Title: The Move

Jovan wedding, I have no problem with getting married quickly to the right person

Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous now you know that these two belong together.  Just like peanut butter and jelly.  Just because the writers of OLTL couldn't see that this writer does.  Thnx for the comment.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 13 2018 05:20 pm

Title: The Move

I support it either way😆 I'm digging this story😆

Author's Response:

Tre, as always, thnx for your comments.  I just noticed that you have commented on most of my stories and I sincerely thank you for your support.  I thnx all those who take the time to read.  Those of you who leave reviews I thnx you too.

I might have a chapter of two more for these two.  Their story is not finished.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 13 2018 12:29 am

Title: The Move

Thank you for the post. I must admit...I disliked John McBain with a passion. He treated Evangeline deplorable. I don't think there is a writer out there that can make me ship them, ever. ( He had a great woman and he dumped her for Natalie! Natalie of all people and for what, exactly? Only to end up divorced later on, serves him right.) To be honest, their chemistry was way off, compared to hers and Todd's. That being said, you wrote this story beautifully.

I just wished she waited a bit before saying yes. Got to know him better and got an apology for his and Natalie's ill treatment towards her.

Have a blessed and wonderful week.

Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous I thnx you for your very candid comments.  I agree with you that McBain treated her deplorably and Natalie didn't know any better because she was 'gutter trash'.  Don't give up on it just yet.  I wasn't certain if I wanted to leave it as is and if I continue all will be explained.  Evangeline is not stupid and neither is she a glutton for punishment.  


You too have a blessed and wonderful week.  I always do with God first.  Even if junk happens He always sees me through it.


Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 12 2018 11:46 pm

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