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Title: Chapter 2

OMG!!! The shit just hit the fan. Wow. How are they going to react once they meet up. 

I wonder whats going to happen next. This is getting good. 

I love Phoenix. She's funny as hell. Keep it coming I'm hooked.



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Reviewer: LuckyMe Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 10 2014 07:57 am
Title: Chapter 2

When is the rest of it coming? Please don't keep us hanging.

Author's Response:

Will post again soon. Thanks for reading. Hang in there with me. I appreciate it sooo much. 

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 13 2014 03:33 am
Title: Chapter 2

Awesome plot and story



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Thanks!!! Stay tuned. 

 Reviewer: angelbaby Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 08 2014 02:32 am
Title: Chapter 2

like like like



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Thanks for reading, stay tuned!!!

 Reviewer: SenieceTaO Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 12:21 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Loved the update! Breezy and Phoenix have an interesting relationship,love them! Oh oh, can't wait to see what happens between Breezy and Jace.

Author's Response:

Thanks!!! Stay tuned. I'm going to try to post every week. Breezy and Phoenix are really fun when their together. I love them too. Things are about to get very interesting between Breezy and Jace. 

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 03:54 am
Title: Chapter 2

Update soon. This is amazing!



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Thanks!! Going to try and update weekly. Stay tuned. 

 Reviewer: April_Destinee Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04 2014 01:58 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Oh gosh 0_0 this next chapter is going to be interesting 



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Reviewer: Amy Winehouse Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 03:14 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Yeah. Breezy. 

Update soon, please.



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Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 08:16 am
Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving the buildup, but now its time to find out what the deal is between these two.



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Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 07:24 am
Title: Chapter 2

Update soon. Please!!! Can't wait to see what happens when they see each other again. 



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Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 06:26 am
Title: Chapter 2

Well,  Breezy and Jace ran into each other right away, somehow I knew that it would happen. Is Jace still married? 



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Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 03 2014 05:35 am


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