Oh gosh.... I was definitely wondering how they meet. And this dude is 375?!!! He's a warewolf? This just got really interesting. 2 years turns into 65 warewolf years. LOl. They both old as hell!!
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 03:48 am
Lil Eli is so adorable!! LOl
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 03:31 am
Great chapter and overall story....
Reviewer: laurie94 Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 01:44 am
*girly scream*. I loved this story on lit but I never thought I'd get the ending so glad you decided to finish it...
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 12:42 am
*girly scream*. I loved this story on lot but I never thought I'd get the ending so glad you decided to finish it...
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 12:41 am
*girly scream*. I loved this story on lot but I never thought I'd get the ending so glad you decided to finish it...
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2015 12:41 am
I enjoyed this story very much on literotica, however im glad you decided to put it on the chamber. Literotica officially sucks as of this new year and actually the pass months. Especially the bw/wm category of it. So super kudos to you for saving your self front the pits. Anyway great read hope you finish this one I really like it.
Reviewer: pillow82 Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 08 2015 09:25 pm
Love it hurry back soon
Reviewer: minxie Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2015 07:45 pm
Why did she pick Scotland? How many black folks reside in Scotland? How she lay low and protect her son if she can't be inconspicuousness?
Author's Response:
If you're searching for a city raised black woman whose family resides in Florida and Texas. Would you search Scotland first?
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2015 07:01 pm
Elena is cray cray and should be put out of misery. I kinda like Adrian and be he prove himself worthy of Zaira. If Elena were to die I wouldn't miss her.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2015 06:36 pm
Loving this story so far! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: April 05 2015 05:56 am
That was awesome and I can't wait to read more!!!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2015 08:15 pm
I remember this story! I could not think of the name of it to do a search and always wondered what happened to it. I think I did read it on the other site because more of what happened since I read the first three chapters. Thanks for posting!! I cannot wait for more..
Reviewer: OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 12:03 pm
I love this it was one of my favorites on literotica.
Reviewer: lym7293 Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 04:35 am
This is a very interesting. I can see lil Eli. Can't wait to see how this will turn out.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 12:56 am
Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 12:11 am
Whoo ! What a Great start. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 02 2015 12:07 am
I remember reading this story on Lit! Glad to see it here! I'm loving where this story could possibly go. Adrian is not one to mess with, but he found his match in Zaira. Hmmm...makes me curious as to why Eli took to Adrian so fast. Just a few typos here and there, but they aren't a detriment to the story. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 10:51 pm
Loving this so far!
Reviewer: naytherocker Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 09:29 pm
Zsira's husband died in comat and she is a private detective? If smething were to happpen to her who would take care Eli? What type of business are Adrian and |Conrad involved? Why is she involving her children in her investgation? Becuause that is what moving him with her is tantamount to. Cray Cray
Author's Response:
Correct...Zaira is a homicide detective & Jeremiah (husband) dies in combat. No matter what, Eli will be in safe hands unless I decide to change things up (which I'm not). Conrad is involved with different MOBS but Adrian's focus is on the pack (since he's alpha). The purpose of moving to another country is too start over and start fresh for both Zaira and Eli.
Thanks for reading!
Author's Response:
Correct...Zaira is a homicide detective & Jeremiah (husband) dies in combat. No matter what, Eli will be in safe hands unless I decide to change things up (which I'm not). Conrad is involved with different MOBS but Adrian's focus is on the pack (since he's alpha). The purpose of moving to another country is too start over and start fresh for both Zaira and Eli.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 08:46 pm
Loving the cast!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: April 01 2015 08:35 pm