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Title: Chapter 3

Trouble is brewing and it has Roger name on it. Jeremy went cray cray in that car, he was so wrong. Thanks for the updates.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 28 2017 02:20 pm
Title: Chapter 3

Jeremy went to far😤 i'm ready to lay hands on him too😡 👊 Nice update and you are on a roll😁

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 19 2017 08:18 pm
Title: Chapter 2

Love, love, love this story so far! I cannot wait until the next chapter! Alyssa and Jeremy are so cute together, I'm already falling in love with them!

 Reviewer: universauhl Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 03:24 pm
Title: Chapter 2

I'm side 👀 ing Jeremy. He better not hurt Alyssa😡 All this doubt about their relationship is making me uneasy😬 Nice update👍

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 05:30 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Yes!! this is going to be so good. One brother is a psychopath ( who goes around killing everyone in his path ) and the other brother is a cop ( that's going to put his reign of terror to an end )I like! Great job!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 03:08 pm
Title: Prologue

I'm interested... but who is Sean? Please continue.

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Date: May 13 2017 03:03 pm
Title: Characters

Nice cast

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 03:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Megan needs to get molly wop by Alyssa👊👋

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 03:20 am
Title: Prologue

Roger is a lunatic😱

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 03:16 am
Title: Chapter 1

Intense story. I hope you continue.

 Reviewer: Jane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 12 2017 02:03 am
Title: Prologue

Yes and NOW!!!

 Reviewer: Shanee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 16 2015 09:03 am
Title: Prologue

WOW! Mouth agape! Since he's got the AXE in his hand, I guess he did kill them. DAMN, what a way to go.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 15 2015 01:41 am
Title: Prologue

Roger is psychotic so already Jeremy has to be either naive or stupid to be manipulated by a man with no moral conscience...sure one can say that Roger has to be extremely masterful and I mean extremely masterful at manipulation...yet for anyone to be so manipulated by a person like Roger would suggest they rely little on their own powers of observation and desire for truth and right...not holding out a lot of hope for Jeremy's character...maybe not letting us know up front that Roger is so vile would have been better but that's just me...

 Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2015 03:24 am
Title: Prologue

YES!!!!

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Date: November 13 2015 03:10 am
Title: Prologue

This seems like it's going to be an excellent story, but I hate to see what happens because I could just about guess. Roger is going to be a huge problem to Jeremy. I hope to BOB that Alyssa doesn't fall for Roger's crap. So, I guess Roger is going to be jealous of Jeremy and make his life a living hell on the sly. This Sean boy that Roger called seems more like a brother/friend and someone who causes and cleans up messes. Wow. 

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Date: November 13 2015 03:04 am
Title: Characters

Love the cast!!

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2015 02:31 am
Title: Prologue

omg please continue this! You had me at summary!

 Reviewer: skye Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 11:49 pm
Title: Prologue

This story is going to be good. 

 Reviewer: Tee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 06:55 pm
Title: Prologue

WOW ! More Please !

 Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 04:40 pm
Title: Prologue

Please continue 😊

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Date: November 12 2015 03:53 pm
Title: Prologue

Please, please continue.  Finally,  something different.  Thank gid!

 Reviewer: funmi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 02:41 pm
Title: Prologue

Well damn,  he could've just kicked het cheating ass out. There is no one to root for in this story. Can't stand the victims, Roger is cray cray and Sean is now an accessory to murder. No one to root for at all!  Sean is goibg to hring this crazy fool around his woman?  This is not a HEA type of story.  Nothing redeemable about a double homicde.  I love my HEA's so I don't know if I woll continue to read this one.



Author's Response:

Sean is not one of the MAIN characters. Jeremy and Alyssa haven't been introduced yet. I too hate stories where all the main characters are unlikable and un-redeemable. This story isn't like that. I think if I post the pictures it will probably be less confusing. Sorry about that. Pics will be up soon.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 12:20 pm
Title: Prologue

Yes very interested.  Keep going because I love stories like this.

 Reviewer: Mavs0515 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 12 2015 11:25 am


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