Interesting start. Update please
Reviewer: Vanessa Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 09 2023 10:24 pm
Waiting for more! Love the buildup.
Reviewer: BlckSiren Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 19 2023 12:41 am
More please! Great writing.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2023 10:20 am
Mrs. Corser don't understand boundaries. She can't even give the child privacy to undress. Please don't let her foster parents be predators. Nice story.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: May 03 2023 10:17 am
This story is good, very good. I enjoy how you as the writer is building these characters up. Why is Marc targeting Whitney? Need another update.
Author's Response:
I don't think Marc is targeting Whitney. Marc has a love hate relationship with her. He's watched Gage go through a lot over her. More will be revealed. I'll be posting Chapter 3 Friday!
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 30 2023 01:20 am
Love the first chapter. Excited for the next update!
Author's Response:
That's so great to hear! Hope to hear your thoughts on chapter 2! It's up now.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 29 2023 01:24 am
Amazing beginning for this story, Please update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Chapter 2 is up now. Looking forward to your thoughts
Reviewer: Frannie Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 28 2023 08:28 pm