bruise ego thats like a round house mortal kombat move to the face. That hurts :-(. I think that she deserves a explain to Chris's actions for that night. Now, I don't expect her jump back to feelings because that's not how baby girl rolls. Cold, sassy, a bit bitchy I can totally understand. But not for too long, they both need to hear each other out and work it out be comfortable towards one another again. I believe they'll bounce back. :-) alright, gurl keep doing what you do and UPDATES!!! because shit is getting to good lol. Update soon please.

 

 



Author's Response:

fucking loved your analysis. Thank you soo much. Chris keeps alot of things bottled up inside. he's not too good at expressing his feelings or dealing with his emotions. He usually finds other outlets( drugs/sex) to deal with his pain instead of dealing with his real issues. so, I don't think he knew how to properly react to his feelings for Kat after her confession. running away was easiest for him. As far as Kat goes, she is a strong woman and am pretty sure she'll be able to deal with Chris and get her explanation. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 11:54 am

Title: Chapter 9

Ok, it doesn't really track for me why she would have this reaction at being turned down. They were both messing around, but theyreally don't even know each that well or for very long. She still has her virginity so I say no harm no foul! The worst it looks like is her pride maybe a little bruised, but to be carrying on like this...I just don't see it. This is the kind of reaction I would expect if he took her virginity and then treated her like this! Now, does she deserve an explanation? Yes, she does and he needs to be about giving it to her sooner rather than later.  




Author's Response:

Too much, huh? I think her reaction was due alot to her unable to assess the situation. She was confused and hurt. Kat is a person that does not get involved emotionally in relationships with men. She is involved in superficial relationships. She just flirts and fools around. So when she spent time with Chris at the bowling alley and in her car talking and on the hood making out, she realized she really liked him. She let herself get involved emotionally. So, how to handle being rejected by someone who you finally let yourself connect with emotionally as well as physically? Kat cries her eyes out for 30 min., tells her friends, and probably will be good by the morning. That you for you feedback. I appreciate it.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 15 2014 12:22 am

Title: Chapter 9

Just caught up with this story, and its very good, love all the characters.

OK Chris needs to let go of the past so he can move forward with his future, and it seems that Kat maybe just the one to help him get thought this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review. I really appreciate you reading it.

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 09:59 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Chris is carrying a lot of guilt, your left his famiky because he's a asshole!  Your mom died because she was sick your choices stressed her out but she was mom and that is what mom's do. My heart goes out Chris but that was still a douche move. Kat is really feeling Chris and was hurt enough to cry. Kat is mighty free with body to still virgin, she has done everything else but ride the wave. Interesting?



Author's Response:

Pmgayles!! Yes, Kat is one of those everything but that girls. Maybe if Chris would talk to someone about how he felt instead of acting out, he could get rid of that guilt. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 14 2014 01:10 pm

Title: Chapter 8

Damn, after the beginning of the story I didn't see that coming. It makes sense to be surprised but Chris was a douche. He's hot but that should make Kat think twice about giving her virginity to him.



Author's Response:

Hopefully Chris will have some redeeming qualities later cause that was shitty. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 03:40 am

Title: Chapter 8

Damn Chris that was bogus!! Kat deserved better than the stunt that you just pulled. I knew that she would chase him away and he hurt her in the process. Make him work for it Kat.



Author's Response:

Ahh,pmgayles always happy to see your review. Chris what an asshole move that was. She was willing to give it up to him just like that.  Your right next time, she better make him beg for it. Thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 10 2014 01:29 am

Title: Chapter 7

Kat made some headway with Chris but don't  push him quickly. Those two ho's sorked ky last nerve he doesn't want either of you. He proged it by not having any contact since dipping his wick!  Good stuff!



Author's Response:

Your hilarious. love your reviews. I have one more chapter to post today.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2014 04:27 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Nice, but chapters need to be longer



Author's Response:

I know. I was suppose to put all this mini-chapters as one big chapter but I kept getting interrupted by life and wasn't sure when I would be able to get back. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jomoli Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2014 02:53 pm

Title: Chapter 5

I like it. so far it's an interesting story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 09 2014 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 3

If you are using Word to write this you need to move the tabs over at the top of the page to lengthen your sentences. This format is almost written as if poetry. It is not a eye massaging read because of the cut off. Just FYI



Author's Response:

Thanks, I've been working on it. Next chapter should look normal. Hope you keep reading.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 06 2014 02:08 pm

Title: Cast pics

SEXY! 



Author's Response:

I know :-)

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 06 2014 03:04 am

Title: Chapter 2

The pictures are not visible... :-(

Author's Response:

fixed it you should be able to see them now.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Ok. I like the concept. Love the descriptions of your characters. The way the paragraphs are formed and how they flow makes it hard to read. Sentences are cut off. I also like that you started your story off with a third person point of view almost as if someone else is telling their story. I don't see that often.

Author's Response:

thanks for the feedback, this is my first story so i'm learning. hopefully i'll get better as the story progresses. thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 11:54 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Definitely easier to read this time. I love the cast. Kat is some kind special. Chris and Kat are about to meet again. I can't wait because she is going to make him run from from her.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I promise my next chapter will be even easier to read. I just went in to mess around with the Chamber

formating tools.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 02:00 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I have to be quite honest the format is completely unacceptable. I'd like to read what you've written but I can't get past looking at a jumbled mess of words. Instead of posting the chapter just to post it, take some time to correct everything in the story edit box. I understand that it can be a pain to manually space out the sentences and paragraphs since I've had to endure it as well with my own stories but we will appreciate you taking your time rather than adding the next installment and have it look like a big mash. Please fix this as soon as possible.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the advice. I did'nt know I could edit once I inserted in the story text. I've spaced it now so hope it's easier for you

to read. I am just learning through trial and error, but I finally figured it out. My next chapter will look like the regular ones.

Sorry and I hope you read it now. Arlen

Reviewer: Dani Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2014 01:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Spacing out the paragraphs would really help to make this easier to read, the first two paragraphs are a strange format but other than that I will continue to read. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the input.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 02:54 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Jared Leto, me likey!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, me too.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2014 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 2

Good! Lol! And I love the cast pics ;)

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 06:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I love it!! More please!



Author's Response:

I'm writing the next chapter as I type this. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 02:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1

really liking it so far! was a bit hard to read though because its single spaced. more please



Author's Response:

I know, I had trouble with the format for my first chapter but I figured it out. So next one should be easier to read. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: brownskingurl Signed [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 02:18 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oooo gurl it 8:00am in the morning, and you already made my morning with this story :-). I already like Christopher and Kat.Tall, emo (gives him thats mysterious look to him), and a LIP PIERCING!!! Ooo I wonder if he got tattoos. The total  package he his.lol. either way I like him. Now, Kat... babygirl got a little freak in her lol I like it. The both got intresting stories about each other's lives to tell that I like to know more about. Can't wait to see what in store for there two and the ones around them. I'm going to need a little more up updates to this like at least 3 more or something lol j/k ( well not really... forgive me I'm intrested :-) ) So keep it up because I damn sure like it. Update!!!!!! Yes gurl! :-)

 

 



Author's Response:

Girl,this is my first attempt at writing anything, so you just made my day :-) thank you. Great minds think alike, tattoos maybe?just remember he was wearing long sleeves.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 02:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I am enjoying Chris & Kat, I hope I get to c more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: kimyso Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2014 12:49 pm



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