Gurl...so much emotion is going on this last two chapters had me like...(in my best beyoncé voice) God Damn! okay but on the real, (deep breath then exale), Christopher...Christopher...Christopher, on the last chapter (8) i was about to write a rewiew about how chris's attuide did a 180° had me like...BISH WHET,BISH WHET! But then something told me wait until the next update and give him the benefit of the doubt. Gurl u save him from get cuss out yes you did lol. Now i see why he acted the way he did (do i think he should of handle it a better way? Hell yeah but i understand). Between the drug problem, the death of his mother (feeling like he help in her death from her stressing herself out worring about him...that hard to live with), and the abandonment of his father. He felt like a comeplete screw up and anything or anyone he knows or touches turns into crap. So the fact that kat was pure he didn't what to screw her life up because he believed he was a screw up. That was a being thoughtful but in a selfish way (if that make any sense lol). He can't just make choices for Kat or people period. Just because you feel like you are not good enough for someone doesn't mean you are in that person's eyes and heart (look at me getting deep dont get lost girl stay with me lol). Yeah he fuck up, but he can change that by meaning 100% with Kat. Not just put it all out on the table for her to know, they both are emotionally sensitive at the moment for that, but baby steps. He wouldn't have go though what he's going through alone if he gave a chance.

As for Kat, babygirl is a like bruise at the moment. It hard to trust people period. But trust someone with your body, heart, mind, and soul is on a whole other cosmic level. So the fact that that she just meant him and have this type of feeling is scary as hell but exciting. So that rejection is not just a bruise ego thats like a round house mortal kombat move to the face. That hurts :-(. I think that she deserves a explain to Chris's actions for that night. Now, I don't expect her jump back to feelings because that's not how baby girl rolls. Cold, sassy, a bit bitchy I can totally understand. But not for too long, they both need to hear each other out and work it out be comfortable towards one another again. I believe they'll bounce back. :-) alright, gurl keep doing what you do and UPDATES!!! because shit is getting to good lol. Update soon please.

Just caught up with this story, and its very good, love all the characters.

OK Chris needs to let go of the past so he can move forward with his future, and it seems that Kat maybe just the one to help him get thought this.

Damn, after the beginning of the story I didn't see that coming. It makes sense to be surprised but Chris was a douche. He's hot but that should make Kat think twice about giving her virginity to him.

Kat made some headway with Chris but don't  push him quickly. Those two ho's sorked ky last nerve he doesn't want either of you. He proged it by not having any contact since dipping his wick!  Good stuff!

I like it. so far it's an interesting story.

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Ok. I like the concept. Love the descriptions of your characters. The way the paragraphs are formed and how they flow makes it hard to read. Sentences are cut off. I also like that you started your story off with a third person point of view almost as if someone else is telling their story. I don't see that often.

Author's Response:

thanks for the feedback, this is my first story so i'm learning. hopefully i'll get better as the story progresses. thanks for reading.

I have to be quite honest the format is completely unacceptable. I'd like to read what you've written but I can't get past looking at a jumbled mess of words. Instead of posting the chapter just to post it, take some time to correct everything in the story edit box. I understand that it can be a pain to manually space out the sentences and paragraphs since I've had to endure it as well with my own stories but we will appreciate you taking your time rather than adding the next installment and have it look like a big mash. Please fix this as soon as possible.

Jared Leto, me likey!!

I love it!! More please!

Oooo gurl it 8:00am in the morning, and you already made my morning with this story :-). I already like Christopher and Kat.Tall, emo (gives him thats mysterious look to him), and a LIP PIERCING!!! Ooo I wonder if he got tattoos. The total  package he his.lol. either way I like him. Now, Kat... babygirl got a little freak in her lol I like it. The both got intresting stories about each other's lives to tell that I like to know more about. Can't wait to see what in store for there two and the ones around them. I'm going to need a little more up updates to this like at least 3 more or something lol j/k ( well not really... forgive me I'm intrested :-) ) So keep it up because I damn sure like it. Update!!!!!! Yes gurl! :-)