Short but sweet!!! I think that Avalon and Burt are attracted to each other and I like it. Avalon deserves to have some love. Thank you for the newest chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked that chapter enough to comment. Thx!
Date: 23/01/11 11:47 pm
AWWW they are adorable! I loved it! I am so happy that Avalon is going to find love out of this as well!! :D
Author's Response:
Yeah, Avalon gonna get her romance on too in this story.
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Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/11 08:26 pm
Crap! This is going to be hard when Caesar finds out.
Author's Response:
Yes, VERY hard. I feel sorry for him already.
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Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/11 02:45 am
Poor Subrina. If I was her, I would've cried in like Chapter 12 lmaooo
Author's Response:
Me too, FrenchieJonesy...even though it's hard for me to cry too. lol.
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Reviewer: FrenchieJonesy Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/01/11 02:35 am
LOVE LOVE LOVE the way Ceaser loves Subrina...I know I have already said that but it bears repeating!
I am hoping that the love they have for each other will withstand the lies that she told!
Awesome update! Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
tee-hee. I'm glad you love Caesar's actions so much. I do too.
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Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 11:43 pm
wow i feel for that girl she love this man so much but she scared he wanted love her if he find out the truth. i hope it work out thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Subrina is in a very peculiar situation by having C has her boyfriend on this mission.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 11:28 pm
Ceasar is going to be so hurt, and I hope that he will forgive her Suprina. It will help when he realizes the deal that was brokered for his aunt. SO loving this story.
Author's Response:
Yes, C is gonna be very hurt behind all this. Like I mentioned in the story, it's inevitable now that he has hooked up with Bree. Part of it will be his own fault though for insisting upon a relationship.
Thank for loving the story and commenting!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 08:23 pm
karianne is such a two year old.
Author's Response:
Yellllp!
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 09:17 am
two losers together. ugh!
Author's Response:
Double ugh!! lol
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Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 09:08 am
Excuse my french, but I really hate bitches like Rae! And I dont usually appreciate women being called that, but sometimes, you gotta call a spade, a spade! That's exactly what she is. She's a whore for money, and like the idiot said, she'd do almost anything for it. Ughhh!
Author's Response:
For the record, I can't stand Rae either!
Thanks for being so honest in your comments!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 11:57 pm
oooooooooo i so hate gold digger women. they give us good ones a bad name. ricky is such a hater on his cousin that he go so low to bring his ex wife in the mix. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I figured out something about gold-diggers: They worship things. As such, they will never have any lasting happiness.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 05:56 pm
wow well don't blame her for hate men because what happen to her but she should understand not all men are bad. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
You're right. Not all men are bad.
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Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 05:53 pm
I can't stand that damn Ricky and the hobag Rae needs be slapped back into her momma's womb. Thank you for the update and the earlier post explaining Karianne's major malfunction. This is one of my favorite stories and I thank you for writing it as well as sharing your talent with us readers.
Author's Response:
Rae got hers coming too now that she has hooked up with Ricky for evil. It ain't gonna be pretty.
You're most welcome about that explanation. THANKS for inspiring it.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 06:48 am
Very Very good, although I miss not being able to see other folks comments!!
Author's Response:
Jopatricia, yes, the format is different on this site. But all you have to do to see other folks' comments is to click on the comment # link (it's the link that tells how many comments have been posted for this story). Hope that helps.
Thanks for stopping by!
Reviewer: Jopatricia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 10:00 pm
Karianne is so stupid, how does the rejection of one man turn you off the whole sex? She was lucky she didn't get fired, like she should have been. I am so loving this story thank you the great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for this comment. It really helped me to work out some kinks in the story. Hugs!
Date: 19/01/11 05:42 am
I love this caesar helping her getting thu the whole kay thing and he has his woman back and making sure she ok. the story long lol but it work reading each chapter it get better and better. thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for saying that the story was worth the length. I needed to hear that today. :)
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/01/11 05:33 am
I think she is calling to apologize because she was very infatuaited with her and I don't it turned off that quickly since she was put in check.
I also think that Karianna is big enough to know that she was wrong in trying to sabbatoge the assignment and had gotten to close to Brina.
Then again I could be wrong and she could be calling to dig it in deeper and to also let her know that Leesha was still alive but had been in a coma and that the higher ups knew all about it. That Leesha not only is alive and was in a coma but is awake, recovering and has a son.
:D
Great as always chica. Great as always.
I'm all caught up now I have to wait like everyone else for the next installment. It's all good though
Happy Writing!
Author's Response:
Keep reading you'll see how Miss Thang-Thang does.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/01/11 03:28 am
Great person to depict Burt with none other then my favorite older man Frank Langella. I am sure Ava will be mosted pleased.
Thank you chica for the update. I am almost caught up.
Author's Response:
Frank L is my personal older guy crush. tee-hee. Yep.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/01/11 03:15 am
I was sitting her jumping up and down and clapping my hands like I was special when you came up with the plan to have Burt be A-Plus aka Ava aka Avalon aka Caesar's mom new love interest
I see a match made in heaven already in the works with those two so both mom and son will be getting love interest that are with the FBI only Ava knows where her man came from right off the bat but Caesar had to be lied to even though it was for a good cause and not like Brina setup from jump to deceive him but he was so damn persistant when it came to getting her no matter how hard she tried to resist him.
Girly you know this was a great update but I will say it anyway GREAT UPDATE.
THank you for sharing!
Happy writing!
Author's Response:
Caesar was so persistant and that will be part of Bree's defense when stuff hits the fan. I mean, she really tried to resist him, but the dude just wouldn't stop pursuing her.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 03:04 am
Well aint that a bitch. Karianna has straight lost her mind. Why all the haterade coming to play we needs some more alliances.
Karianna needs a straight a-whipping the kind an ole skool moma/grandmoma gave her children when the were misbehaving.
Great update as always.
Author's Response:
I'm sending the extra alliances as we speak.
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Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 02:45 am
Great update!
Can't say I can think of anything to push me or motivate me past fear haven't come across anything that keeps me paralyzed in a corner or it reoccuring on a regular.
My motivation to push on in anything is my faith and my children.
Happy writing chica and keep up the marvelous work.
Author's Response:
Faith and kids are GREAT motivators! Kudos to you.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 02:22 am
LOL!!!! Those poor poor horses is correct. Bree and Caesar should be a shame of themselves. LOL!!! Then Bree on top of it talking about lets do it again. I lmao on that one and this chapter.
Who gets banned from a horse ranch....Y Bree and Caesar of course. I hate to see when they start making babies and then want to get freaky they are no where quiet lovers so the babies would be at grand parents house on a regular. LOL!!!
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!
Your comment was hilarious. Thanks!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 02:14 am
Karianne is so not going to apologize. She is going to take on last dig. I also feel that she is not done with this case at all.
I hope all ends well.
Author's Response:
Tam14611, I do believe that you are on the right track. Read on to see what happens next.
Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/11 08:52 pm
Ricky just want to be loved. I still don't like him though.
Blaine is a crafty SOB aint he?
Loving the story.
Happy Writing
Author's Response:
You're on point about Ricky. I still don't like him much either. lol
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/01/11 08:06 am
I just love their fire. They are so good together.
So Geoffery came thru for Karianna and Brina it's good he is doing somthing but that still is not going to change where you going when you leave this world playa.
Great update
Happy writing
Author's Response:
I'm feeling their fire too. lol.
Happy Reading!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 18/01/11 07:52 am