Well Ricky you're just not going to learn are you when it comes to Bree and Caesar that your mess starting always always backfires on your dumb a$$ but nawh do your thang boo-boo the fool do yo thang and bring that hussy along with you so she can get checked too. I am just going to set back and enjoy your egg face and whatever else may happen to you and skizzy skank.
Loved the update.
happy writing
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOL!!!!
No other comment is necessary. Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 31/01/11 06:50 am
That sums it up for me. Thank you
Author's Response: I'm glad and you're most welcome!
[Report This]Date: 31/01/11 05:57 am
Alright love me some bree if rae knows whats good for her she will get to stepping. I m finally caught up and read all the updates. This is a great story looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Pokerdiva01, I'm so glad you caught with the rest of us. Yay!
As for Rae, she's about to get what's coming to her real soon.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/01/11 03:10 am
Funny. As. Hell!! Thats alll I gotta say.
Excellent.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked that post so much. tee-hee. Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 12:18 am
If you aske me C man should let her kick the ex wife butt but she is a lady and ladies don't do that lol. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Sometimes ladies do get down like that...but only when they HAVE to. lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 11:33 pm
ricky and rae need to take a long drive somewhere and crash...ooh and blaine must be in the trunk when they do.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!!!
THANKS for the laugh, grumpirah!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 07:10 pm
Why do skinny women always think we big women cant keep a man once they come around. My girl Subrina was on it. Dont mess with people you dont know, You never know whats going on with them that day,
Author's Response:
Sadly, I've met some skinny chicks like that myself. I didn't body slam them, but I wanted to, even though they werent talking about me at the time.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 06:42 pm
The drama is on now. Will bree leave or take Caesar with her?
I hope Caesar handles this properly.
Author's Response:
Keep reading. You'll have the answers to all your questions soon. Things are about to heat up in the story for real.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 30/01/11 11:25 am
Two words: Oh lawdy!
Author's Response:
tee-hee
Thanks for reading along with us!
Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 06:44 am
OH LAWD!!! DRAMA INDEED!!
Author's Response:
And there's even more to come, DirtyDiva.
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Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 05:35 am
someone's delusional.
Author's Response:
True. So true.
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 03:28 am
oh hell naw no that hefa didn't come in that house talking about wifey back girl go some where like to a very hot place called hell lol. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Dang! You done sent the girl to hell that fast? lol.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 03:17 am
omg her mom had a heart attack i hope she alright. i'm glad he told his couisn to leave i don't like ricky he hater. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
No worries about Subrina's mom. I'm gonna work all that out very soon.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 03:15 am
No that heifer didn't just showed up Ceasar's house talking about she's back? Is that bitch on crack? That was so wrong to leave us hanging like that. But I still love this story!!
Author's Response:
Yes, that heifer did. LOL! No worries though. I got sumthing for that chick. Sorry for leaving you hanging, but my offline life calls sometimes.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 30/01/11 02:05 am
how ricky gonna invite rae to the game? jackass know better. it's gonna be poplin.
Author's Response:
Yep, on and popping. lol
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 07:45 pm
go caesar it your birthday that man know how to throw down in that bed room. glad clark quite on ricky he such a big jerk. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Clark is the man! I kinda fell in love with him when he took that stance. tee-hee.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 04:53 am
yeah C man that what i'm talking about put ricky in check. that his house and he can ivited who he wanted and subrina is his girl. he such a hater he need to stop doing that. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Ricky is the worst kinda hater in my book - a kinship hater.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 04:50 am
I hate Ricky! I like Clark though. Smart guy.
Author's Response:
Clark is my dude of the hour. He sees things coming the other guys don't see. Right now it is get out while you can time on the P-Ranch.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 04:29 am
Ricky is such a ass!!! Hateration is alive and well.
Author's Response:
With Ricky, hateration NEVER seems to die.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/01/11 02:43 am
i like how subrina got him to get frank a change with grandfather talk smooth lol thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, she had to play that one real smooth. It was a tricky situation.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 04:08 am
oooooooo these two are just so smooth and cute together. it looks like C mom getting herself a sexy man go mom. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Oh yeah, it's time for Avalon to have her own lovelife up and at 'em. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 04:05 am
hi subrina i really enjoy reading this... u r doing a great job! keep posting...........
Author's Response:
First of all, WOW! You're really from Sri Lanka. I love it!
Secondly, thanks for the encouragement. I will continue to do my best.
Reviewer: shafiqa from srilanka Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 03:52 am
I loved it, Blaine is evil son of gun!!! I want him to pay for every dirty deed that he has ever done. I can't wait to see his face when his plan to tempt Frank doesn't work. I want his face to crack.
Author's Response:
Blaine will pay. No worries about that. He'll pay dearly.
I believe I can fill that face cracking order. lol
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 03:33 am
Freaky little two...hehe.
I hate Blaine.
Author's Response:
lol. I don't like Blaine either.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 03:09 am
blaine is such a greedy selfish little troll.
Author's Response:
Troll? Yep, he is definitely that among other things.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 24/01/11 01:56 am