Penname: TokenBlackGirl [Contact]

Real name: Angel

Member Since: 10/06/08

Membership status: Member

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Aspiring writer

Voracious reader


Television addict

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Please Note: All previous original fiction stories have been deleted and are currently being revised. 


 





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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Bonnie and RJ

Bonnie McKechnie has been back in Oakdale a few months when word that James Stenbeck is returning gets out, via his new head man, Llandview's RJ Gannon. With Bonnie's cousin, Dallas and Margo Hughes, determined to put James Stenbeck under the jail, they do not refuse Bonnie's offer to use RJ's attraction to the McKechnie heiress to get information. But one afternoon, Bonnie finds herself surprised by the spell of passion RJ casts upon her...



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie, Jessica Griffin
Classification: Crossover
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 26347
Read Count: 1557
Published: 01/09/08
Updated: 19/04/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

God, this story keeps getting better and better. Loved the amnesia perfume (how do you come up with this fantastic stuff?) and the hot pole loving. This story is amazing, I'm always excited when you update.

Looking forward to the next one. :)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Summary: Ryan is the lead vocalist of a K-Pop band called Rising Dragons. He and the band has come to America to promote their new album -- and hopefully become true international icons. Although the band is so close to reaching Ryan’s dream of breaking into American mainstream he is contemplating whether or not to stay in the band because of his band mate and leader Sang-Mun. Along the way of discovering what he really wants Ryan meets Devon, a young waitress at a local diner.

Warning: The Music Video/Trailer contains some spoilers for Rising Dragon 1&2

Beta-ed by greatodinsraven



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10133
Read Count: 1619
Published: 04/09/08
Updated: 16/12/08


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I really loved this chapter. The destiny conversation and then her meeting him again was really sweet, they're already so cute together to me. And Ryan's fight with his bandmate was very well written, so much conflict there that I'm sure will only get worse as time goes on.

This is a great story, I'm so glad you updated. :)



Author's Response: Thanks you so much. You have no idea how much your reviews help my confidence when writing.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

what happens when a one night stand becomes somthing more? Lucas is a man of many talents and a dark past that could make or break him. He keeps his distance from others not allowing anyone to get close to him. That was until Bea appeared calling out to somthing inside of him. He wont stop till she is his armed with determination and a killer smile. Can her love save him?

Or will she run?

Betaed by:LOVEMBOTH



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 22575
Read Count: 56306
Published: 06/09/08
Updated: 27/11/09


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

You're doing a wonderful job with this story. Bea's a great character, and she and Lucas are very, very hot, excellent work!

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great update! Keep them coming, okay? :)

Author's Response: Can do.^-^

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/10/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 18]
Summary:

 AJ

All My Children: Angie/Jessie

Twenty years ago Pine Valley was led to believe that Jesse Hubbard died in the line of duty. Until that faithful day he returned to Pine Valley and the love of his life Angela Hubbard. Where was Jessie all this time? And why didn’t he return to his family sooner?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, All My Children
Characters: Angie Hubbard
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Jessie/Angie (All My Children)
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 1542
Read Count: 8349
Published: 07/09/08
Updated: 13/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Intro

This is a great start, I love it!  I'm so excited that you posted this, can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. These two are my all time fave couple on any show and I love writing for them in fanfic. Hoping to update soon!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Story Teller

Glad you updated!

So Angie too the whole other woman thing pretty well. Not sure how I would feel if my husband was missing all those years and seeing someone else. But she was really mature about it, which was good. And I'm sure she wasn't alone the whole time either.

Can't wait to hear her story.



Author's Response: Thanks for reviewin!. I wanted her to be totally understanding to what he went through. Next up, her turn:)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/08

Title: Chapter 3: Summer Nights

Yay! So glad you updated, I was just thinking about this story. Jessie and Angie are so cute together, and I love him getting jealous about her past. And that reveal at the end was awesome, I nice little cliffhanger you have there.

Thanks for the great read, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I'm sorry it took forever to post. I will totally try to post the update sooner!

I adore this couple:) 

 Thanks Again! 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/10/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Emory Nichols is in danger due to her father finding a cure to one of man's deadliest diseases. Kieran Villegas and his order of Shiyan Knights are placed to protect Emory and her friend.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 31768
Read Count: 45269
Published: 08/09/08
Updated: 08/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Desperately trying to catch up with my reading and that includes all the stories you've added. But I must say this just might be my favorite, what an excellent opening chapter. I love the characters already and the tone is so intense, I just know I'm going to  love this. :)

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/09/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 47]
Summary:

 

In a world where demons are the good guys and human's are the enemy a young prince must protect his mate from the enemies that wish to destroy him by killing her.Will he be able to hold on to her once she discovers what he is?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 10942
Read Count: 20644
Published: 13/09/08
Updated: 10/04/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was such a cool set up to what I think is going to be an awesome story. I loved the fight scene at the begining and I can't wait for Kenjara to find his Jennifer, something tells me that's gonna be pretty entertaining.

Awesome work Quania!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Christopher Waters recently learned about his adoption when his biological mother died. She left behind a mysterious book that belonged to his father. Since the day he received it strange things begin to happen.   



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Romance, Science Fiction
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Graphic Violence, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10513
Read Count: 1719
Published: 13/09/08
Updated: 20/11/08


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

And I'm hooked. Great begining and that red glow eye thing at the end was hella creepy, I loved it!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: February 10th, 2008

I really liked the Charlene/Maxine reveal, that was nicely done. And Christopher as so much more to worry about than he knows, I feel sorry for him though. It seems like everyone around him insists on keeping him in the dark. Can't see how that was a good thing if he's in danger right now.

Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/09/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 55]
Summary:

 

No one could say that Rick Lawrence was a humble man. Even as a child he knew of his superior looks and had no problem telling his classmates of that fact. Now as a 28 year old man he makes a bet with his friend that he can bed famous model K. Jones. Too bad K. Jones is Karma Jones, an old classmate that he tormented. Now he finds himself as Karma’s B***h.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 10266
Read Count: 2921
Published: 19/09/08
Updated: 18/01/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I know I said this on TST, but I'll say it again. This was such a great start and I'm very happy you posted this on the site two. You rock Quania, great job!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/09/08

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Good lord, I can't wait for K. and Rick to go toe to toe, that's gonna be pretty damn entertaining. Once again, I love how you use flashbacks in this story, loving this story period really. :)

Author's Response: There meeting will be...interesting to say the least.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/09/08

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 19]
Summary:

paul bons

 

As The World Turns FanFic:  Bonnie has been through a traumatic experience and Paul Ryan is there to help her every step of the way.



Table of Contents
Categories: As the World Turns, Daytime Television
Characters: Bonnie McKechnie
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 849
Read Count: 2583
Published: 20/09/08
Updated: 20/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Rain Dance

This was great Ash, I'm so glad you posted this. I love the friendship between the characters, and I may be crazy but I feel like there's a hint of more between them. Which would be nice I think.:)

Excellent work!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing TBG!!!

I really like the friendship between them. I only wished that ATWA stuck with it.

With the old Paul and Bonnie, I always saw a hint of something more but you know daytime...

I'm really glad you enjoyed it!

thanks again. 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/09/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Todd and Evangeline duel about their ex's and continue to evade (Evangeline mostly) their feelings for each other.

 



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Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: None
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 673
Read Count: 2605
Published: 29/09/08
Updated: 29/09/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good lord, that was fantastic. I loved it, you captured Todd in such a facinating way, and your descriptions of that moment were facinating.

I hope there's more where that came from. :)



Author's Response:

Comments from one of my favorite authors, is worth the pain of the 3 or 4 rewrites it took to make this presentable.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/09/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 10]
Summary: It was a beautiful white house, one that held the memory of her gazing into his peircing green eyes.

Table of Contents
Categories: Music, Miscellaneous
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2606
Read Count: 2858
Published: 10/10/08
Updated: 10/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was really great, I love your choice of song for this fic. The story was sweet and sad all at once, and so relatable I think. I especially loved the last lines, wonderful endng to an awesome story.

Looking foward to more stories from you TwoAwesome!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 49]
Summary:

I’ve been watching him for two weeks now. He’s beautiful, absolutely, undeniably, beautiful. He’s about 6’1, with a hard, but lean and athletic body. His short haircut fits his soft but chiseled features and that smile. Don’t get me started on that smile. Every time I see it, it sends a shiver right down my spine and I almost have to sit down to regain my composure. Then, there are the lips. Those pretty pink lips. They are so alluring that it would make God himself take off a Sunday afternoon just to admire them. I think that’s what I like about him most, his lips.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Alternate Universe
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 9850
Read Count: 3670
Published: 14/10/08
Updated: 30/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: one

This was a great start, I loved the convo with Justin, it was cute, even though Ashlynn freaked out a bit a the end. Let's hope she calms down a bit before she talks to him again. And what's the deal with Tony, can't wait to see what that's all about.

Thanks for posting this, looking foward to the next chapter. :)



Author's Response: Tony's a very interesting character, he comes in a little later in the story. Thank you for reading and I'm glad that you liked it so much!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/10/08

Title: Chapter 3: three

I think I just had an orgasm and there was nothing remotely sexual about what just happened. All he did was push against me and here I am ready to rip off my clothes and tell him to just take me on the lawn.

This made me LOL, it was very cute. Love how spastic she is around him, very entertaining. Great update, looking forward to the next one. :)



Author's Response: that's one of my favorite parts as well. Ashlynn can get really squirmy when she's nervous. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/08

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

the sabbatarian chronicles

 

Kendra Young is a vampire slayer.  She hasn't ever given much thought to it, it's just what she does.  It's only when the people she cares about start dying that the stakes become personal.

This is my late as heck response to TBG's Chamber Character Challenge.  It's also an IMPORTANT supplement to my Before Nightrise story.  You know two birds, one stone and all of that!



Table of Contents
Categories: Primetime Television
Characters: Kendra Young, Layla Williamson
Classification: Alternate Universe, Crossover, Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Horror
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Character Death, Dark Fic
Challenges: Chamber Character Challenge
Series: When Night is Falling
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5931
Read Count: 8782
Published: 14/10/08
Updated: 14/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: Character Pics

Woo, hoo Kendra fic! Kendra fic!

*Dances around excitedly*

Thank you for this, and thanks for answering the challenge. :)



Author's Response: It was a long time coming I wish I was happier with the outcome but thanks for the support!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/10/08

Title: Chapter 2: Prologue

This was a great start, I loved the convo between Giles and Travers. And the Buffy mention was very cool, loved that. :)

Ummm.....did you just kill Giles? *weeps pathetically* :(



Author's Response: I did kill Giles hehehe.  I'm not a Buffy expert but even though it's an extention of Before Nightrise I couldn't write a Kendra fic without trying to stay at least somewhat true to Buffy folklore.  Thanks for the review and the stars!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/10/08

Title: Chapter 3: Story

Excellent job greatodin, loved the Buffy mentions of course, though I'm sad so many had to die. The banter between Kendra and Layla was very cute, and the backstory was great as well, very well done.  I can't wait to see how this ties into the overall series. Great work all around :)

Author's Response: Thank you!  Yeah a lot of people had to die but no worries the Buffy peeps live on in reruns hehehe.  The tie in is coming in the next couple of chapters.  Thanks for the review and stars and reading!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/10/08

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Banner

It didn’t happen all at once. There were sounds and light—voices and then nothing.



Table of Contents
Categories: Daytime Television, One Life to Live
Characters: Evangeline Williamson
Classification: Off Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Tangeline (One Life to Live)
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language
Series: Tangie Teases
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1079
Read Count: 3463
Published: 16/10/08
Updated: 16/10/08


Title: Chapter 1: What She Didn't Say

Lord, I kind of hate you for writing this because it reminds me how horrible soaps are right now. The can be so much more, they could be this, and they just--don't. I loved this, the comparisons of her interactions with the people in her life, how they each faded away from her a bit. And the last person, perhaps the one that mattered most was Todd, and the only one she was able to ask to stay. Even though she probably didn't have to.

This was really great Black, loved it. More one shots from you please?



Author's Response: Hey Token. Thanks for reading. I'm with you on the state of soaps right now.  A while ago it would be a no brainer for this type of story, but I honestly feel like they've lost focus on what it was that made them watchable in the first place.  And yeah, I wanted to contrast how the others drifted away, which was a very human reaction to seeing someone you care about in pain, to Todd's promise to stay with her.  What can I say--I love my couple.  Thanks for the review. Much appreciated.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 15]
Summary:

 

Carrie Oakes, a recent college graduate, traveled across the world to runaway from her quarter-life crisis and anti-social behavior. In Japan, she found freedom and a eventful social life but that only lasted so long. Now, almost a year later she is back where she started except her boyfriend cheated on her and her new love interest is still in high school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 6646
Read Count: 1652
Published: 17/10/08
Updated: 02/12/09


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, I'm in. This was a great start, and I already like Carrie a lot. I can't wait to read more. :)



Author's Response: Thanks. Your reviews always get me excited about writing the next chapter.

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 16]
Summary:

metempsychosis

me·tem·psy·cho·sis

1. the passage of a soul from one body to another.

2. the rebirth of the soul at death in another body, either human or animal. Cf. creationism. - metempsychic, metempsychosic, metempsychosical, adj.

This is my response to the grindhouse fiction challenge.

Banner awesomeness provided by idjunkie woo hoo!



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Horror, Slash, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Chamber Grindhouse Challenge
Series: The Chamber Grindhouse
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9930
Read Count: 1581
Published: 18/10/08
Updated: 18/10/08


Title: Chapter 2: Story

This was so, so good. Scary, sexy, sad....just...everything. I loved the interplay between Nathan and Rachel, and her slowly going insane, it was hauntingly creepy. And your writing was top notch, you always blow me away, but even more so with this, I loved it. Thanks so much for posting this Greatodin, loved every word!

Author's Response: Thanks TBG I'm so glad you liked it!  This just started coming to me and it felt really good writing it, better than anything I've done in a while so I'm pleased that it's gone over so well.  Seems we all have a certain weakspot for the literary psychopath and I had so much fun writing Nathan.  Thanks for reading, the stars and the review!

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/10/08

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 271]
Summary:

This is a story about a couple who wants to have a child. They will have to use a surrogate to have this baby. The woman they selected is a college graduate who wants to go to Law school. She sees this as a an excellent financial opportunity. She figures the couple gets the baby and she will get her Law degree, however, fate will effect all of their lives.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 34
Completed:No
Word count: 39835
Read Count: 30966
Published: 20/10/08
Updated: 10/03/11


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Picking and Choosing

Wow, this is heavy stuff. Very emotional story, but I'm enjoying it so far. Hope you update again soon. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the feedback. pokerdiva01

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/08