Hoping you post again soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 19 2021 10:44 pm
Yooo! It has gone dark real quick and I'm getting worried for Thea on a simple fact I know the pattern of your stories lol!! I am also questioning how crazy Remy is with Lakelyn (is that how you spell their names)? I can't wait!!
Reviewer: luvrayne Signed [Report This]Date: March 15 2021 05:03 am
Ummmm....what did I just read?? Is Thea going to be the victim of abuse at the tender age of sixteen with the first boy she's interested in?! Inner thoughts of she can't lose him? She barely knows him; much less worrying about losing him! She might want to take stock of herself because could this be how her mother got strung out about her father like she is now?! Looking at the mess her mother has become? Wonder just how strong and levelheaded Thea really is after all....
And Everett....what the hell is wrong with this dude?
This has taken an interesting turn.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed
[Report This]Date: March 14 2021 11:41 pm
This was way too short! Hope you're able to update again soon!
I'm hoping she stands up for herself. Everett is completely manipulating her and she's allowing herself to be his doormat.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 13 2021 11:38 pm
I'm trying to figure out if Everett is possessive or possessed 😠there's some strong creepy vibes going on. Thea fate could be that of Lakelyn. Birds of a feather flock together. IJS🙂 Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2021 12:40 pm
Everett Everett Everett
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: March 13 2021 05:22 am
That was a stupid idea from Cartier. Also, Bizzy and Seth can look as crazy as they want. DO NOT play THOSE kinds of games! EVER! Messing with someones feelings because you have insecurity issues is NEVER a good idea. That's right Thea, laugh that foolishness off! Don't make trouble where there is none. And yes, try not to be needy either. Its too bad that she's really the only truly levelheaded one in her group, because there's just no one available to give her some good advice if she needed it and she has zero experience with this.
One of Thea's best qualities is that she's straight up. She doesn't BS because her life is such that she can't afford to. She's too busy trying to keep her family together. Hoping everyday her mother doesn't do something to land her and her little brother in foster care! And by the way, basically raising him herself when she's still a kid herself.
And I'm not sure about what Everett is doing either. Why is he getting angry over there? Instead of taking it slow with her, he's opening her up to attack! That kind of thing makes me a bit wary of him.
She should also stay as far away from that party as she can. She didn't have anything in common with those kids before, and she still doesn't. Her life is already complicated enough without the mean girls pulling a Carrie on her at a party.
Awaiting more...
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 10 2021 11:11 pm
I think Holland has bad intention and omg Everett is going to snap!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 09 2021 12:15 am
Nice updates
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2021 10:19 am
I really love this story and get so excited that you are updating it frequently. I come to this site looking forward to read the next chapter. I hope I get to read the next one very soon.
I feel like Everette is moving fast and kinda need to earn it a little lol. I don't have doubt he's feeling Thea... but like I am waiting on him expressing when he wanted her and why. I want to know his intentions with my girl! Also. Thea. Don't go to Holland's party please lol. Everything is a whirlwind and idk how Thea is handling it.
Reviewer: Caribbean gyal Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2021 10:08 am
I love a jealous Everett! I can't wait til the next update.
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2021 07:59 am
You are making my day with your story updates . I am in love with the story line and can't wait to see what's in store with Thea and Everett!
Reviewer: Diana Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 08 2021 04:56 am
Love it!!🥰
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: March 08 2021 12:54 am
These chapters getting better and better
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 07 2021 06:10 am
Angel or devil indeed! What was that little display about?!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: March 07 2021 04:00 am
SO loved this update! Starting to get into the good stuff!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 07 2021 01:21 am
I really enjoy this story and it's the only reason I still check the site.
Hopefully this one gets finished because I loved all your other ones too, but you always walked away from them.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 06 2021 06:31 pm
Do I sense a supernatural twist coming? Lol. Great update! Very excited to see where the story goes!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 06 2021 11:35 am
Awesome chapter. Love the build up and how her feelings are described
Reviewer: Bel Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 06 2021 08:17 am
I want to know what Lakelyn was about to tell Thea.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: March 05 2021 04:27 am
Wow!! I hope the next chapter will be uploaded quick!!
Reviewer: Pooh21 Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2021 08:32 pm
I got worried at first, thinking Everett was a bad guy 👦 when it seemed that he got angry about the kiss 💋 but he was just trying to tame the beast 😂 I'm feeling this chapter too! Nice update
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2021 05:32 pm
I love the update
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: March 04 2021 12:19 pm
He's building a relationship w Sam I know that's important for Thea
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2021 02:13 am
Ok Everett is growing on me
Reviewer: Helen Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 04 2021 12:46 am