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Title: Short Story

Beautiful story with a great lesson.

 Reviewer: Moni Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2017 01:37 pm
Title: Short Story

Very nice feel good story! Good job! Keep writing. :) 

 Reviewer: Trish Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 03 2016 07:11 pm
Title: Short Story

Loved It ... It Was Just So Amazing, Heart-Touching. Beautiful!!! <3

 Reviewer: Justina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 08:27 pm
Title: Short Story

Short and to the point. 

 Reviewer: Annah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 06 2016 10:02 am
Title: Short Story

I really enjoyed this!  The only thing I would change is the words Kendra used for her parents, (mama and daddy).  I was confused for most of the read because I thought she was a young child, I would have introduced her age before the topic of her consception so that the reader isn't confused.  Other than that it was a good read.

 

Thank you  :)

 Reviewer: Kayla Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 12:57 am
Title: Short Story

really is this the whole storyfunny

 Reviewer: shintall Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 26 2015 11:08 am
Title: Short Story

nice story ......

 Reviewer: viki nesh Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 18 2015 05:41 am
Title: Short Story

this was a very good story it was very intersting to know that the yong girl accpeted that her uncle was really her farther.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Makya!

 Reviewer: makya ross Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2014 07:33 pm
Title: Short Story

hi

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the greeting!

 Reviewer: david Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 05 2014 08:28 pm
Title: Short Story

i loved the plot. unique and captiveting too.good stuff there



Author's Response:

Thanks, Elizabeth. I appreciate that a bunch!

 Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 11 2013 02:32 pm
Title: Short Story

This was an awesome story, full of voculary and intent to grap readers attention quickly.



Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 20 2013 02:56 pm
Title: Short Story

wow. very intersting and invigorating. i thoroughly enjoyed this.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading along, Sarah. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

 Reviewer: sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2013 12:41 pm
Title: Short Story

short, sweet and a necessary lesson for some people.

 

I loved this story having been in a short interacial marriage myself that was broken up when the daddy came and brought his daughter home and put an end to things.



Author's Response:

Thanks for sharing some of your own personal testimony with us, Jim. And thanks for leaving a comment on the story.

 

Suprina

 Reviewer: Jim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 16 2012 11:26 am
Title: Short Story




Author's Response:

Thx for reading along with us!

 

Suprina

 Reviewer: Deborah Lovewine Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 13 2012 05:09 am
Title: Short Story

Good one...

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 Reviewer: Aditi Sharma Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 08 2012 08:22 am
Title: Short Story

sweet and emotional :)

always liked happy endings..



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment, Cinder. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

 Reviewer: Cinder Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 07 2011 09:00 am
Title: Short Story

Mmmmmm..... Good Story :)


Author's Response:

Thanks!

 Reviewer: Annoymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 07 2011 02:53 pm
Title: Short Story

That was awesome. It's a good thing that Reeka decided to come clean before Kenny died...I really enjoyed reading it and I totally agree with the moral of the story. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Mizgardenia!

 Reviewer: mizgardenia Signed [Report This]
Date: May 19 2011 02:50 am
Title: Short Story

I had my MAC Computer read me this story.

Author's Response:

So cool! Don't cha just LOVE technology? lol

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Shela Geiger Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 09 2011 11:57 pm
Title: Short Story

Wow Suprina, I finished this story with a smile on my face. I enjoyed this immensely and the only lose end that was left was what happened to Kendra. I would have liked to have seen her walk down the aisle on her father's arm, maybe she carried on the family tradition and fell in love with an 'inappropriate' man of her own just like her mother and grandmother.

That was fun.



Author's Response:

Junebug66, I'm glad that you enjoyed this short read so much. It was my pleasure to write it. As for Kendra, maybe I'll revisit her story when I have more free time.

Thanks for commenting!

Reviewer: Junebug66 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2011 07:28 am
Title: Short Story

I love this story it is so interesting.:)Good Job!

Author's Response: Thanks, Chicklee! I'm thrilled that you enjoyed the story.

 Reviewer: CHICKLEE Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2011 02:30 am
Title: Short Story

For a short story it is good and narrated inteligently.It   could be good material for a complete nvel/

Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying that, Tom! I appreciate your comment!

 Reviewer: tom smith Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 28 2011 11:18 am
Title: Short Story

wowowowow

Author's Response: Thanks!

 Reviewer: cool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 10 2011 11:51 am
Title: Short Story

it is a nice story.moreovr written in a simple language.

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment and the comment!

 Reviewer: brishti Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 22 2010 11:04 am
Title: Short Story

i like this one and the last statement/sentence is very true though the truth hurts it sets u free

Author's Response: So true, Kara! Thanks so much for reading and leaving a comment!

 Reviewer: kara Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 03 2010 02:30 am


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