Reviews For Just One More Try
Title: Chapter 6

Hi Yevette, hope all is well with you.  Missing this story <3



Author's Response:

Awww!!!! That is so sweet. Thanks for asking.  I am so sorry for taking so long. I had a little thing called life step into the picture to throw me off course but I'm back and ready to see what Breezy and Jace are up to. I think that I miss them more than anyone. Plus they are getting pretty restless in my head and want to come out and play. LOL! ! Check in with me by this time next week and see how "Operation Get Breezy " is going. Also we'll see what Phoenix and Akio have going on. 

I really miss you guys. Now it's fine to get back to what's good and that's a sexy Alpha Male on a mission and a hot little Diva with a secret.  Thanks for reading and sticking me. 

Much Love,

Yevette 

Reviewer: Amaya Signed [Report This]
Date: August 30 2014 11:37 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Awe.....



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. Had to take a break but the next chapter will be up and ready next week.  

Yevette 

Reviewer: nightseer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 10 2014 08:04 am

Title: Chapter 6

OMG!!!!!! Sooooooooo good! Oh its building and I cant wait for the bang! Come on, Momma needs a new stick dynamite!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Getting back to what's good.  Had to take a back seat to this thing called life. But baby I'm back. And I miss Breezy and Jace more than anyone. Stick with me. 

Reviewer: Eureka Vignette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2014 02:57 pm

Title: Chapter 6

Great update! Mission get Breezy back is on it's way.

Thank you for the update and for sharing.



Author's Response:

Yes indeed!! He's gotta get her back!! But we're gonna have fun getting reacquainted. 

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate the reviews. They mean a lot. Stay tuned. More coming this week.

Yevette 



Author's Response:

Yes indeed!! He's gotta get her back!! But we're gonna have fun getting reacquainted. 

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate the reviews. They mean a lot. Stay tuned. More coming this week.

Yevette 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 09:13 am

Title: Chapter 6

NOOOO I need more.

I need Jace to spill it all stop stalling DAMMIT HURRY UPPPPP!!!!

Can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response:

LOL!!! More is on the way. The next update is coming in a few days. Yeah, Jace needs to get with it but he's got a plan. He's gotta convince her to trust him again. 

So please stay tuned. More is on the way. I appreciate the reviews. Yevette

Reviewer: thincakes Signed [Report This]
Date: July 20 2014 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 6

Great story. I love Jace character and Phoenix. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it. New update in a few days. Please stay tuned. 

I love Jace and Phoenix too they are great. Lots more to go. 

Yevette

Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 6

So good!! Have go get your girl! Love love this story. Thanks for sharing.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. It means the world to me. New update coming next week. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2014 03:47 am

Title: Chapter 6

what a wonderful story, keep up the good work



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. I really appreciate it. New post coming next week. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 07:07 am

Title: Chapter 6

I'm so torn between Paul and Jace !



Author's Response:

IKR!!! I so love Paul. Of course Jace is my heart but Paul is right there. 

Thanks for reading. Will post again next week. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 6

Ok. This was transitional of a sort. Breezy now knows his marital status. This is also Jace's chance to start over and make his case and state his intentions going forward into the future with Breezy. However, all this can happen after the explanations. I need to know!!!


And what did Paul mean Jace has done something else?


Wating for more......


Good stuff!



Author's Response:

I love love love a reader that pays attention to details. Yeah, this is sort of a transitional period for Jace. He knows that he wants Breezy but he's gotta figure out a way to get her to trust him again. 

As for Breezy, well, she still isn't ready to let Jace in on her life. She just wants to get this wedding overwith and get back to the safety of her home in Texas. Away from any drama and to keep her past hidden. But as we all know, things have a way of coming to the light. 

So stay tuned. And thanks for reading. I really appreciate it. 

Yevette

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 04:27 am

Title: Chapter 6

So now Breezy knows that Jace isn't married to Sara the crazy ho any more, yay!! So when will hetell that the baby wasn't his and that the bitch lied so that he would marrry her?  I love Akiro, Phoenix's strange tail is lucky!! Jace had his work cut out for him. So cut!!



Author's Response:

Lady, you have me cracking up over here. LOL!! Yeah, some things have finally come to the light. He still has to let her know about the baby and the deal with Sara. But right now, he's just trying to gain her trust. Breezy on the other hand is still playing her cards close to the vest. But oh, when it all comes to the light its going to be crazy and what Jace does....

Ha! You thought I was going to tell. LOL!! NOPE. You're just gonna have to stick with me to see how it all turns out. 

Thanks for reading. I love your reviews. Another chapter next week. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 03:52 am

Title: Chapter 6

Good update. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. New chapter coming next week. Stay tuned. 

Yevette

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 02:24 am

Title: Chapter 6

Another awesome chapter!!! Super glad to see Breezy allowing herself to actually hear Jace out this time. That was definitely a huge step and I'm extremely proud of her!

But, Jace is still mine! So, Breezy, girl, I'll allow you to have him for those next couple of hours, but I expect him to be returned untouched! ;)

Oh, man, I can't wait to see what you've got in store for these two. I love them both. Promise me you'll keep pumping out more of your awesomeness? :)

p.s. I love Phoenix and Akio. They're so freaking cute!!



Author's Response:

Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! I always look forward to your reviews. Yeah, Breezy had to put her big girl panties on and start listening to whats going on. 

Now you know that you and Breezy have to share. LOL!! There's enough of the sexy to go around . But if you think you love him now, then you're gonna wanna marry him when you see what he wants to show her. 

And whats not to love about Akio and Phoenix. They are just adorable together. 

Thanks for all of your positive energy. You Rock!!! 

Yevette

Reviewer: Twelve20One Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 02:16 am

Title: Chapter 6

I hate when I read stuff like what just happened at the end, he goes in and just gives up. Its so typical and disappointing can't anyone take a chance?

Author's Response:

It's all part of a bigger Plan that he has. So much has time has passed. I think he wants to get her to trust him again. At least that's what he's telling me right now. LOL!! But who knows what will be going through his head tomorrow.

Thanks for reading. I hope the next chapter is better for you. Keep me informed on your thoughts. I really appreciate them. They are helping me become a better writer.

Yevette

Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 18 2014 02:10 am



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