The chemistry is off the hook with Alicia and Jeremy! Regina and Benjamin are so good together, I'm glad he got to put it on her. I wish there were more chapters.
Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 31 2017 01:49 am
Fantastic!!! Want more they are so cute and oh boy that Gina I love her and Ben they crack me up!
Reviewer: meme Signed [Report This]Date: May 11 2015 07:42 am
Very nice second chapter also. Gina is very firey, ready to come to her friend's defense immediately while Alice is very 'think before you speak' kind of person. It may be difficult by some to wonder how these two are friends but it makes sense. The friendship seems very real instead of contrived due to it being in a story where you just want opposites to attach and be best friends. These girls have a background and you showed that with how you have them knowing each other so well and all they have been through that they know the details of their lives. Your writing gives depth to their relationship.Very good job showing where Alice comes from, her background of getting scolarship to attend this very affluent school and showing how she didn't compromise herself to keep some highschool boyfriend. Her inner strenght is very strong and it gives her character dimensions.
Jemrey it would seem, it like the typical rich kid who just wants to piss everyone off. You did a very good job showing that his relationship with his stepmother isn't all a bed of roses and that she gives as good as he gets. He's not the wanna be 'I'm all bad hear me roar' bad boy. While he does have that chip on his shoulder, he his a teenager and this is how they behave mostly. You made his character very real but showed that while he is rebelling against his stepmother, he's not going to be just outrightly rude to her just to get a rise out of his father. You also mentioned that he and his father has a dividing rift between their relationship that seems to keep growing. His character is very interesting and you want to see what he does.
Very nice second chapter...well done.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2014 08:05 am
I glanced at this story and after browsing through the chapters decided to read them thoroughly.
I like your initial chapter/opening. It gives a good feel of who the main female character is and the current status of her life...social, romantic, etc. The dynamic between the friends is also set very nicely and shows not only a togetherness but also a trust and love between two female at such a young age who are so different but extremely accepting and tolerant of each other. They show growing maturity and leave the readers with the feeling that these two women will be best friends for life. Very good opening.
Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Signed [Report This]Date: January 18 2014 07:54 am
Damn.. the sexual tension is killin me! Good story, lovin it.
Reviewer: Jaz Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 10:15 am
You can't leave it as a cliff hanger
Reviewer: simplydijah Signed [Report This]Date: January 16 2014 05:25 am
So intense
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2014 02:46 pm
loving this!
Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2014 08:55 am
Thank you so much for updating this story. I really missed it. Love the chemistry between Alicia and Jeremy. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Karen Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 15 2014 03:46 am
Really glad that you're still writing this; I love your characters. Good way to sneak a kiss in there at the end; perfect timing!
Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2014 03:31 am
Nice update!
Reviewer: ammalicious Signed [Report This]Date: January 15 2014 12:49 am
Yeah an update. Finally they are getting somewhere. I think they need to move a little faster. They are both playing games and need to be direct. Jeremy dud that at the end. I'm so glad I opened this again. I forgot about this story and had to re-read a few chapters to jog my memory. I like this a lot. Please update again soon. I'm facilitating this story and tracking it so I won't lose it again. I can tell they're gonna be good together. Will Loki cause problems later on....hmmm? I'm excited!!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: January 14 2014 10:37 pm
Another wonderful chapter. I cant get enough of these two and your ability to portray them so perfectly so genuinely, staying within character....I cant help but enjoy it on so many levels from the quality of your writing and the story itself. I cant wait to read more. Im just so happy you posted!
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: January 14 2014 09:58 pm
Love this Chapter!
Reviewer: Sade Signed [Report This]Date: November 19 2013 05:39 pm
I love this story so much. I had to keep reading, couldn't rate or comment until I finished the last chapter. Please update soon and often. I'm so into this story oh p.s. you're a really talented writer!!
Author's Response: Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 24 2013 07:46 am
Story is great, glad you're still working on it.
Author's Response: Reviewer: Hikari Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 11:43 pm
Good job
Author's Response:
Thank you very much!
Reviewer: Emy Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 04:24 pm
Cute couple great update, please continue. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks! I like them too!
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 04:12 pm
Please good god woman don't leave for so long again I always enjoy reading this please keep it up
Author's Response:
I won't... I promise! Well unless my muse decides to run off again. She has a bad habit of doing that when I really need her not to! But it seems that she might be here to stay for a while. :) Thank you for sticking with the story. It's very much appreciated.
Reviewer: toni174ever Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 02:10 pm
live Jubilee :-)
Author's Response: Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]
Date: October 21 2013 01:45 pm
I like him...wonder if he knows her.
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 12:43 pm
Yes!Yes!Yes! An update! She's hasnt forgotten!
Thank you for another wonderful update. Cant wait to read more! Cant get enough of these two...and your writing style....very refreshing and satisfying. Its publishing material because its a WHOLE lot better than some of the published work out there!
Author's Response:
I haven't forgotten but sometimes these damn characters just don't want to cooperate and my muse just takes these random vacations without warning. I am so very glad that she has come back! I'm hoping she has come back to stay... at least for a little while!
Thank you for the compliment. It's very much appreciated. :)
Reviewer: amlaamar Anonymous [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 09:41 am
Thank u for the update . . . missed this story!
Author's Response:
Awww thanks for sticking with it and being so patient.
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 07:00 am
I feel like there is a storm of stupidity on the horizon. More please!
Author's Response:
Well you know they are teenagers...they are inately stupid... even the really smart ones! :) LOL!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 06:21 am
I have missed this story. Please dont stay alway too long. I am ready to see how this study session goes !
Author's Response:
I am really going to try to keep the ball rolling on this story and finish it. I think I finally figured out where I want it to go and I think I may now know how i'm going to get there! Thanks for sticking with it!
Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]Date: October 21 2013 06:05 am