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Title: Chapter 14

I really don't like Carol.

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Date: May 28 2017 02:59 pm
Title: Chapter 30

A++++++++++!!

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 20 2017 01:29 pm
Title: Chapter 30

This is a great story honey! I hope you find the inspiration to come back and finish it.

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Date: May 04 2017 06:07 pm
Title: Chapter 30

I would like to read this so can you PLRASE finishe it??? Thanks! I love your other stories! Plaeas finish the Paris one as well!

 

 

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Date: August 12 2013 02:24 am
Title: Chapter 30

Please update this story soon thank you

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Date: November 20 2012 02:19 am
Title: Chapter 11

How sad that he was mugged. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 03:13 am
Title: Chapter 10

Wow Scott and Mackenzie. I hope that she doesn't kiss and tell. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 03:09 am
Title: Chapter 9

Scott really let loose good for him. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 03:05 am
Title: Chapter 8

Mackenzie is wrong for betting whether or not Scott would attend the party.

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Date: July 20 2012 03:00 am
Title: Chapter 7

That was nice if Carol to call Mackenzie's grandmother and Scott allowing her ti lean over him to see the NY skyline. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:54 am
Title: Chapter 6

I can't wait to see what happens at the conference. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:49 am
Title: Chapter 5

Carol is a mess. She might end up being a bad influence on Mackenzie. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:45 am
Title: Chapter 4

Damn Mackenzie kind of lost it on poor Scott. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:40 am
Title: Chapter 3

I felt bad for Scott that he over heard them talking about him. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:35 am
Title: Chapter 2

Poor Mackenzie her male coworkers are rude. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:31 am
Title: Cast

Good cast. Thanks

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Date: July 20 2012 02:27 am
Title: Chapter 30

I absolutely loved this sotry and I would love to read what happens next! Please, add a new chapter. :D

 Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]
Date: October 31 2011 08:34 pm
Title: Chapter 30

please carry one with this ive just reread this story and i love it.please carry onxxx

 Reviewer: lizxx Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 10 2011 08:44 pm
Title: Chapter 30

OMG!!! THis has definetly became my favorite story! Please update soon!

 Reviewer: JOL Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 18 2011 05:01 am
Title: Cast

I was watching Criminal Minds and realized you haven't updated this story in months...Come on now! You cant leave us hanging like that..

Please update this story soon!!!

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Date: June 09 2010 08:24 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Please update!!!

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Date: May 08 2010 12:09 am
Title: Chapter 30

Thanks for a great read.  WOW to bathroom sex at a Gay Bar...go Scott.

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Date: January 25 2010 03:41 am
Title: Chapter 30

Loved the update!

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Date: January 24 2010 08:51 pm
Title: Chapter 30

Glad they were able to get some without interruption! Thanks for the update.

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Date: January 24 2010 07:46 pm
Title: Chapter 30

ty for the update

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Date: January 24 2010 07:15 pm


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