Ugh... I love this story!!!! I hope you update very often and make it have a bunch of really long chapters like this one. Happy 4th!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!! Chapter lengths and update intervals will vary. I'll do my best with both. But you'll be pleased to know the next update is around 6K words and is awaiting a final read-through for posting in the next day or two.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 07:20 pm
Aw, that's so cute. Diya has a boyfriend that both women and men admire. A real Harry Styles.
Author's Response:
I'm so out of the loop. I had to goole Harry Styles. Lol. Thanks VeMo!
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 06:32 pm
Yay...OMG!!! I'm so happy this story is continuing. They have insane chemistry and I just love this story. The sex will be a-amazing!! I'm sure they will have some problems along the way but that's expected. He's perfect and she's his match. Next chapter please. You're so talented!!
Author's Response:
Thanks Michmom!!! So happy to hear you're as excited about these two as I am. The next chapter is in the works and should be up in the next day or so.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed
[Report This]Date: July 04 2015 05:52 pm
omg! Why is Brandon so awesome?! I like that they were both so mature about what they were feeling between one another and that they didn't beat around the bush and waste any time. They know what they wanted and just went for it which i can appreciate. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response:
Thanks, hellowWORLD! Brandon is pretty adorable, and he and Diya are all about being open and honest with their feelings (him more than her). Let's see how long they can endure the transparency. Update imminent.
Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 03:36 pm
Brandon makes my toes curl and my (and Diya's) cat...purr! I'm quite sure that admission is numero-uno on the T.M.I. list but hell, we're fam, right? Lol! Dude is uber sexy! His visage should be in Websters for sex appeal - so much so that I'm drooling.
On the technical, I loved the new installment's seamless transition/continuation into Diya & Brandon's destined-to-meet-again story. My preference is continuity: next night/next day scenes vs years and several bedded-partners later sagas. Imo, it challenges the author's creativity while maintaining the readers' enthusiasm. Once the couple has been established... then their fairytale, or nightmare, or something in between can progress naturally for however many months or decades our fabulous writer deems their journey to be. That being said, I'd travel anywhere and in any fashion the illustrious Joelle Jax's wonderful mind and awesome talent takes me! :)
Fabulous as always!
Author's Response:
Thanks JV4ME!!! Glad to hear you liked the lead-in to this phase of Brandon and Diya's love story. I definitely get what you're saying about the joy of reading a day-by-day build-up sort of romance. For the most part, this story will follow that pattern. However, there will be a few time jumps. As currently plotted, the longest looks to be a matter of weeks and will take place next chapter.
Discussion of cha-cha clenches are always welcomed here. Like you said, we're family : )
Thanks for the fantastic review, and for taking this journey with me! I hope its as enjoyable for you as it has been for me.
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 02:50 pm
Oooh. Sweet!
Author's Response:
Thanks Bookbutterfly!
Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 01:05 pm
no words. i'm borderline hysterical happy. i feel so delirious! to see an update from you and it's about my & Brandon's love story is just...!
JESUS!! I feel like One direction fan - simply crazy!!
f. i need a moment before i can leave a review - i'm too happy to think straight, lool!
thanks JJ - welcome back!!
Author's Response:
Yuukiyanagi, oh how I've missed you and your highly entertaining reviews. I LOVE it!!! And thank you for allowing me to write the story of your love ; )
Reviewer: Yuukiyanagi Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 09:09 am
I see now, this is a story I shouldn't read while playing with sharp objects or eating.
Harriett Snubman
I almost choked on a really good tortilla chip.
Love this.
Author's Response:
Lol! Thanks BellaChica!!!
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 05:11 am
Interesting start!
Author's Response:
Thanks Baha Malo!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 04:01 am
Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god! Oh my god!
I'm so happy you brought this story back, you have no idea! I was so over the moon wth Brandon and Diya and I'm ever so grateful the muse has spoken and their story has found its way here!
I just cannot wait to see where their story goes...SO HAPPYYYYY!!!
Author's Response:
Your enthusiasm for these two is infectious and oh so appreciated. Thanks GreenRoots!!!
Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 03:23 am
Toni, Brandon was in a date with a woman what made you rhink he swung that way? The tattoo s? Bransdon paid you no attention at all, boy! Brandonis my hero, he went for what wanted abd he wants Diya. Yippe skippy!!
Author's Response:
Some people put on blinders when it comes to getting what they want. Toni won't be the only one. Thanks Pmgayles!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 02:18 am
Ooooh the feels...the feels!! Loving this story and trying to figure out how I missed the pre-quel. Thanks for sharing the hott-ness with us.
And can I just say that Diya is my soul twin??? I definitely own all of her quirks and sense of humor. Keep em' coming!
Author's Response:
You're so very welcome. So glad you're enjoying the sotry, and that you've found a kindred spirit in Diya. Thanks for the fab review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 04 2015 01:10 am
Sao much chemistry between these two. I just love it! 😍
Author's Response:
So happy to hear that! Thanks Musicluva!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2015 11:43 pm
I loved it so much I'm speechless technically speaking I'm not but you get the point. Gosh I love all of your stories they always leave me wanting more. anxiously waiting for your next update.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks, Zoleka!!! So glad you've enjoyed my stories. The next update of this one is in the works.
Reviewer: Zoleka Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2015 11:40 pm
Whoa, you are such a brilliant story teller...you sucked me into Brandon and Diya's story with Love, God and Ultimatums and now you have upped the anty with the 2nd phase...we get to see the development of love between Brandon and Diya...your writing makes their connection so palpable...I am excited to go on this journey...since Consequences I know you can do angst like nobody's business so I'm just gone read and watch you rock it...
Author's Response:
Aww... Thanks Jahchannah!!! So happy to have you along for the ride.
Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2015 07:12 pm
Wonderful beginning.
Author's Response:
Thanks Bredreaway!
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: July 03 2015 07:11 pm
I absolutely love this story (and your writing in general). I'm so glad your back with this !
Author's Response:
Thanks Miss J! Glad you're enjoying it so far.
Reviewer: Miss J. Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 03 2015 05:36 pm