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Title: Meet the team.

Sara needs to be replaced and beat within an inch of her life like now!!!  Thank you so much for this chapter, it was trulyan unaexpected surprise.  I think that I will read it again from the beginning as this is one of my favorite stories.

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 16 2010 12:24 am
Title: Meet the team.

Man these silly witches wont leave Kevin alone. I hope he stays true to Grace and keeps telling these woman to get lost. I dont know who is worse Sara or Rina. So glad Grace has backbone, she is going to need it. Thanks for the update.

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 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 11:50 pm
Title: Meet the team.

LOL...well what did Rina think he was going to say? Of course he wants a DNA test! She's not going to get out of it either because Kevin and Grace already want an independent facility to perform the test, so they will be watching that bit closely.

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 Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 11:42 pm
Title: Meet the team.

I am so glad you have finally updated.  Thanks so much!

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 11:21 pm
Title: Meet the team.

I knew that skank didn't actually know who the father of her child was...and the nerve she had to tell Kevin that he would be taking care of the 'both' of them...ummm...if that kid is Kevin's...it's the baby that will benefit...I hope Kevin is smart enough to put the money into a trust fund for the child so his/her money-grubbing mother can't get her grimy hands on it...all Rina wants is a meal ticket...she could care less about that baby...

And now what does that other skank, Sara, want...and what's so important she has to talk to Kevin alone about...poor Grace...she'll have to continue to be strong...these two whores want stop until they get her man...time to put her foot down...or preferably in someone's rear end...



Author's Response:

LOL

Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait. I hope you find the new update to your satisfaction.

 Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 11:13 pm
Title: Meet the team.

I hope Grace takes Sara down a few pegs. Rina is triffling and deserves whatever is coming her way. I hope you update soon. 

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: anj1874 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 11:04 pm
Title: Meet the team.

Nice update...

Now Sara and Rena are out to get him away from his wife Grace...or I believe they are both just jealous.

Thanks for the update. 



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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 10:58 pm
Title: Meet the team.

LOL! Bitches are being through at him left and right.


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 Reviewer: guitarlovechild Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 07:13 pm
Title: What happens in Vegas!

For the love of all things good..You are gonna stop it with the cliffie's!!! Now, she has to deal with that damn Sara! Pain in the ass that she is.

Love the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.



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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 04:17 pm
Title: Meet the team.

I like how Kevin put Rina in her place. He knows she can't be trusted.



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lol

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 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 04:15 pm
Title: Meet the team.

Yay, you updated. I'm so glad. My favorite couple is back. Love the new chapter!

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 04:12 pm
Title: Meet the team.

Sara and Rina are beginning to make my ass ache those two bitch need to take their asses some where and get a f'ckin clue.

Great update more please.  The boys on the team have fallen and love and Kevin not being jealous okay if you say so....he's so cute about his territory.  

Can't wait for more.



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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 03:52 pm
Title: Meet the team.

Grace put Rina in her place and now she needs to tell Sara off. I dont trust that sneaky ho, she wants Kevin for herself and will do anything to get him. It looks like Grace has made a hit with the team and Kevin is a little jealous. Hope the next update is a good as this one but a little longer please.



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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: jai03 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 03:07 pm
Title: Meet the team.

thanks ever so much for the update......I love this story and had almost given up on it being completed....thanks soooo much for this wonderful update....I hope that you will keep the updates coming because I love your writing style and the stories are so real and the characters really come to life

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoy my characters, I love writing this story.

 Reviewer: chelle Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 03:06 pm
Title: Meet the team.

I'm loving this story, hopefully it want take so long for the next chapter.  LOL, LOL, ::)))

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Thank you for the review.

Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: Tracy Reynolds Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 02:36 pm
Title: Meet the team.

That was to short but i was well worth it.

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Thank you for the review.

 Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 12:57 pm
Title: What happens in Vegas!

please update. i miss this story

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Sorry for the long Wait.

 Reviewer: darlene433 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 15 2010 04:32 am
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

really like the story. Kevin and Grace's relationship is so cute.  Sara and Rina are thirsty tricks.

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 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 14 2010 06:34 am
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

Some one needs to put that tramp in her place. I'll just bet that baby aint his. Why else is she trying to delay the paternity test?

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the review. You will have to wait and see :O

 Reviewer: juno Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 30 2010 07:54 pm
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

If Rina is married to football player why does she want Kevin so bad. Her and Sara are going to be in cohoots to break up Kevin and Grace. they don't know who they are messing with.



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 Reviewer: tcarey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 21 2010 06:30 am
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

Please tell that the next chapter will postede ASAP!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. sorry for the length of time between updates.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2010 07:08 pm
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

AWESOME!!!! how did i miss this chapter? more please!!!

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 Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 20 2010 05:18 pm
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

I really enjoy this story.  Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the update

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 14 2010 01:37 am
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

This was a wonderful update. I have to say again how refreshing this story is. I love a woman who loves her man and is willing to stand by him, and up for herself at the sametime. I am so glad that Grace isn't allowing this hateful B**ches to make her doubt Kevin or herself. Bravo to you for giving us such a strong female lead.



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Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2010 07:43 am
Title: Grace and Rina...Enchange words.

Yes, Rina tread carefully cause Grace may look and be all sweet, docile and a lady I am sure she has that don't fuck with me side to chick.

Thank you for the update!  I can't wait for more.



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 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 13 2010 07:36 am


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