the story is not something new or unread before...but can go for a quick read..
Author's Response:
Yes, it was definitely meant to be a quick read.
Reviewer: A.M. Anonymous
[Report This]Date: October 19 2010 05:49 pm
mmmmmm
Author's Response: lol. Thanks for the feedback.
Date: August 26 2010 01:00 pm
I READ THIS STORY A WHILE BACK. IS THERE A POSSIBILY OF MAKING THIS STORY A LONGER. i REALLY WANT TO KNOW MORE ABOUT THESE CHARACTERS.
Author's Response:
I would LOVE to extend this tale...just don't have the time right now with my busy schedule. Maybe sometime this fall. Shrugs. We'll see.
Thanks for enjoying this story enough to make such a wonderful request.
Suprina
Reviewer: juno Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 10 2010 12:44 am
Wow short and powerful. I loved this.
Author's Response: Thanks, Junebug66! I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much.
[Report This]Date: May 24 2010 10:02 pm
This is really good. It is written well.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Flicker and Sparkle. :)
Date: December 31 2009 01:13 am
good story!
Post More Soon:]
Author's Response: Thanks for reading along with me. I'll try to get back over here to post during the holidays...bearing no unforeseen circumstances. Reviewer: brookmeade Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 20 2009 08:40 am
Great morality story.
Author's Response: Thanks!
[Report This]Date: August 01 2009 10:57 pm
I like the little story you wrote. Wow all this time your uncle is your father crazy but glad that she able to have a daughter father thing with him most of us not that lucky.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm going to leave this story up on this site.
[Report This]Date: August 01 2009 04:56 am
So, sometimes I read late at nigh when I have the place to myself... finally. I just realized that I read this on TST. Since hanging out over here more recently, I think it only fair to comment here too.
I loved this story. What a sacrifice. However, considering that they met independently, I wouldn't have stayed apart, especially after the true parentage was revealed. They weren't blood relatives or steps previously, which indeed would have been a little creepy.
I believe the relationship may have worked out. I'm glad daddy/uncle Kenny still had a major role in Kendra's life.
Another moral of the story could be that your one true love sometimes cannot be ignored, no matter the circumstance.
I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!
Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time to comment again on this blog. I didn't know how many TST members were also members here like you and I. Had I known, I might not have posted it twice. lol. Also thanks for reposting that great moral addition. Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed
[Report This]Date: June 22 2009 02:22 am
its adorable:]
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch! Reviewer: idiotendenial Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2009 09:03 pm
That was a very interesting story, with a nice twist. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: You're most welcome. Thanks for stopping by to read and comment. Reviewer: zeta Signed
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 03:45 pm
Me like. This was a really sweet story.
Author's Response: Me glad you liked it. Thanks so much for commenting. :)
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 01:58 pm
Nice story and you know you are telling the truth to regard to the moral...tell the truth aobut the paternity because if you don't it won't be a happy ending like your story.
Author's Response: So true. Thanks for leaving a comment. Reviewer: Moni Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 20 2009 06:10 am
Nice story..A lot of family tend to hide the parentage of a child especailly back in my grandmother and mothers time...
Author's Response:
I wrote this story because that's exactly what my mother did to me. In fact, she took the true parentage of my father to the grave and none of her living relatives will utter a word either.
From what little I've been able to glean from reluctant sources, it seems the guy was a real powder keg. Although I'm sure my elders think they're protecting me from the man, none of that brought comfort to me 12 years ago when I was sick and needed to know my father's medical history.
As you can imagine, I ended up having to endure a lot of unnecessary medical tests just to find out what was wrong with me. No worries though. I'm much better now and have finally come to a place of acceptance about the whole unknown-daddy thing.
Thanks for leaving a comment on my story.
Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous [Report This]Date: June 20 2009 05:24 am