I'm beginning to like him...
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 06:54 pm
Love love the story. But why does the chapters have to be so short. I know you are breaking down the chapters in days but it is quite frustrating. Because when am about to get into it, that's when the chapters is over. Please more. More scene in the chapters. Thank you and I love that it is a lost/stranded Island story. There are not many of these and your doing an excellent job on character development. Thanks again and cannot wait for your next update.
Reviewer: Shanee Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 09:15 am
Great update! Hope they continue to get along. Hope they rescue efforts come soon.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 10 2015 02:01 am
Hunter needs to do that SOS---makes me thing he don't want to go home. I still wouldn't trust him.
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2015 09:38 pm
They chose the right plant because bamboo is tough and it grows in abundance. I guess they are unintentionally (feng shui) their new home. I'm liking Hunter more and more. I think apart of Anika is afraid and concern about what other people think of her. I believe when Hunter finally gets a good look at her body, he will be so in love with her that the only thing he notice is her LIGHT. They are not aware of their new found friendship yet. I love the funny banter between these two. Thanks for the update MP
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2015 06:46 pm
Look at Hunter trying to get to know Anika! I want to see Anika open but once Hunter looses some more of his asshole tendencies.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 09 2015 05:19 pm
So glad to see that Hunter isn't being such a dickweed. I hope his mother drops dead. She's the worst.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2015 03:06 pm
Wow, that "mother" of his is a piece of work. I kinda feel sorry for the boy.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2015 07:49 am
Loved the update and glad they getting along much better!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2015 01:57 am
Hunter is letting his true self out, the son that his father tried to make him. Hunter doesn't seem to like his mother either, wish I could feel bad about that. Not!!! Corrine is a bitch and his father should divorce her leaving her penniless!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 08 2015 12:08 am
Love this story it's Excellent!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2015 11:44 pm
What a wonderful surprise Anika and Hunter are working together, I like that. They are opening up a little about their lives back home. I bet Hunter never thought that helping his father build a tree house when he was little would give him tools to survive on a deserted island. I do think Hunter will be a changed man when he goes back home. I'm wondering what kind of upbringing was Corrine sudjected to, how she's acting I don't think it was a happy one. When I first meet my husband in high school I couldn't stand him at all, I thought he was a jack-ass play boy who thought the sun rised and set with his ass, boy was I wrong. You should never judge a person without getting to know them first. I think Anika and Hunter will have a everlasting friendship and romantic relationship well pass their time on the island. I think Corrine will have a heart attack, pops will be very happy that his son chose his on mate in life. I think being stranded on that island is the best thing that could have happen to Hunter and Anika. Thanks for the update MP
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2015 11:35 pm
Hunter and Anika will have their hands full building the shelter, but their determination will see it through. I like this story concept.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: September 07 2015 08:44 am
What happen to the pictures? I really wanted to see Anika and Hubter.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 03:22 pm
Corrine is something else. Hunter Sr. has some sense. No wonder Junior is such a spoiled brat. I wonder how Anika and Hunter will hook up. With such diverse background they see like the ultimate odd couple. Hunter is so into himself. Anthing from perfection would seem not to his liking. While Corrine comes off as aggressive, she is tender and sensitive. She has sacrafice for her family. And because of her skin condiction deems herself unworthy of love, I hope Hunter is able to see what a dersing lady she is. She someone to spoli her for once. If Hunter is that man, time will tell.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 03:20 pm
Geez... Anika has had it rough. Her bone-headed boyfriend didn't make things easier. I hope Anika finds someone who is worthy of her.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 02:52 pm
This may appear cruel, but Corrine gets on my nerves. Hunter's father is better in that department with his arrogance. Its almost like it expects the common folks to bow down to his edict. Hunter is no more important then the rest of the people missing. I there his family but... that family is lace with such arrogance.
Compare to Anika's family, I see strength and warmth. I hope Nana and the twins will be okay.
Date: September 05 2015 02:40 pm
I just started reading this story and I'm hooked. Anika and Sterling are fascinating. I'm chumping at the bits to read this unique story.
Reviewer: juno Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 02:31 pm
I like the story line. But i don't like Hunter's mom. It is time dear old Dad to leave her. All she cares about is money prestige and what her friens think about her. Why did he married her in the first place. It is time for Corine to go.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 02:13 pm
God Corrine is such a bitch...no wonder hunter became so spoilt..y didn't his father fight harder with his stupid wife to make sterling a btr man..he seems to hv always let corrine hv her way..wht was he thinking marrying a shallow materialistic bitch like Corrine.. It's nice to see fond memories between sterling and his dad..it shows how diff sterling would hv turned out if not for Corrine's bad influence.. Looks like sterling still has some good left in him it was repressed by his arrogant mother..him wanting to build the tree house shows he treasures memories with his dad..being on the island and around anika seems to hv given hunter some humility and brought him back down into the real world where he has to use his brains and skills to survive..maybe anika will start to see a diff side to sterling..like to see hunter develop further to become someone worthy of anikas friendship, trust and respect..excited to see him build the tree house..cant wait to see how it turns out..love to see hunter and anika converse more and get to know each other better...can u make the chapters a bit longer plzz..love ur story..update soon!!!
Reviewer: Jenny Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 01:38 am
Great update! Glad they seem to be working as a team now. Hope Sterling continues to be helpful.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: September 05 2015 01:24 am
I am addicted to this story MP.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2015 09:58 pm
Yeah Hunter is starting to get his sh*t together. Now let's see how long it last because we all know his brain don't function for long on being responsible for to long.
Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]Date: September 04 2015 09:53 pm