LOL. I giggled at the end because in the beginning of the story, I wondered if the hot young German could be Neuer and I was right! He is ridiculously fine, and a pretty damned good keeper, too! I'd look forward to reading more about Tina and Manu in the future.
Author's Response:
He is certainly beautiful!
Reviewer: caramia_darling Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 02:03 pm
Continue!
Author's Response:
Wish granted!
Reviewer: Dreamingofalifetime Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 06:42 am
Keep going, I want to read more.
Author's Response:
Read on!
Reviewer: shakaj98 Signed
[Report This]Date: January 15 2015 04:00 am
I definately don't think this should be a one shot. It sounds like a good story waiting to happen. It doesn't have to be long. When people say one shot, I automatically think of the quickie sexcapade stories on the Chamber, that sound like there's an STD waiting on the other end of a blood test for one of the characters. The stories just ended before the burn upon urination began. Write on my friend.
Author's Response:
HAHAH at the STD. This review had me rolling!
Reviewer: HumorMe Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 03:37 am
I give this first chapter two thumbs up!! Manu is sexy and if he plays soccer his body is on fire. More please!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 02:23 am
So far I enjoyed what I read. There was exposition without being over kill. As well as the intro to the male stranger that caught her eye. I felt it was going to be one of those situations where something is missing what is yet to be revealed. I would like to see how it ends. If you can continue. I try not to over aanalyze.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! A well written review!
Reviewer: reader101 Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 02:15 am
Continue, please! Make the next chapter longer, though. I was just getting into the story. When it ended, I was like, "Noooooooooooo!" Lol.
Author's Response:
I hope its a bit longer for you!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 15 2015 01:38 am
Guuuuuuurl -_- if you dont continue I will cry!!! This story has so much potential and I love your writing style!!!!!!! Are you fluent in German? :)
Author's Response:
Google girl!
Reviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 10:15 pm
Continue pls, and try to finish. Too many stories left hanging.
Reviewer: bobbie Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 10:13 pm
Like thé start so far, looking forward to more of Tina and Manu.
Reviewer: liberty lady Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 09:30 pm
I'm intrigued and would definitely like more.
Reviewer: CaramelGal Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 08:58 pm
Keep it going, please. I am all for the man being the pursuer, but she should call him...one time.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 08:42 pm
Cute start.
Reviewer: Candace Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 08:22 pm
Ha ! Love it ! Love the pics too I'm a HUGE Football Fan ! (soccer) :)
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 07:47 pm
Continue!
Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2015 07:20 pm