This story is seriously awesome!
Reviewer: Momo Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 24 2014 05:33 am
Great update! Mamea is obsessive and this will not end well if she gets her way with Anakira.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 07:18 am
Awe man!! I should've kept mouth shut. Just kidding. I really hope you find someone cause I think this story has the potential to be epic.
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: May 22 2014 12:43 am
Mamea is still nutty and I feel bad for Anakira. I am can wait to see what happens next at the auction.
I like this story but it could use a little bit of editing. Sometimes fixing simple errors can make a story ten times better.
Author's Response:
Thank You! I am in the process of finding an editor, but I haven't find any who wantts to take the story, But I will hold on the next chapter until I find one. :)
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 10:26 pm
Psycho, that woman named Mamea is psychotic! Inspite of myself I am liking Alkar more and more.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 08:31 pm
Interesting update! Wow, mamea definitely got plans for Anakira. This may not be good.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 06:21 am
Mamea- can you say say cray cray stalker?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 21 2014 02:24 am
Mamea is crazy and she needs to die! The Prince made his request known, I like that about him.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 20 2014 11:20 pm
Its different thats for sure. Hell I think I would take my chances with Prince before staying with Mamea foul ass.
Author's Response:
Thank You for reading :)
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: May 16 2014 01:40 pm
Interesting story so far.
Author's Response:
Thank You, I aimed it to be intresting and not so much as typical..
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: May 15 2014 04:23 am
i thought this story was going to be about like some kind of fairy tale princess kinda stuff and oh girl you shocked me, mamea is crazy and that llittle scene had me like wtf.. I loved it
Reviewer: chichi Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 10:18 pm
this story is going to be raw! I like it and its gripping it makes you think.. and Idk why I like so much. its not a normal story
Reviewer: Opal Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 10:16 pm
The Prince wants her snd she she will be had. Prince Alkar will treat her better than mamae, at least I hope so.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2014 02:30 pm