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Title: Slim Whims

I really hate her mother and sister, her father makes me ill!! Why does he allow his wife to treat Willow like she does?  



Author's Response:

Willow's father is the perfect example of an oblivious man. He generally doesn't pick up on things unless it is happening right in front of him and only then he acts. Otherwise, he thinks his wife and daughters are getting along just fine.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 11:41 pm
Title: The Lucky Unlucky Girl

Yay, my story is back!!



Author's Response:

LOL, I apologize for keeping it away for so long!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 11:25 pm
Title: Home is Where the Heart is

Home. Yep, that's where you are Willow. Bastian knows exactly what he wants.



Author's Response:

Home is definitely where the heart is! I've always enjoyed writing these characters because their journey is an intense kind of experience for me.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 11:01 pm
Title: Slim Whims

Nah, Bastian is ALL man. DAMN!

Oh Willow, there is so much to you than the physical. I really like her. And while she has some issues, she's stronger than most who have to deal with being judged by looks alone.

And yeah Willow, that smart mouth is going to get you into so much trouble. Bastian might just make you put it to better use. :)

MJ, onward. Loving it.



Author's Response:

There are so many women in my life, including myself, that struggle with the same body issues and self-esteem issues as Willow. I, myself, am still struggling with my weight, but I am definitely on more accepting terms about it than Willow. However, she has a smart mouth, LOL! And Sebastian seems to like it.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 10:35 pm
Title: Silly Little Fool

So glad to see this back. Missed it. You rock, Chica!

 

For some reason, in this chapter, part/parts is replaced with parented. Just wanted you to know.

 

On to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I noticed that too. I corrected it! I am going through the chapters for any mistakes. I thought I caught them all. :)

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 04 2015 10:01 pm


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