i swear im am just loving ever chapter you are posting love them
Reviewer: yamiik Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 02 2015 08:04 am
I can't wait !! So good
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed




Date: March 02 2015 07:43 am
Oh I can't wait!! And I can't wait to see what is going on and why those things are after her. But most of all I want Adam to put it on Avery. We have all been waiting on bated breath. Thank you for these quick updates!!
Reviewer: iamwhatiam6904 Signed




Date: March 02 2015 07:33 am
Finally! I love it!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: March 02 2015 06:38 am
I lOVE THIS STORY!
Reviewer: DIG ROCKS Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 02 2015 06:33 am
Well that's a twist ! Nice work. That "touch me" moment was real hot and all. Am looking forward to reading more about the story which turned even moreinteresting. Still hope to get one hot threesome with Adam, CJ and Hades cause that CJ is hot and he man who enjoys to eat pussy deserve one good fuck.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the love! But three stars? Ouch! I'll try to do better!
Reviewer: RedHobo Signed


Date: March 01 2015 03:39 pm
What is going on?! So CJ is bad and they are all protecting Avery? Obviously they are not human...wow. Update soon!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed




Date: March 01 2015 12:33 am
CJ is hot and Adam's a fool. Why should Hades wait on him any longer?? He's sleeping with groupies, having a good time and leaving her waiting. He's stupid and he's gonna lose her completely, but sometimes it has to be that way. Maybe he'll realize that he loves her later on, but for now let her get with CJ!!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed




Date: March 01 2015 12:04 am
I'm exited about this story!! on to chapter 2!!! :)
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed




Date: February 28 2015 10:49 pm
Love this new paranormal aspect to the story. I kne something was up with Adam, you did an excellent job of bring it out and showing how the other characters fit in. Looking forward to learning more about CJ, I am always suspicious of any dude who likes oral sex too much and doesn't want anything in return.
Reviewer: kuriouskale Signed




Date: February 28 2015 07:52 pm
insane...! this is so good! thanks for the update!!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed




Date: February 28 2015 11:58 am
Shit just got real! You took this story from great to awesomesauce and it can only get better here great job !
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed




Date: February 27 2015 09:33 pm
Whew, my mind is blown. You have just turned this story up a notch and I can't wait to see what happens now.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed




Date: February 27 2015 07:23 pm
Okay, this story has turned into something completely different from what I expected and now I am even more hooked! When Quin called Adam Falkor, I was wondering why the name Falkor? Then I find that Tony and Smith have other names too...Well I did find more editing mistakes in this chapter but not enough to make me cringe and you are still light years above some stories in the correct use of language and grammar. Now I am even more engrossed in this book and excited for the next update! You rock!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the love! I try my hardest, but working two jobs and freelancing doesn't lend me the critical eye I wish I had before posting. Sometimes I just want to get it out there instead of pouring over every detail. But there are a few glaring mistakes that I've cleaned up in my offline version. Thanks so much for your honesty! It'll keep me on my toes!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 05:44 pm
Wow! This chapter ending for me seemed pretty intense but you still have got me asking, why is Adam so set against following his feelings? Since I want to know, I have no choice but to keep reading in hope of finding out. You are an excellent author and I have to keep giving you kudos for the quality in editing your work. Even a really good story is maligned by sloppy editing that is filled with grammatical errors. Such detractions and distractions are not present in your work as I have read and I am in awe of you.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 05:23 pm
I really hope to learn more about the reasons for Adam's refusal to acknowledge his feelings for Avery. I wish she didn't use CJ but that's what people do...Another excellent chapter! And it's so awesome that your chapters are so well written and edited. You rock!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 04:55 pm
Another good chapterr. I hope at some point that we get to learn more of Avery and Adam's history together.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 04:45 pm
Best friends in love who are scared to admit feelings seem to define Avery and Adam. This book continues to be so good!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 04:27 pm
Such excellent work!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 04:17 pm
So well written and I love the characters. I also like that the story is about a black woman playing metal. You rock!
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed




Date: February 27 2015 04:06 pm
awesome. I love this story, the chemistry between the characters...EVERY SINGLE THING ABOUT THIS STORY!!!
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed




Date: February 27 2015 02:10 pm
Well, this is a turn I didn't expect.
Reviewer: Khamalani Signed




Date: February 27 2015 01:04 pm
Things just got a WHOLE lot more interesting ....i 'll most definately stay tuned
Reviewer: LetMeDream Signed




Date: February 27 2015 01:00 pm
What are Adam and Quintella? Avery isn't human either, so what is she? So good!! More please
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed




Date: February 27 2015 12:30 pm
This story took a craaaaZzyyy shift lol
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Date: February 27 2015 08:29 am