Such a great story! What is she becoming after that night? Werewolf? Vampire? Sorry, not familiar with the challenge.
Author's Response:
Magdalen will still be human. The compound is used to give her certain alien traits that will enable survival on Vaydren's planet. Thanks GreenRoots!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed
[Report This]Date: May 17 2015 11:56 pm
beatuiful sweet read - thank you!
Author's Response:
YW. Thank you, Yuukiyanagi!
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2015 08:04 am
That was swexy, that's sweet and sexy!
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks Pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2015 03:15 am
Loved it and would like to get rich's story from consequences.
Author's Response:
Thanks Indigo bluee. I'm working on it.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2015 02:44 am
Thanks for answering the challenge!
This piece was BEAUTIFUL!!
Love to see more of it.
Author's Response:
Thanks and you're welcome, Elizablu!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2015 12:28 am
Holy crap Batman! I love it and can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thanks Dallas5star! No plans to continue this one at the moment, but I never know when inspiration will hit.
Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed [Report This]Date: May 14 2015 12:23 am
"In the moment, you will remember how deeply I love you and count the pain as a small ransom to pay for the oneness of our flesh and surety of our future." DAMN! the man is smooth.
Author's Response:
Lol. Thanks Jacqua43!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2015 10:29 pm
This story deserves to be continued. Amazing chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks SweetCoCo76!
Reviewer: SweetCoCo76 Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2015 10:10 pm
Wow...lovely.
Author's Response:
Thanks Jaye Sims.
Reviewer: Jaye Sims Signed [Report This]Date: May 13 2015 08:35 pm