Penname: VAL1 [Contact]

Real name: VALERIE

Member Since: 12/07/08

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 142]
Summary:

A Doctor Who/Supernatural Crossover: When Dr. Martha Jones hits a rough patch in her life (her fiancée's been stepping out on her and her confidence in her job performance is waning) she calls on her best friend, The Doctor, to sprint her away, losing herself in promises of far off galaxies and fantastic new worlds. It’s a trip she’s taken before. Only this time, she’s suddenly ripped away from the TARDIS and tossed into a strange car with an even stranger (though admittedly very attractive) man at the wheel, ranting about his missing brother and evil demons. Which was all very ridiculous, because everyone knew that demons weren’t real.

Were they?

Dean Winchester was having a pretty good night for once. He and his brother Sam had killed a nasty demon in record time, and he’d been settling in for an evening of cold beer and hot women. So when his brother disappeared inside some kind of bright light, to say he was irritated would definitely an understatement. He had no idea where Sam was, or how to find him. And now he had some crazy (though very hot) British chick yaking about aliens and time machines, like that stuff was real.

It’s not, is it?



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Dr. Martha Jones
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Horror, Science Fiction , Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Martha/Ten (Doctor Who)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 15
Completed:Yes
Word count: 66449
Read Count: 77024
Published: 01/07/08
Updated: 06/11/08


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Good story Token, but I'd expect nothing less, especially when it comes to our boy Jensen(dean).  It's just I'm not very good when it comes to waiting for updates, you owe us two stories now, Lincoln and Dean...You got some work to do kiddo...lol 

Author's Response:

Hey VAL1,

First off, you're awesome for registering, so glad you see you on The Chamber! 

And I'm so glad you liked this, being as big a Jensen fan as I. I do try to update as fast as possible, but also rotate my stories, so it takes about a week for each one I think. Kinda like the show actually. LOL.

As for Linc, I'm working on that right now, fleshing out the first chapter. It should be posted sometime this week, I promise.

Thanks so much for reading and for the great reveiw!

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed
Date: 12/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 4]
Summary:

One Life to Live: A story about how Love Conquers. This is a one-shot story featuring Evangeline Williamson and Cristian Vega.



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Crave (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5750
Read Count: 689
Published: 10/07/08
Updated: 10/07/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dealing with It

Excellent.......

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed
Date: 12/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

This is a crave story so obviously it is based around the romance of the wonderful couple Christian Vega and Evangeline Williamson.

There will be issues dealing with homosexuality!!! So if you dont like that then you probably wont wanna read this.

 

I hope you all enjoy this story.



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Categories: One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: Crave (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1913
Read Count: 904
Published: 11/07/08
Updated: 11/07/08


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I am a Crave lover, like the story, but I'm a bit through off my the language from Eva...Something I have to get use to.  Please continue...

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed
Date: 12/07/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 171]
Summary:

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Enter into the world of political drama and intrigue as Payton Samuels takes on the job of Director of Media Relations for the campaign of the nation’s golden boy Senator Cameron Marshall. Millionaire playboy and heir to the international fashion conglomerate The House of Marceline, Jared Marcel seeks to win Payton’s affection. Experience the back door deals in Washington…knowing everyone has an angle and no one is what they seem.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 26
Completed:No
Word count: 63247
Read Count: 10950
Published: 07/08/08
Updated: 20/04/09


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 "My luck just took a turn."

Took me two days to catch up on all the chapters of this story, brillant!!! Thers not a character on here that does not come to life...  Loving it, Ms. Winters...lol

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Date: 28/06/09

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 222]
Summary:

Island Interlude is the story of Gabrielle Hall, a young woman who teaches physical education and K.C. Whitfield an architect who comes to the fictional island of St. Sebastian. They meet and sparks fly but K.C. isn't who he seems and Gabrielle must decide if she can live with who he really is.    

island interlude                

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:No
Word count: 97729
Read Count: 235468
Published: 07/05/10
Updated: 01/02/11


Title: Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Glad to see Rielle and KC are back hot and heavy. Glad KC and her dad had their little "chat." But Rielle still needs to tell dad to chill out.  Seems like the one that needs some lovin is Chris, will there be a spark between him and Dani?? Is she even old enough:) Bring on the future in-laws, this should be a hoot...

Author's Response:

Hello VAL1, nothing like make-up nookie. You know Rielle is gonna have a few words for Pops but K.C. came through like a champ. Chris and Danni hmmmm (Yeah she's old enough.) Thanksgiving in Denver will be fun.

Thank you for reading, enjoying and commenting.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 15/01/11

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 132]
Summary:

 

 MY BROTHER’S KEEPER

Twin - One of two offspring born at the same birth; or one of two identical or similar people

Brother - a male who has the same parents as another

Family - Two or more people who share goals and values, have long-term commitments to one another, and reside usually in the same dwelling place

 

Love - A deep, tender, ineffable feeling of affection and solicitude toward a person, such as that arising from kinship, recognition of attractive qualities, or a sense of underlying oneness. A feeling of intense desire and attraction toward a person with whom one is disposed to make a pair 

AM I MY BROTHER’S KEEPER?  



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 43918
Read Count: 28116
Published: 19/08/10
Updated: 19/02/11


Title: Chapter 9: A/N - Not a Chapter

Ooh Kelly, Im so sorry to hear that some stupid bastards violated you and your home. When I finally saw MBK in most recent, I was soooo elated with an update, but of course got your horrid news instead. Please do re-group and be safe, come back strong. Thanks for saying you won't give up on these marvelous characters. We won't give up hope, that those jackasses will be caught. Val1

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed
Date: 20/02/11

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Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 96]
Summary:

When Carla Jones makes a gruesome discovery at her neighbour's house one evening, life as she knows it takes a dramatic and unexpected turn. A modern retelling of Little Red Riding Hood.



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Categories: Original Fiction, Miscellaneous
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Fantasy, Horror, Mystery, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Ostrander
Chapters: 24
Completed:Yes
Word count: 76580
Read Count: 30235
Published: 06/02/11
Updated: 16/02/11


Title: Chapter 2: Once Upon A Time...

OMG, what have you gotten us into, girlfriend! You got me in a trance already. Definately an eye opener...

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/11

Title: Chapter 4: A Wolfish Plan...

Greeat chapters, alot of questions to be answered. Why granny? I thought wolves were loyal to the pack. Whose to be Carla's mate? :)

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/11

Title: Chapter 12: The Danger Beside You...part III

This is a great story, you keep us right on the edge.. Carla is definately interested. Kyle knows that Jason is interested in Carla, but Jason is holding back, not even letting her touch him. My guess is that he doesn't want his scent on her, in fear that Isaac will know that he's there. How long can this go on, it's killing us. lol AS far as Mr. Weissman, is he an elder?? Hmmm, inquring minds want to know, by the way how about Lisa and Kyle? Is she his match? I uess i have to stay tuned....:)

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 12/02/11

Title: Chapter 24: Red...

OMG, what a fantastic ending....Even though I was hoping for a happily ever after(the romantic in me), this was the only ending that really fit.  Somehow I am hoping and waiting that the next story line will end up happy for the both of them "together." Oh, and as far as Kyle, is his mate, anyone that Carla may know...hint, hint:) Pleaase hurry with your next story, anxiously waiting!  BRAVO...VAL1

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/02/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

Armed with binoculars and a view from his bay window, Hollywood bad boy Knox Beau Bloom stakes out his new MILF neighbor as she spends hot afternoons and warm evenings bent over in Daisy Dukes weeding wayward flowerbeds with little success.  Watching her is about the most exciting thing Knox has experienced while on community service lock down in Waterfall, Arizona on trumped up drug charges.  Lucinda “Lucy” Esperanza has moved to Waterfall with Ally Grace, her too wise nine-year-old daughter, to start over after a past that she is not proud of and a bad marriage and divorce from one of the NBA’s most revered players.  She had heard good things about Waterfall and that is what she needed, good things to happen.


Friendship, love and lust blooms, not necessarily in that order, when Knox decides to act as the neighborhood Welcome Wagon by greeting her with a confident swagger, sexy smile, mesmerizing eyes ocean blue eyes, and cold bottled water.


 


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 4513
Read Count: 4388
Published: 30/03/11
Updated: 05/04/11


Title: Chapter 4: Knox and His BDD

Wow girl, you didn't play around! You got right to the nitty gritty...lol  Homeboy is really full of himself. I think homegirl will have to bring him down a peg or two. But thank you so much for including one of my most favorite and talented actors, Andy Whitfield, he's just gorgeous, it"s those eyes....You must have watched SPARTACUS... Please keep writing on this one.



Author's Response:

You know I spent about three Saturdays in a row rewatching the entire series. I luuuurrrrvvved it! And yes, Andy is just freaking gorgeous to me and he will be missed by many and i hope he has fullty recovered. Watched GOTA,good to know Crixus's backstory and hopefully Gannicus can make an appearance. note the cast  image  manu bennett as Sean Roberts. 

I'll tell you secret, she takes him down, but he builds her up. Lucy has some issues and right now I doing  a rewrite on her because she was beginning to irriate me. Traveling tomorrow so I will have time to write and I will be able to unleash Luce.

Thanks and have a super day.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 02/04/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 385]
Summary:

FullBloom2--Banner

 

Tabby and Jace met for the first time at a family member's wedding and decided to take advantage of the company and island scenery. What they didn't expect is that their paths have crossed before. It's funny how the past can come full circle.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

Full Bloom is an original work of fiction, please do not post or copy this story to any other websites.   

Full Bloom © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 5
Completed:Yes
Word count: 11685
Read Count: 102568
Published: 02/07/11
Updated: 10/07/17


Title: Full Bloom

Ooooh Eliza, what have you gone and done?! You have managed to create a story that can go to soo many place. Two families that have protected their love ones from pain and deceit. But the truth is like water, it always finds a way out. I understand the reasoning behind the secret, but how will Tabby and Jace take it when they find out that their lives are forever bound by hurt and deception. Will you give Jace's backstory? Can't wait to see how you waeve this drama. Please don't abandon it or us. EXCELLANT...



Author's Response:

Don't worry I won't abandon it or ya'll. I'm working on the next couple of chapters and also I want to test my pen into horror alittle bit. But don't worry FULL BLOOM is 1st priority. I'm thinking about doing a little backstory on Jace I just don't know where to start on that one. I'm so glad that you like the crazy-crazy drama. Family will go far and beyond to protect their love ones. Thanks!!

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/07/11

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thank you. thank you for using Alex O'loughlin for your male lead. He is soo gorgeous, and he does have the sexiest bowlegged walk and thick eyelashes. It's about time one of our brillant writters introduce this sexy Aussie to some fine chocolate... Great start Elizablu. Keep it comin...lol If you do decide to use Alex again, his great Aussie accent would be a plus...Read you soon...



Author's Response:

You are very welcome. I fell in love with him when I first saw Moonlight. I'm happy that you like the story so far.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/07/11

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Divide and Conquer

 

 

 

 

 

Desire and obsession has a way of ensnaring the unsuspecting, violently it consumes the heart and once it’s taken over, clouding every rational decision it stops at nothing till it’s destroyed everything and everyone in its path.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 3185
Read Count: 2290
Published: 17/07/11
Updated: 17/07/11


Title: Chapter 2: The Son of Sir Christian Epstein

Excellent, first chapter. Great description of the main characters and their past. Now that you set up that great background, can't wait to see what the future of this couple will be...I believe in strong women, mentally challenging their male counterpart. Kayla will do well. Please update soon.

Reviewer: VAL1 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17/07/11